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Posted: 12 years ago
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So guyz me and Ambuja are here with the Chapter 1 of our SS. Hope you guyz like it. and ya, the 1st chapter is really random but we promise you that you are surely gonna love our further chapters.anyways i guess i shall stop talking and better post the chapter. but before posting, i would like to thank the following ppl who read our SS and liked it s well... thank you soo much. you dont know what this means to us...
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CHAPTER 1



guyz we take it from the clinic.

Sharon swayam were busy enveloped in each others arms when suddenly they hear something

"Ahem Ahem" the gang clears their throats

they notice the gang and immediately leave each other.

They all stare at each other and

Everyone starts coughing.

"Wah Wah, kya baat hai" the boys start to shout

Rey gives them a deadly glare which makes them all shut up also leading to akward silence in the room.

Rey decides to break the silence.

"Guyz I guess let the girls be with Sharon and hum bahar inka wait kar sakte hain. What say guyz?" rey asks the boys

"Bhai tu kabhi galat ho sakta hai " Vicky answers

"so girls please jitna jaldi ho sake bahar aa jana" rey tells the girl and with this all the boys start moving outside

before going out swayam looks at Sharon

* look look hawa hawa *

and soon he moves out. The boys were waiting for the girls and were getting bored. Vicky, nil , bharat and amar look at each other and gives the thump up sign. Now they all go towards swayam who was waiting for the girls in a corner.

"Aaj kal toh swayam ke pankh nikal aaya hain. Dekha kaise kudh raha tha Sharon se gale milne ke baad" bharat says

"Haan le bhai, yeh toh ina kus lag laha tha " exclaims amar

Baat kya hai bhai" nilesh asks in his naughty tone.

Guyz aisa kuch nahin hai, its just that.." swayam was speaking when he is cut in between by Vicky

Ab tu apne behude bahane toh mat dey kamsekum" Vicky answers

Meanwhile in the clinic

"So bha..Sharon aap kaisa feel kar rahi hai ab" taani asks

"I am fine now taani" Sharon answers

"neha was worrying" neha tells sharon

"chill babes, I am totally fine now"Sharon assures neha.

'waise tumhara aur swayam hug, unbelievable' rinni says in the cutest manner ever.

"shut upp rinni, ek toh Sharon is already unwell upar sey tumhare yeh stupid comments" simmi mutters in rinnis ear

rinni still having the confused expression on her face. Meanwhile Sharon was blushing when she heard rinni say about the hug. It reminded her of one the most special moments of her life

the blush didn't get unnoticed by simme and she told all the girls to look at Sharon through actions who was still buzy cherishing the moment she and swayam just shared.

"Neha thinking we go out. boyz waiting must be." neha reminded them.this got sharon out of her reverie.

Mujhe lagta hai neha right hai, boys wait kar rahe honge" taani said

Lets go guyz" Sharon exclaimed

The girls move out and spot the guyz.

The guyz were teasing swayam and was feeling him like a girl. The girls had a shocked expression on their faces

BOYS" they shout

At that moment They all stand in a straight line with hands behind their backs.

"The results for the dance camp will be announced in 10 minutes. Everyone to assemble near the stage" they all hear the announcement and are now excited.

Rey comes running towards them.

So guyz are you ready. Lets hope for the best!

And they all shout YES in UNISON!!!


so guyz i know a very pakau chapter and as well a pretty boring one. bt starting thi yaar. anywayz guyz wait for the 2nd chapter. i am sure you will like it. i am ready for the criticism , chappals and tomatoes. bt if u like it dont forget to hit the like tab. and please comment. they are the only source of our encouragement.

THE NEXT CHAPTER AFTER 25+ LIKES AND ON PAGE 15. SO SPAMMING QUEENS GET TO WORK!!!

Edited by swaron09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res😊

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Yayy 1st comment on 1st chap *dances*

Ambuja and Rishita, awesome chapter 1 . I loved reading it , though I wish it would have been longer😭

I loved how the boy's were teasing Swayam and how Sharon considered it a very special memory😳

Great update. Do update soon! And PM me!!

PS. - I loved how u used Neha's style of speaking in it. It was damn funny😆

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for aruba
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kuch zyada hi extra chotu update tha
next tym bht bara wala chahye
coming to update
it was good
sharon all blushy blushy...loved it
bechare swaron the gang teased them
waiting for next
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res for sadiya
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Awesome update
Boys teasing swaron n on the other hand sharon all blushy blushy...:p
Not fair itna chindi update
Update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hiee

pehle toh sorry for late comment
the character sketch was awesome 😊
waiting to see how shivam n aashi will cause a problem
now coming to the 1st chapter
itna chota update 😭
awww the swaron hug was sooo cute
the gang came n disturbed their moment 😡
but before leaving each other their LLHH moment was nice
boys teasing swayam and girls teasing sharon😆
ab jaldi continue karogi toh lamba comment karungi😉
and thanks for the res rishita
n thanx for the pm 😃
Edited by swaron09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear...awesome update... like the way gang was teasing Swaron...Blushy blushy Sharon was cute...this update was awesome blossom...thnkx for the PM and please update chapter 2 soon and please do PM me when update...⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally you update !!!😛
Here too people have to barge in when swaron are hugging ( never forgave that doc till now who made them break hug in episode 😆)
Lets see what happens next !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapi 1 ws nice...luvd it...boys teasing swayam ...hehe..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol . . . . Gang saw them hugging each other 😉

ye boys to hai hi crazy,,, teasing toh inka favourite timepass hai 🤣

sharon aise blush karegi to inka secret jaldi hi out ho jayega 😛

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