TS(THREE SHOT)-FOREVER TOGETHER PT. 3[A](LAST)PG89

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@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: shivi.10rocks
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omg khushi dead??
i wshd they could spend one day together
but destiny had some other plans

that do jism ek jaan was amazng

nd d endng when all three of them were together was too emotional
finally they were together forever

thanks for ur comment :)

i did not plan for them to die.. but i had other things happening.. so i ended it on a sad note.

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: momo121

thanks for ur comment :)
i did not plan for them to die.. but i had other thingshappening.. so i ended it on a sad note.

but d ending u gave covered it all

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nawwal

@nawwal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

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ana-twilight

@ana-twilight

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

omg tis is so sad 😭..
but at last they are tgt as a happy family..
an amazin update..

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SanzforSush

@SanzforSush

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Awww so sad...but den all of dem Forever Together!!!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

I was remembering just these lines while the last part ended.. "kahiin toh hogi woh duniya jahan tu mere paas hai"

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Maria

@Maria_C

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Omg! that was such a emotional ending!

What a story!

was a little short tho, but an magnificent ending😃

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: momo121

aww! thanks for ur comment! :D
lol nai yar im not kathor dil.. its just that i have things goin on my life.. and i just had no idea on how to end it on a happy note.. u get what i mean?
lol now days im toooemotional and i can write like this to.. happy stories are not coming to my mind no more..😲
and thank again for ur comment shinnie :D
and its my pleasure for sharing this story on IF.. without u guys.. my story is nothing.

yes dear,i know..
and the ending is well justified..
very well packed.. 👏

too emotional,too cute..
all are proud to read this ARSHI fiction.. 😊

hats off.. 🤗