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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank yo so much everyone for such a warm response and beautiful comments🤗🤗Means a lot to me .
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Posted: 12 years ago

It Had To Be you

He didn't know when he'd scooped her into his arm and led her towards the bed he just knew one thing he was needed her at that moment'he wanted her so badly at that moment'so desperately that the some part of his mind had been completely forgotten about that project 'that success which would lead him towards the way he wanted to go'he'd been forgotten completely the world around him he just wanted to feel her fragile, soft skin under him, her arms around his neck, in his hairs and her lips on his----From where this longing, those strange emotion came out he didn't know .

Trailing his lips teasingly on the hollow of her throat he nuzzled there for a moment clutching her hands into his strong grip and then kissing her ear lob he had whispered desperately, "I want you Nupur"

She'd felt her heart fluttered dangerously as his slow husky demanding voice and with a squeak of surprise she tilted her neck to give him glance, he raised his face and looked down at her, his eyes were filled with so much passion'desires, his eyes watching her with a strange intensity that she'd never seen before there and her heart had leaped when she'd looked so deeply in those pool of dark eyes, his demanding gazes traveling on her face and the scent of his warm body wrapped her in its potent force she'd been already lost in him'willing ready to give him everything then why he was asking? Why he was asking for the first time before taking her? It was his concern or something else was there that was flushing so strongly in his eyes'she swallowed the lump that formed in her throat and breathed trying to regain her composure. But then had slipped her arms around his neck and whispered before pressing her lips on his"Mayank'I'm yours". with the one swift motion he'd shifted his weight completely on her pressing hard his chest on her and a groan had erupted of his lips as he'd taken her mouth so deeply'demandingly'with the savage desire that he'd not felt for anyone except her or he'd never thought to allow anyone to entered in his thought that much deeply. Pure, searing desire poured through her body at the feel of his hands pressed intimately against her stomach and she had heard her own moan of pleasure as his lips moved down towards her navel giving feathery kisses to her soft skin, she shivered beneath his caress, his admiring words and when he'd taken her she let out the moan of content confessing to herself she didn't want anyone in her life but Mayank'she want him from the deep down her heart. Her eyes slid closed as she'd allowed this man again to go deep in her soul.

He didn't know how many times he made love to her but he still wasn't feeling enough of her'he couldn't never feel enough of this beautiful creature, Mayank had given a admiring glance to Nupur before pressing his lips on her forehead who was sleeping soundly cuddling closed to his naked body under the covers. He could still feel the Heat exploding through his body at the feel of her smooth, silky skin pressed hard against her, her warmth sensual breath against his chest. He was himself unaware of the feeling that she was arousing in him'the feeling that no one could arouse in his heart'there were many girls who had fallen in love with him, some of them had even thrown themselves on him but there was something that stopped him always'he never felt attractive to anyone or no one could bring out the passion that his heart was holding firmly until She came in her life---He squeezed shut his eyes as the images of that day flushes in front of his eyes when they met..

The day when he'd visited orphanage with his friend as he had to make a project about those children who were living in orphanage. He'd seen her there---playing with the children under the shower of rain-- unaware of the world around her'unaware of his deep glances and when she had looked consciously realizing someone eyes on her their eyes were met for a friction of seconds before she'd lowered them nervously and he could hardly bring out himself the trance of his imaginative thoughts when his friend had called out his name and he startled realizing he'd been forgotten completely where he was? His eyes were just wanted to scan her face'just wanted to drop at her pink cheeks again and again.

After that day he'd slept many restless nights and then he'd confessed to himself loudly he wanted her as there was something in her that was pulling him and he couldn't live without her---he'd needed her in his life so desperately that if he didn't bring her in his life he might get mad due to the desires this girl had awaken in his heart. She had been became addiction for him and then he'd confessed to her he couldn't live without her'he wanted her in his life'he wanted her and she had given her hand to him without demanding anything in return, she just had wanted a promise in return and that was he would be with her always, never leave her alone, the thought of her living in orphanage used to haul him'he felt strange pinch of heart whenever he seen her there---sitting alone on the bench in the garden where there were lots of,girls,childrens around her living the days of their lives without any demand'without any hope'any dream. He brought her in his house'he didn't want her to live there with the promise he wouldn't let her go back there'he would keep her with him always..Though he didn't know what he wanted from this relationship---he just knew he t wanted to be with her'just wanted her in his life at any cost.

"Mayank! Are you awake?"

He had startled coming out of his deep thoughts and dropped down his gaze at her, "hmm"

She'd seen the dance of strange deep emotions on his face and something pricked in her heart as she tried to recognize them but they were unfamiliar for her too'yes she hadn't seen these emotions in his eyes before.

"Mayank what were you thinking?"

He remained silent for a brief moment, as if waging some inward struggle. Then, drawing in a deep breath he met with her questioning gaze'he brushed aside the long strand of hairs from her cheek leaning to kiss her forehead and then pulled back cupping her face.

"I've finalized the deal with them" His voice wavered before he gathered his scattered thoughts jerking away from his mind what had happened there and continued stroking her lips with his thumb, "they have offered me 40% profit"

"Mayank is it true?"Her eyes glittered with the wave of happiness as he finished his sentence and then looked in the depth of her eyes and could see they were shining with tears of happiness he gasped as something hit with the sensitive part of his heart , "why didn't you tell me before?im so happy'I'm so happy Mayank"

She'd pulled him and he nuzzled against her neck and had closed his eyes when wetness touched his cheek and he knew it was her tear.

"I know you would get all the success'i'm so happy" she whispered in his ear but he was still lost her question..How could he forget to tell this news? Why he was so much lost in Nupur's thoughts that forget about everything except her?why he couldn't think about anything but Nupur?.

He closed his eyes feeling the strange havoc of emotions in his heart feeling her scent, her warm body under him he tried to find the answer of unspoken words.

Precap..

"Is Mayank lives here?"

A feminine voice hit with Nupur's ear drums and she lifted her eyes at the girl who was looking at her with an inquiry gaze.

"yes"

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Here is next part...i hope you will like it:)

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update, Maria Apu..
You've shown Mayank's passion for Nupur, his inner war on naming the feeling very nicely..
Aww..first meeting in the rain.. It wasn't shower of water, it was shower of love.. From the first meet Mayank felt a pull for Nupur, he thinks that this is just attraction.. You know what after reading first update I thought Mayank only lust over Nupur and would leave her for his success. But after reading the previous part and today's part I'm sure it's not lust but pure love.. I hope he'll admit his love for Nupur soon..
I'm having a very bad feeling after reading the precap..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Loooveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update as usual
superb writing
loved Mayur
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update Maria

you are brilliant
Loved Mayank thoughts about Nupur
Loved it
Brilliant writing
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblowing part
i always feels short of words when it come about your writing...Mayank is in love with Nupur since their first meeting but still does not know what he want and Nupur nothing without him
Loved it
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update Maria
Amazingly written
Loved Mayur moments
please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant part
well written
loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful updt maria
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh arnav still doesn't know why he feels like this towards khushi. Soon he will know that is love and I hope nothing comes between them. Khushi have sad past. Thanks for the pm

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