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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishs

hey when are u updating it


i will update after 24 am busy right now sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...very nice FF jxt read whole of it now and luved it a lot...dil kr rha ha prhti hi jaun or rukun hi naa kabhi...please update soon and kindly pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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note


i know ki aaj update dena tha but i am not well and i am sorry i will be not able to update will update as soon as i am well
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome ff
cont soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
awesome ff
cont soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
will update today for sure

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 8

ridhima bhi himmat kar ke ander chali jathi hai

armaan ridhima ko dekh kar ek smile karthe hai

fir vo nurse ko dekhtha hai

ar- apko kuch kam tha sister

si- ji sir mhuje apko bed no 12 ke patient ki report dekhani hai

ar- unka kuch nam hai nam lijiye vo koi chezz nahi hai jo unko bed no ke sath bula rahi ho (gusse se )

si-sorry dr armaan

armaan ki ye baat ridhima ke dil ko chu jathi hai

ar-aye dr ridhima aap ko kuch kam tha
and sister aap ja sakthi hai

ri- vo dr armaan ...mera ...bre..ak tha ..toh..na..dr naina ne ummm...
ar- (ridhima ki nervousness deak ke halki se smile karthe hai ) haan ridhima mhuje page aa gaya tha mom ka aur na apni break hai toh mai abhi srif armaan ho yaha koi dr armaan nahi hai

ri-(with a smile) ji armaan

now ridhima was confuse about what to say and armaan was thinking something

so cabin mai 5 min tak koi nahi boltha

ar- ridhima

ri-haan armaan

ar- agar mai tumhe kuch pucho toh bura toh nahi manogi ?

ri- armaan aap mhuje kuch bhi bata sakthe hai bina kisi jijak ( hesitant) ke

ar- jo tumne decision liya hai kya tumne vo kisi dabav mai ake liya hai ? aur kya tum khush ho ise ?

ri- armaan life mai har kisiko na kisi apne ki jarorat hoti hai .apne toh bhot hote hai . bhot log hote hai jo tumse pyaar karthe hai . par na un bhot logo ko kisi na kisi ke sath batna padtha hai
ma ko papa aur bhen bhai ke sath
papa ko ma aur bhen bhai ke sath
bhen ko bhi ma baap bhai bhen ke sath
bacho ko bhi
par tumhe kabhi apne life partner ko nahi batna padtha vo srif tumhara hota hai vohi hota hai jispe tumhare har ek kadam decision mood sab ka asar hota hai vo hi hota hai jiska pyaar tumhe nahi baatna padtha kyoki vo srif tumhara hota hai aur kal aapko dekh ke laga ki aap vo ho sakthe ho mere liye aap se baat kare pata nahi ese kyo laga ki aapko mai jathi ho aur nahi jati toh janna chathi ho toh armaan i am happy

pata nahi kyo mene itna sab bola pata nahi mai kya bole ja rahi ho ...

armaan usko bolthe hoi dekh raha tha use vo expressions uski simplicity uski innocence sab kuch aur uski baate armaan ko yahi toh suna tha kyoki kahi na kahi vo bhi yahi feel katha hai

armaan ko jab laga ki ridhima ab chup ho jayegi aur vo sochegi ki usne ye sab kyo bola tab hi armaan uske mu pe haath rak detha hai

ar- ridhima thank u thank u ye sab bolne ke liye pata hai jab mene haan suni toh mene sabse phele yehi socha tha ki kya tum khush ho ridhima ? pata hai ridhima mai shaadi ke liye tayaar bhi nahi tha kyoki mai sochtha ho ki shaadi srif 2 insano ke bech nahi hoti balki 2 families ke bech hoti hai

ridhima tum ye shaadi srif mhujse nahi kar rahi balki meri puri family se kar rahi ho mai na apni family se bhot pyaar kartha ho aur shaadi ke baad unse alag bhi nahi hoga aur unhike hissab se chaloga mai apni family ko kabhi bikhartha hoa nahi dekh saktha . meri badi mom aur mom ne bhot mehnat ki hai is family ko ek sath rakne mai mai unki mehnat ko pani mai milltha hoa nahi dekh saktha mai nahi chatha ki meri family mai koi esa aye jo meri family ko bekher de mera sab se bada daar hai ye aur isi ki vajah se mai shaadi ke liye bhi tayar nahi tha par jab badi ma ne eshas karya ki sari ladikya ese nahi hoti sahi ladki ke ane se ghar nahi tut tha balki vo aur bhi mazbuti se jud jatha hai tab mene shaadi ke liye haan ki hai aur tum hi ho jesi mene shaadi ke liye dekha hai tum hi first aur last ho aur tumne na jane kyo mhuje maa aur badi ma dono ki chavi dekhi mhuje lagtha hai ki tum kabhi mere ghar ko bhikne nahi doge balki usko aur bhi mazbuti se jodogi uski aur meri himmat banogi agar mai galat ho toh mhuje abhi bata do agar mene tumpe jada hi viswas kar liya ho toh mhuje abhi bata do kyoki mai nahi chatha ki meri khushi ki vajah se mera ghar bhikre


precap-

ar- mere sath date par calogi ?



ri-mene socha bhi nahi tha ki aap ese hoge armaan


plz forgive me for the mistake and late update

Edited by armaanriddima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Very nice update
Loved riddhmas thoughts on marriage and armaan is soo nice such a family person
Thx for pm cont soon plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u ji and plz tum comment kar diya karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mishs

osome... COntinue soon...


thanks and i will

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