Swaron - MUs To Commitment ||Continued - Page 8

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter

so u did finally update. the look look hawa hawa always makes me giggle but really wasnt this chap a bit small !! just asking and aaargg u writers here on IF are very demanding 😛

yes i also request the spamming queens to spam here

wow...awesum work!!
do write more!!
thanks for the pm and do continue to do so!!

i loved it...swaron bechaarey phass gaye...gang teasing them...and sharon blushing hard remembering their hug moment...wow...cute...thnaks for the PM...looking forward for the next update...

great update..thnx for the pm!

Chap 1 was nice ...
Hug nd its after effects..
Pls pm me next tym u update

hello guyzz v r bck wid part..
though this part hd to b on page 15..bt v r updating it..cauz its too long..*disappointed*..
nxt tym this nt done

v didnt rember every1 dance form..of dance camp so fw r changed..

this ws a random one...so plz bear with all d errors nd gramatical mistakes<>..nw let me stp..nd here it goes..

PART-2
Rey came running towards them..and said
Guyzz i knw v all r nervous..so lets hold each others hand...to feel unity and strength..
Yes i think rey is rite...aur guyzz hume se chahe jo bhi jeete...v vl be their to support each other...said sharon
simmi who was standing in between swayam and sharon..giving sharon a teasing look..
Moved frm their nd went beside rinni..and said chalo now lets hold each others hand...
This made sharon blush very hard..and ofcourse.this dint went unnoticed by all..
Nd neil and vicky gave each other another look and smirked..
And as soon as swayams hand touched sharon..a shiver escaped thrgh her body...making sharon blushing harder..
Swayam..leaned towards her ear nd said...sharon itna bhi blush mat karo...this lead..d shades of her cheeks getting darker..
So guyzz hw r u all feeling...?? I hv the results in my hand..announced d anchor...
So lets strt ..
With freestyle boys..
And d winner is...Swayam shekhawat...
All d lousians were too happy...nd startd hugging swayam...a tear of happiness rolled dwn..frm sharons eye...she ws to hppy fr swayam..nd ws waiting fr hr turn to hug swayam..nd thn without bothering of evryone's presence..she hugged swayam tightly...nd ws lost in her own thghts..nd didnt leave swayam...
And there ws a announcement...Mr.swayam cn v have u on stage plz.excpt sharon evryone had heard it..swayam ws standing hlples..though vry hppy..sharon hugging him..rey went near his best buddies..nd said sharon in his ears..sharon swayam ko stage pe jana hai...
This sentence brght sharon back..nd she immediately left swayam...
Sharon was embarrsed on her act..though their was a blush on het face
swayam reached the stage..nd gave sharon a romantic smile..
The winner for lyrical hip hop boys is...
Reyaansh singhania..
This made sharon jump frm her place...
Her love nd best frnd bth were the natinal champion...nd thn rey was pulled in a grp hug..
The winner fr contempary is...
All lousians started chantinning vicky's name...
and d winner is...
rohan bose...every turned towards vicky..and started to console him...bt he ws feeling isolated
bt vicky wsn and fell on earth...bt thn sharon reminded him their promise...evryone wil support each othr..nd vil nt become disheartn...vicky cheerfully stood up..and said mai nhi jeetha toh kya hota hai...mere friends toh jeethe...nd waise bhi Dostii is my lyf..
the winner fr b-boying is...
Bharat frm st.louis...
agn their was a wave of happiness amg d grp
the winner of hip hop is..
neil sumwhr had a feeling tht he is nt gonna win...nt because he was nt gd bt becauz...of d incidnt wd judge..
nd d winner is ... rishabh jain..
neil felt disappointd...bt didnt react mch...
the winner of locking and popping is...
amar...agn a breeze of joy nd excitemnt passed...
rinni hugged amar...nd he went on stage nd stood beside bharat...
so nw girls gt ready..
so lets start with freestyle girls..nd the winner is...
neha...aftr celebrations dwn stage...she went up to collect her trophy..
the winner for belly dancing is...Simmi...sharon nd rinni pulled her into a hug...
nd nw last but nt d least winner fr hip hop girls is...
ok so here v hav tie...
ths made rinni and sharon..vry hppy..
and d winners are..
rinni...she jumped and gv sharon a hug..nd wnt to stage..
nd othr winnner is...


richa sharma...
nd several tears rolled dwn her eyes...nt becauz she didnt win...bt becauz..she ws nt able to keep swayam promise..nd ths ws witnessed by ful team..stndng on stage...nd also neil nd vicky..
vicky reminded hm her own words...nd rst evryone came dwn..
she looked in swayam eye's...wch wer telling her nt to cry...nd atleast she participated..thgh she was nt wel...
hw cn she deny to those eyes...so she rejoiced in evryones happiness...
thn suddenly neha's phn rang..it showed vishakha calling..

precap:

neha thinking d same vishakha,if v vr nt disqaulified..thn weaklings winning d footloose...

so guyzz hw ws it?? bad...ready fr all criticsm..tomatoes chappals
but if u lykd..do hit d like tab..
nd leave ur precious cmmnts thy r really inspiring..
nw nxt update nt before pg22...

Res

Awesome update
Good to see more winners from louisans.Ye kya ho raha hai sabka samne hug ahem ahem.Simmi did a great job beech me se hat gayi.Prexap is a bit scary.Don't want another weakling vs dazzler
Update next part soon