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ritika malikk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -AK-
Very nice update
Loved riddhmas thoughts on marriage and armaan is soo nice such a family person
Thx for pm cont soon plzz

ya ridhima ke thoughts were difficult to write then i asked my sis she told me all this

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ritika malikk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

I know all (some of u r waiting for a update but my net is not working so i am using a moblie and i dont want to update from it so may be in a week i will give u a update + i am not getting good responce so if it continues like this i will finish this ff in 2 chapters so i beg u plz plz plz yaar comment karo it does help me plz

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Aayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

waiting don't stop for it.. do post it plz and plz if u can update the title when u updates with date of update ya update with part no updated.. plz it will really be help full

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ritika malikk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

update kar rahi ho sunday ko yaar ghar mai shaadi hai cant help it sat ko hai shaadi pakka will update on sunday

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ritika malikk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

jo mistakes hogi uske liye soory par i am not proof reading it

ar- ridhima thank u thank u ye sab bolne ke liye pata hai jab mene haan suni toh mene sabse phele yehi socha tha ki kya tum khush ho ridhima ? pata hai ridhima mai shaadi ke liye tayaar bhi nahi tha kyoki mai sochtha ho ki shaadi srif 2 insano ke bech nahi hoti balki 2 families ke bech hoti hai

ridhima tum ye shaadi srif mhujse nahi kar rahi balki meri puri family se kar rahi ho mai na apni family se bhot pyaar kartha ho aur shaadi ke baad unse alag bhi nahi hoga aur unhike hissab se chaloga mai apni family ko kabhi bikhartha hoa nahi dekh saktha . meri badi mom aur mom ne bhot mehnat ki hai is family ko ek sath rakne mai mai unki mehnat ko pani mai milltha hoa nahi dekh saktha mai nahi chatha ki meri family mai koi esa aye jo meri family ko bekher de mera sab se bada daar hai ye aur isi ki vajah se mai shaadi ke liye bhi tayar nahi tha par jab badi ma ne eshas karya ki sari ladikya ese nahi hoti sahi ladki ke ane se ghar nahi tut tha balki vo aur bhi mazbuti se jud jatha hai tab mene shaadi ke liye haan ki hai aur tum hi ho jesi mene shaadi ke liye dekha hai tum hi first aur last ho aur tumne na jane kyo mhuje maa aur badi ma dono ki chavi dekhi mhuje lagtha hai ki tum kabhi mere ghar ko bhikne nahi doge balki usko aur bhi mazbuti se jodogi uski aur meri himmat banogi agar mai galat ho toh mhuje abhi bata do agar mene tumpe jada hi viswas kar liya ho toh mhuje abhi bata do kyoki mai nahi chatha ki meri khushi ki vajah se mera ghar bhikre

ri- aap kah rahe ho ki mhuje mai aapko apni maa aur badi maa dono ki chavi dekhi aur fir aap ye sawal phuch rahe ho armaan kya kabhi badi maa ya maa esa kar sakthi hai nahi na toh fir mai kese kardo un dono ki chavi hokar armaan aap galat nahi ho mhuje bhi is parivar ko bhikr tha dekh kar utna hi dukh hoga jitna aapko armaan mai is parivar ko mazboot rakh hogi par usme mhuje aap ka sath chaiye appko mere na aage na pheche mere sath sath chalna hoga meri takhat ban kar aur ab armaan jab hum hi ek dursre ke hoge toh fir humari khushi alag kyo hogi ?

armaan ridhima ka answer sun kar bhot khush ho jatha hai tabhi door par knock hota hai

ar-come in

wb(ward boy )-dr armaan apka order

ar-par mene toh kuch order nahi kiya

wb-par phuchana toh yahi tha

ri-wo...(armaan ridhima ko dekh tha hai ) ye mene order kiya hai

ar to wb- thik hai ise yaha table par rakh do

wo rakh ke chala jatha hai

Edited by armaanriddima - 12 years ago

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mohit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

hy

gr8 part

par bahut chota tha

itni jaldi khtm ho gya😔

update soon

waiting

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teenorchid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

start kiya aur hatam b hogaya

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Haan pata hai part chota tha par kya karo update dena tha aur bhut thaki hoi thi mama ki shaadi thi so is liye but will update tom ek bada part and kitty ji plz update kardo aap apna ff