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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaanriddima

it was a incomplet par abhi is ko mai complete karogi and i wont give a small update




thank you so much for giving long update will be waiting so please do try to complete it soon please
Edited by desir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Really nyc part cant wait for them to meet again :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyjust caught up with ur ff
nd its really sweet
liked its concept
update super soon
nd thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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note -ohk guys meri life me filhal exam alert hai so i will not update till 8 uske bad i will update super soon
Edited by armaanriddima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

PART 3

aaj 6 logo ki life ka bhot important din tha kyoki aaj hi ye log apna carrer start karni vale thi sab log bhot exited the aur kahi na kahi nervous bhi apne future ke bare mai soch rahi the ye soch rahe the ki aaj unka ye din kesa hoga ?unko kya duties miilgi ? unka working environment kesa hoga ? kya unka staff unko accept karega ? unke senior aur co interns kase hoge ? aur bhi bhot sare sawal the in logo ke dimag mai



sanjivani mai bhi bhot kuch badle vala tha acha ya bura ye tho wakt hi batayega
rahul apni mom ke sath sanjeevani aa chukka tha aura b locker room mai sabka interzar kar raha hai
r- yar mai tho yaha par bhore ho gaya pata nahi kab ayegi sab kab aygi mere muski I miss her yar
9 going in the changing room )

just then ridhima and muskan enters fighting with each other

rid-plz yar muski bas kar ab bhut ho gaya

m- par abhi tho mene start bhi nahi kiya aur to paresan bhi ho gayi pata hai rahul bata raha tha ki armaan oppss.. jiju bhot cihdathe hai

rid- muskiii tu fir suru ho gayi kitni bar bolo ab bas kar dekh ab tho hum sanjiveeni bhi aa gaye ( while searching for her locker and keeping her things in it )

mu- tho kya hoa ?

r- muskaan bas kar kitna chidaye gi bhabai oops ridhima ko ?

rid - rahul tum bhi ?( while closing her locker )
just then 2 boys and 1 girl came in the locker room ( these r not so important in the ff the character are same as dmg but yuraj is just a little open and frndly )

su- hello guys tum log bhi interns ho kya ?

mu- hii yup hum bhi interns hai aur mera naam muskaan hai

su- i am suvarna u can call me su

na- and i am naina

yu- i am yuvi short for yuvraj

r- hi i am rahul

rid- and i am ridhima

na- guys time ho gaya hai reporting ka

ra- chalo chalthe hai


on the other side armaan is still in operation theater he was going to brief the interns on there first day the aanaya would take over as it was a tradition for the previous batch to brief the new batch of interns so he told a nurse to tell dr aanaya to give duties to new interns and he will brief them later

( guys this is not the full part but just a smaal part of the full one aaj iske bad koi ideas nahi a rahe the tho bas itna lika aur plz guys comment kar diya karo aur pm jab par complete hoga tab dogi )
Edited by armaanriddima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute part loool muski and rahul teasing riddhima
plzzz jaldi AR scenes lao naaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are bacha cintha mat karo ar bhi ayega
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Briefing ke time par Ananya aati hai tho ridhima conscious feel karne lag jathi hai usko pata tha ki Ananya aur naina isi hospital mai kam karthe hai par usko armaan ke bare mai nahi pata tha kyoki rahul ne muskan ko bataya tha ki Anaya aur naina sanjivanni mai hi kam karthe hai aur billy bhi kabhi kabhi koi ek case handle kar letha hai par jase hi vo armaan ke bare mai bata raha tha tabhi

flashback

Mu-rahul I cant believe ki hume sanjivaani mai job mill gayi I am soo happy

ra- muskan mai bhi bhot kuch ho mene tho phele hi bol diya tha ki hame job miill jayegi par tum hi nahi maan rahe thi aur tension le ke bathi thi

mu-acha thik hai par ye tho bato ki sanjavini hoga kasa? matlab vaha ki staff kasa hoga? log kase hoge ? envorment kasa hoga ?

ra- break mar muski ab tu iski tension leke bhat gayi

mu- rahulll

ra- tension kyo le rahi ho sweetheart sab thik hoga

mu- tumhe kase bata

ra- tum bhol rahi ho ki sanjivani hamara yahi mallik ka hospital hai

mu-hmm mhuje pata hai

ra- badi ma aur maa dono vaha ki head hai dad bhi kabhi kabhi koi ek case sabhal lete hai aur bh.

Just then muskaan phone rings

(on phone )

Mu-han di bolo

r-...

Mu- acha thik hai mai bas abhi athi ho

r-...

Mu- abhi 5 min mai ayi

r-...

mu-(while cutting the phone ) rahul yar i have to go

r- bye sweetheart love u

mu (blushing ) -love u 2

At gupta house

Mu- kya hoa di

r- yar I got the chance to do my intership in sanjivani

mu- that's great di mhuje aur rahul ko bhi vahi par job milli hai

r- wow that great

mu- I know di

r- kya kismet pyi hai dono ne jaha bhi jage ek sath jayege

mu- hana di hum dono bhene hai hi ese

r- mai teri aur rahul ki baat kar rahi thi

mu- di aap na ( while blushing )

r- kya mai

mu- kuch nahi chodo pata hai di rahul bol raha tha ki usi mom aur badi mom bhi vaha kam karthi hai

aur uncle bhi kabhi kabhi ek do case sambal lete hai

r- acha

mu-hmm

tabhi padma athi hai

pa- radhima beta mai tumse kuch baat karna chathi ho

r- bolo na mom

pa- dekh beta ab teri job bhi lag gayi hai aur tho ab badi bhi ho gayi hai

r- hmmm

pa- tho aaj na tere liye ek ristha aya hai

r- mom saddhi vo bhi abhi tho meri job bhi start nahi hoi

pa- dekh beta tu ab badi ho choki hai aur na ye jo ristha aya hai na ye bhot hi acha hai nahi tho hum kabhi bhi nahi bolthe thuje

mu- kiska ristha hai mom di ke liye

pa ' maliik ke ghar se armaan malik ka

r- mompar

pa- sun beta ye ristha sach mai bhot hi acha hai aur ye log thuje sadhi ke bad bhi job karne dege

r- par

pa- sun beta ab na tu badi hogi hai aur tu sundar bhi hai tho teri liye risthe tho athe hi rahege par hume ye nahi pata vo risthe kase hoge abhi aaj jot ere liya ek itna acha ristha aya hai vo hum nahi jane de sakthe na bena ek bar bhi soche us bare mai mai bas itna chalthi ho kit u ek bar mill le armaan se agar acha lage tho sahi var tere sath koi jabarzasthi nahi hai samjhi

r- thik hai mom mai sochugi aur ek bar mil logi

pa- thik hai vo log kal a rahe hai

r- itni jaldi

pa- bacha vo sarif milne a rahe hai

r- ok mumma

flask back over

Anaya ' good morning doctors mai ho dr anya abki head aur incharge app har roz mhuje report karge aur mai hi abko duty dogi

All- ohk dr

An ' jesa ki apko bola gaya tha ki apki briefing apke senior doc karge jinhone abhi abhi apni intership ki hai likn vo abhi ek surjary mai busy hai tho vo briefing badmai hogi

Abhi ki liye apki duty hai

Dr ridhima aur dr suvarna apki duty genral ward 1 mai hai

Dr rahul and dr yuvi apki duty genral ward 2 mai hai

Aur dr muskan aur dr naina apki duty genral ward 3 mai hai

Now u can join ur duty aur hai ye apke pargers hai apko inki har hal mai answer karna hai

Sabhi duty par chale jathe hai ab tak armaan ot se bahar a gaya tha aur apne cabin mai jar aha hai armaan apne cabin me a kar reception ko msg kart ha hai ki vo brifing ke liye interns ko bulaye meeting hall mai mai

Vo-sabhi interns meeting hall mai aye

Ridhima ko ye awaz suthe pata nahi kya hoa uske pet mai butterflies udne lagi vo ajeeb sa feel karne lagi su-ridhima

r-'

su-ridhima (usko hillathe hoi )

r- hai bolo kya hoa ?

su kya hoa kya chalna nahi hai kya ?

r- hai chalo

and they go toward meeting hall

vaha par sabhi hote hai phele se

r- guys kasa job hai yar mai tho abhi se tak gaya

mu-tho to hai hi aisa

r- kya matalab hai tera cudail

mu-kamine tune mhuje chudali kaha

r- kyo thuje bura laga

mu- aur nahii tho kya

r- acha ab kabhi terko chudal nahi kahoga kyoki tut ho dayan hai

mu- rahul ke bache tu ruk

and rahul and muskan chased each other aur sabhi unko shock mai dekh rahe the sirf ridhima yuvi su aur nania ka face dekh kar hass rahi thi abhi tak rahul aur mudkan ne bura hall kar diya thameeting room ka aura b muskan rahul par ek pen stand pak rahi thi

tabhi darvaja kultha hai aur armaan atha hai usko vo pen stand lagne hi vala hota hai ki vo necche jok jatha hai

ar- dr ye kya ho raha hai

sab chup ho jathe hai ye awaazz sun kar aur ridhima ki dakane tezz ho jathi hai par sabhi ek line me lag jathe hai armaan abhi tak srif rahul aur muskaan ko hi dekh raha tha usne riddima ko nahi dekha kyoki vo yuvi aur naina ke peche chupi hoti tha

ar-ye koi tarika hai behave karne ka tu dono ab itne bade ho gaye ho fir bhi ese behave karthe ho mai sanjvaani mai esa behaver kabhi torate nahi karoga

r,mu- sorry sir

ar- ab app sab bate sakthe hai

all interns sit down ridhima is felling very conscious

ridhima bhi bathe jati hi hai armaan ne abhi bhi ridhima ko nahi dekha hota hai


this is not editted abhi edit karna hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am liking ths veryy much. Do pm me when u updateee plzzz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow. Dil krta hai parhti hi jaon

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