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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

pranita :

commenting on the 17th november update, it's a really good start for a new SS and the fight over the taxi was really hillarious 😆😆, will comment on your remaining update soon.😊

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

pranita :

commenting on the 4th december update, aww it was so sweet 😳..and loved the way you have added a touch of humor to the otherwise brief romantic moment in the car and the incidents that followed, specially the guy's condition .. i had a good laugh reading this😆😆

He was feeling so ... So... So...so...so...so...

...so...so...speechless...hopeless...breathless..😆😆😆😆

It was like...like...like...ummm...like...😆

Like being kicked out the plane without parachute , landing into desert facing the scorching heat of the sun. Starving for water for days

But at the same he felt as if he is downing in the ice cold water, and the water pricking him like needles.

He felt heavy ;he felt light

He felt hot ;he felt cold

After examining his thoughts

Now he was feeling idiot and stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆😆

good work⭐️. update soon and keep pming.😊

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

lovly shovly update di
eye lock..
wow kya eye lock tha...

till eternity
oo ,

bache ka dil tudd diya driver ne..
agr rt chala jate uske ghar tak tho kitna cha hota...
choti- nice choice,..
surprise nhi hoa...
aise faltu coincidence indian families mei hi hota h :P

rt thinking of her...
dekha galti ho gyi...

mughda ka address ka kuch ata pata hi nhi
:'(

but i believ u rt..
tum dhundh loge..
verna kudh hi aa jayegi tumhare paas.

update soon

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

superb ud it was
pichle ud se meri saans atki thi ab saans me saans ayi h
thanks 4 this ud
haye re kya eye lock tha
i wish khatam hi na hota
or ye driver kabab me hadda bn gyi
accha khasa use chodne ja rha h driver bich me aa gya
uska naam adress kuch nhi pata use kaise dhudega wo mugs ko
wais mugs ka naam accha h choti...hahaha
badi hokar bhi choti
loved it alot

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

mindblowing description of both state of minds with their eye colors n all!!
of mugz for tht nano sec and for rajjy for tht after he freshen up!!!
loved mugz name chhoti!! cute n perfect nickname for her!! as she looks like always!!
poor boy!! how much he lost in her tht he din't saw where she leaves!!
u should have go for "wanna switch places" 😆😆😆😆
atleast u might get to know her place n we would have get some more fightings!!
so how will they meet next now?

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

finaly, complete reading both parts, name tho nice tha hi, but the story was Mindblasting,

Loved it, taxi scene was sooo cute, after that rajat's inner thoughts his bechyani, n mugdha di's state of mind after eye lock, you described perfactly,

if I am not wrong yeh wohi story ha na, jishe tum Mugdha di' k own personality n nature k upar likhne wali thi??

Do cont soon, LOVE U PRANI