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Posted: 12 years ago
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aur kitna tarpao gi. Milwa b dooo unkooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thats really good continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohk guys mera na aaj report card mill hai tho na abhi mai shock mai ho tho update millega jab mai shock sse bhar a jaogi that is tommorow tab tak wait karlo pl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hw ws rezlt?? Desperately waiting fr update. Long one plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys i am so sorry ki itne din se update nahi kiya par i am really busy phele meri dadi ki death ho gayi fir ek marriage thi mere ghar mai uske baad mere mom hospitalised ho gayi aur abhi saturday ko hi ghar ayi hai so plz mhuje next sunday tak ka time dedo fir i will update 2 parts together
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry guys for the late update and this will be a small part ab se i will update only small part but i will update once in 2 days

ar- good morning doctors
i am Dr armaan and i am Ur senior Dr aap log muhje hi report karege
so lets start with the introduction ( he was reading a file )

ra- good morning Dr i am Dr rahul grewal
mu- hi i am Dr muskaan gupta
su-hi armaan i am dr suvarna ,su for u ( ridhima was feeling jealous )
ar- its Dr armaan Dr suvarna ( with out looking up from the file )
na-i am Dr naina
yu- hello i am Dr yuvraj
r- good morning dr armaan ( armaan looked up ) i am Dr
ar- ridhima ( without realizing )
ra- (seeing his brother lost)( whispering ) muski bhai ko dekh ridhima ko kase dekh rahe hai
mu- (saw armaan and starts laughing) cough cough (to cover up her laughter )
armaan comes back to realty
ar- good now Dr just remember the rules should be followed and i will not tolerate nonsense during the duty hours and ...
he was disturbed by his pager which showed that there is an emergency
ar- get back to Ur duty
and he ran to wards OT

ridhima goes back to her duty think about armaan and the way he behaved ridhima was not able to see armaan till break as he was in OT

during lunch break

she was going towards canteen when she was pulled in the fire escape
mu- he..
ru-shut up muski mai ho (while covering her mouth)
mu-tu pagal ho gaya hai kya jo ye sab kartha rahtha hai
ra-mai kya karo aaj mhuje subha se time nahi milla tera sath
mu-hai vo mai busy thi
ra-par ab tho nahi hai na
mu- ra...
but rahul covered her lips with his

here ridhima was sitting with rest off the gang
su-guys we should order
yu-wait i will go and call the waiter

yuvi went to call the waiter and rahul and a blushing muskaan came inside the canteen
ra-hi guys
na-hi rahul
mu-ridhima s...
but she was schocked to she the sight in front of her
naina was puling armaan inside the canteen by this ear

ar-mom chodo na
na-tu chup kar
ar--sorry na ma ab nahi karoga
na-tu hamesha ese hi boltha hai (leaving his ear)
na-tu chal mere sath

naina took him to the table where the gang was sitting

rahul was laughing
ra-kya hoa mom aap bhai ko ese kyo la rahi ho
na-tu chup kar rahul subha teri vajah se hi vo kuch ka nahi paya tha aur isne subha se kuch nahi khaya
ar- mom
na-chup

(now talking to all of them )hi riddima beta








Edited by armaanriddima - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Awesome buddy!
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Nyc part loved it
I want more armaan and riddhima scenes :P
Thx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys aap sab ko ar ke scene chaye par abi iske bad wale update mai aygi ar ke scene vo pura ar ka updat hoga paakka tab tak plz ruk jao


part 6

na -hi ridhima beta
armaan ne abhi tak ridhima ko nahi dekha tha aur jab apni mom ke mu se ridhima ka nam suna tho he was shocked aur ridhima bhi naina ke awaz sun kar shock se bhar ayi

ri- nameste aunty

(yuvi bhi waiter ko order deke table par aa jata hai )

yv-hello dr naina

ra- wase mom ab bhai ko yaha kyo layi

na-isne na subha se kuch nahi kya hai mai tho paresan ho gayi ho is ladke se

ar- are isme meri galthi thodi na thi emergency tha

na-mom mai hospital mai kuch kaha loga ye tho tune hi bola tha na
(tab tak waiter bhi order leke a jata hai)

aur naina usi waiter ko order de deti hai apne aur armaan ke lunch rahul aur muskaan bhi apne order de dete hai

na- tu na ab chup kar armaan

armaan chup ho jata hai aur riddhima ko hi dektha hai
ridhima nervous fell karne lagthi hai
na- ridhima beta aaj na mai bhot khush ho

ri- are anuty aap kase baat kar rahe ho

na-beta mai tho tumhari aur ar...

ar-mom suno aapko aaj kahi jana tha na

( armaan wanted to keep his and ridhima marriage a secret )

na- nahi mhuje tho kahi nahi jana tha

ar- ohhh

na- ridhima tum kuch kaha kyo nahi rahi

ri-ek bari aap sabka order a jai fir sath mai kayege

na-nahi nahi beta tum kaha suru kar dehko humara kaha bhi ane vala hoga

(naina took a piece and forward it to ridhima ridima had a bite and kept it back )

ri-maine kaha liya ab baki aap logo ke sath

armaan was happy to see this

just as waiter was about to keep there food armaan pager ran

ar-mom mhuje jana hai

na-par armaan kahana

ar- (picking a piece from ridhima plate)
deko ka liya
( and he ran towards ot )

ridhima was felling happy to see this and unknowly armaan ne vahi piece uthaya tha jo ridhima ne bhi kaya tha

thats it folks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
chota update kiyya karo aur acha kiyya kroo jis se hum aage ke liyye tadpate rahein very bad bahut achaa tha part jaldi update kar dena pleas

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