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Khamoshi''''.Lakin kab tak''''.
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Sia: daadii'..iii'''

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Daadi: aa gye aap dono

Maan: ji

Daadi mein study room mein jar ha hu

Daadi: hmm

Hum apki coffee ke liye nakul ko kh dete hai

Maan: hmm

Aur ha daadimaa

Daadi: khiye bte

Maan: daadimaa ' Dinner pe aaj kuch log aa rhe hai

He goes'.

Daadi: dekha tumhare papa puri baat bhi nhi khte

Aur chle gye'

Sia held her palm and said : daadi' mein btati hu

Sia: daadi aaj mein park mein photo wali aunty se mili

Daadi: photo wali aunty

Ye kaun hai

Sia: oh ho..

Aap bhul gyi

Daadi' whi aunty jiski photo hume papa ki study room mein mili thi

Daadi: aap sch kh rhi hai

Sia: daadi sia maan singh khurana jhoot nhi khti

Daadi: hmm

Pata hai

Aage btaiye ' fir kya kaha apke papa ne

Sia: kuch nhi

Phle to maine aunty ko pechana hi nhi

Pr jab papa ne aunty ka name liya

Aur unhe hug kiya

Daadi: that's good

Sia: daadi isme good kya hai

Sia ko acha nhi laga

Papa bs aunty ko dekh rhe the

Sia ki taraf dekha bhi nhi

Daadi: bte

Aapko aunty achi nhi lagi

Sia: aunty photo se bhi jyada butiful(beautiful) hai

Aunty ne sia se pyaar si baat ki

Isliye sia ne aunty aur uncle ko aaj dinner pe invite kiya hai

Daadi: uncle

Sia: hmm' bhut hi ache uncle hai

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Asad: geet'. Sweety kaha hai tu


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Daai maa:- bte wo apne room mein hai

Waise aaj tum dono kaha jaa rhe ho

Asad: daaimaa apne ek friend ke ghar

Daaimaa: kaunsa friend

Asad: daaimaa aap to police walo ki tarah swal pe swal puch rhi ho

Daaimaa: nhi beta.. asa nhi hai

Asad: daaimaa' mein janta hu' aap geet se bhut pyaar krti hai'

Aap fikr mt kriye' wo mere sath jaa rhi hai'

Mein uska pura dhyan rakhunga

Daaimaa: hmm

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Asad: ye kya tum ab tak ready nhi huyi

Geet: mujhe nhi jana

Asad: sweety ye sb kya hai

Maan hmara wha wait kr rha honga

Aur tum

Geet: usse intzaar krne do

Asad: geet

Geet: mera mann nhi hai Asad

Aur waise bhi mein India.. kaam ke liye aayi hu' na ki ase time waste krne

Asad: geet' apne dosto se milna ' kbse tumhare liye time waste ho gya

Fir to tum mere baare mein bhi asa hi sochti hongi

Geet: asad mere khne ka wo matlab nhi tha

Asad: geet ' ab aur kuch mt kaho

Geet: Asad meri baat to suno'

Asad: tum meri baat sunti ho

Jo mein tumhari sunu

Geet: sorry baba

She holds both ears'

He turn the face other side'

Geet: dekh ' jyada bhav mt kha

Asad: bhav bhi koi khane ki cheez hai

Geet: asad.. meri taraf dekh na

He denied'

Geet: go to hell

She sits on bed and makes golgappa face'.


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Asad: tujhe sath leke jayunga

He came near to her and sits beside to her.

Geet: mein nhi aayungi

Asad: chl ab jaldi se tyaar ho ja

Nhi to

Geet: nhi to kya

Asad: tujhe uthake le jayunga

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Asad: hey maan

Maan: hey

Asad: apni family se introduce nhi krwayonge

Sia: uncle aunty kaha hai

Asad: wo bs aa rhi hai

Ye lo shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitaan hazir

Geet: asad' tumne mujhe shaitan kaha

Asad: sorry sweety

He sided hug her'

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Daadi: geet bte aap itni chup kyun hai

Aap bhi kuch khiye na


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Asad: daadi ydi isne bholna shuru kiya.. to hum sub sun sunke thk jayenge

She glares towards him'

Asad: don't look me like this

Mujhe bhut darr lagta hai

Karan laughs'

Asad: maine koi joke nhi maara yaar

Karan: nhi' yaar


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Wo kya hai na' mein jb shilpa ke liye kuch khta hu'. To wo bhi mujhe ase hi glare dete hai

Aur mein bhi usse yhi khta hu

Shilpa(whisper) : aaj to tumhari kher nhi


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Shilpa

Sia: chachu aap to gye

Now all laugh except karan..

Daadi: dinner ready hai

Chliye hum sb ab dinner krle

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Maan look towards geet but geet not meet with his gaze'

Geet(think) :- maan meri taraf baar baar mt dekho'

Tumhare swalo ke jwab nhi hai mere pass

Maan(think) :- kb tak bhagongi geet'

Kb tak tum yuhi khamosh rhongi

Daadi: geet bte aapko khana acha nhi laga

Geet: daadi khana acha hai

Daadi: to aap kuch kha kyun nhi rhi

Asad: geet are you ok

She nodded.

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Sia by mistakenly fall the ice-cream on geet dress'

Sia: sorry aunty

Wo mein aapke pass aa rhi thi' galati si aap pe gir gyi

Geet: it's ok beta

Shilpa: geet mein tumhe washroom le chalti hu

Geet: hmm

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She came out from washroom ' goes toward main hall' but someone pulled her' she recognize his touch'

Geet: chodiye mujhe

He held her wrist and she followed her'

Geet: maan'

They were now in the maan room'

Geet: maan ye sb kya hai

Aap

Maan: sshhh

He takes step towards her and she take back step'

He pinned her to the wall'

He held her chin'.

Geet: mujhe jana hai

Sb wait kr rhe honge

He came close to her and caressed her hairs'


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She try to go but he block her way'.

Maan: pr mere intzaar ka kya

Geet: kaunsa intzaar maan

Hum dono apni life mein aage bd chuke hai

Maan: aage bd chuke hai'.

Tum isse aage bdna khti ho

Geet: ha

He take step back '


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Maan: to kuch swalo ka jwab do

Tum niche itni khamosh kyun th

Meri taraf kyun nhi dekha

Kyun meri nazro se durr bhag rhi thi

.

Ab kuch khti kyun nhi


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Geet: asa kuch nhi hai

Maan: to meri aankho mein dekhke kho

She look into his eyes'

Geet: kya sunana hai aapko

Maan: tumne college mid mein kyun choda

Apni education complete kyu nhi ki

Geet: kisne kaha aapse


Maine education complete nhi ki

Maine papers diye the final ke

Ab mujhe jane dijiye'.

Maan: Geet' tum har baar mere sath asa nhi kr sakti ho

Geet: Maan

He held her by shoulder' and said "geet ' tum kyun chli gyi thi''' mujhe ek baar btaya tak nhi'' jaate waqt kuch kaha tak nhi''.. kyunnn'''"

Geet: maan'' mujhe jaana do''.

Maan: us waqt jaane diya tha''. Khamosh rha''sochta rha'''kis haq se puchu tumse'''.. fir socha hmare rishte mein kbhi koi haq to tha hi nhi''' hum dono to ek dusre se har baat kh dete the'''bina kissi haq ke''''

Us waqt tum khamosh rhi''.. apni pareshani mujhe nhi btayi'''' jb maine puchna chaha''..

He cupped her face


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and said "tumhe rokna chaha''..tum ja chuki thi''''"

Par ab nhi geet''.ab mein is khamoshi ko '''.

Geet: maan''.

Kaunsa rishta'.

Hmare bich kbhi koi rishta tha hi nhi

Pta nhi aap kaunse rishte ki baat kr rhe hai

She removed his hand on her face'

Maan: koi rishta nhi tha

Geet: nhi

Aapke sath kuch baatein kya krli'

Kuch pal has kya li

Maan: geet '

He looks angry towards her'

Maan: wo bs kuch pal nhi the

Tum mujhe kuch btati kyun nhi

Geet: maan apke chilane se

Gussa krne se

Sch bdal nhi jayenga

Aap mujhse durr rhiye

Kmse km apni wife ke baare mein to sochiye

Usse kaisa lagenga

Aapni beti ke baare mein sochiye

She goes from here'.

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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geet trying 2 avoid maan..
maan cornering her n asking questions..
she asks him 2 think about his wife n daughter..
loved sia s talk with dadi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

geet trying 2 avoid maan..

maan cornering her n asking questions..
she asks him 2 think about his wife n daughter..
loved sia s talk with dadi


thanks dear...

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