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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: desir

chota update kiyya karo aur acha kiyya kroo jis se hum aage ke liyye tadpate rahein very bad bahut achaa tha part jaldi update kar dena pleas


iska kya matlab hai samjana zara ye tarif hai ya nahi ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: armaanriddima


iska kya matlab hai samjana zara ye tarif hai ya nahi ?


tarif hain yaar bar shikayat bhi hain kii achaa part likhti ho par chota likhti ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
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time nahi hai 12 mai ho mai broads hai pagal kar raha hai school valo ne itne paper milte hai time millthe hi update kar diya next update paka sat ko kar dogi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

PART 7

na-hey bagwan mai kya karo is ladke ka

ri- aunty app kayena

na-ridhima beta tum ka lo mai armaan ke sath ka logi baad mai

ra-mom aap late kana kaoge toh apki tabhiyat karab ho jagi aur vase bhi apko medicine lene hai

ri-hai aunty rahul thik kah raha hai aap ka lijeye

na- par armaan

ri-aunty mai ka logi armaan ke sath badme

na- nahi beta tum kyo

yuvi , naina(intern)aur su vaha se locker room chale jathe hai unhone ka liya hota hai

ri-aunty aapne hi bola tha na ki mai ab apki family ka hissa ho

flashback

armaan ke ghar se jane ke baad naina aur divya padma ko call karthi hai aur congrats karthi hai kuch der baat karne ke baad divya padma ko bolthi hai ki unhone ridhima se baat karni hai

di - hello ridhima beta kase ho aap

ri-mai thik ho aunty aap kase ho aur naina aunty aur billy uncle kase hai

na-sab thik hai beta aur na humne tumhe thank u kahne ke liye phone kiya tha

ri- thank u par kisliye ?

di-hamre parivar ka hissa bane ke liye

ri- aunty aap ..

while cutting ridhima

na-nahi beta aap nahi janthi aapne mhuje kitni badi khushi de hai aaj welcome to the family beta

flashback ends

na-(smiles ) thik hai beta

rahul was in a shock bcoz he mom his mom does nat listen to anyone so easily except armaan

ra- sahi Jodi hai dono ki

mu- kya kaha ?

ra- kuch nahi

tabhi anoucment hoti hai ki get back to work break is over

sabhi apne apne duty mai chale jate hai

(note break 2 baje hota hai )

Ab sham ke 5 baje hote the aur ridhima ko bhi break milla tha (doc kabhi bhi 1 time aur break le sakthe hai 30 min ka pure din mai lunch break ke alawa) waha armaan bhi OT se fir ho jatha hai

Ridhima canteen ke taraf ja rahi hoti hai tabhi use naina dekthi hai

Na-beta tum break par ho na

Ri-ji aunty

Na- tho ab aap ja kar lunch kar lo tumne kuch bhi nahi khaya armaan bhi OT se free ho gaya hai aur usne bhi break liya hai

Ri-thik hai aunty

Ridhima cateen ki tarf jathi hai aur counter par jo ladke hote hai une kahthi hai ki aap ek plate pasta aur ek plate (thinking armaan ko kya pasand hai mai kya leke jao unke liye ? ek kam karthi ho mai pasta hi le jathi ho ) bhaiya aap 2 plate pasta de do

Aur 2 coffee aap dr armaan ke cabin mai de ana

Bhaiya-thik hai

Ridhima order karne ke baad armaan ke cabin ki taraf jathi hai

( thinking mai ja tho rahi ho par mai ja kar kya kahogi kitna ajeeb lag raha hai kal tha hum ek dusre ko janthe bhi nahi the aur aaj vo mere hone wale pati hai kuch hi dino mai meri unse shadhi ho jaygi aur vo mere sab kuch ban jaye ge par kya vo is risthe se khush hai kya unhone apne dil se haan ki hai ya fir apni family ke khushi ke liye ) she is now in the front of the cabin

Ridhima ko himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi ki vo door par knock kar de tabhi ek nurse vaha aa kar cabin ka door knock kar deti hai

Ar- come in

Nurse andar chali jathi hai aur ridhima bhi himmat kar kare ander chale jathi hai



Edited by armaanriddima - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Nice...
Thanks for the PM and do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Res

Hawww yeh kia kia itny cliffhanger par stop kia?????
Qqq???? Aur kitna tarpaogi app ????
Ab jaldi sy plzzz aik only AR part chahiye *pouts* :D
Edited by -AK- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Great fic olz do pm me whn u cont.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -AK-

Res

Hawww yeh kia kia itny cliffhanger par stop kia?????
Qqq???? Aur kitna tarpaogi app ????
Ab jaldi sy plzzz aik only AR part chahiye *pouts* :D



haha are mazaa tho isi mai atha millega update par kuch dino mai

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
nyc work plz continue aoon and plz pm me nexrt tym u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hey when are u updating it

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