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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys..pata hai late hu..kuch zayada hi wait karvaya na..sorry..was too busy..pehle bol rahi hu ki i'll nt giv regular updates of any of my ffs...k...so lets nt waste tym n here is the update..n the last part..


PART 2

sharon goes , opens the door and pulls him in..

rey looks at kriya with a lot of questions in his eyes..

soon there famous LLHH starts..

bt rey looks away..

kriya - itne naaraz ho mujhse..i am sorry na..apni baatcutter ko maaf nahi karonge..last chance..plzz i am sorry agge se nahi honga..dance ki kasam..


rey smiles - dance ki kasam.. :)

he goes n hugs her tightly..tears started to form in kriya's eyes bt she controlled..


kriya's prov.


rey i just wanna be like this in ur arms till my last breath...maybe this would be our last dance ki kasam...


prov. ends..


rey - i love u!!! 😳


kriya blushes n say softly - love u too linecutter!1😳


rey breaks the hug n says - kya?? sunai nahi diya!! thoda jor se plzz..


kriya blushes n slightly hits on his chest..


everyone - awww!!!


sharon to swayam - swayam learn something from rey..šŸ˜‰


swayam - meine toh isse sikhaya hai..haina rey..??šŸ˜›


everyone starts laughing..


meanwhile kriya's mom comes in..


k's mom - bacho abhi kriya ko rest karna hai..you can come n meet her tomorrow..


sway- k aunty...n mein doc se jakar discharge ke bare mein bhi poch loga..


kriya - n...n .. n-a-h-i..


sway - kyu??


k's mom- v..o..voh actually mene doc se baat kar li hai..n he's saying ki iski weekness ke wajhe se she has t stay here jab tak she is totally fyn..


sway - ohk..šŸ˜•


everyone goes from there..


k's mom - kriya they all loves u alot specially rey n sway..unko to batata do..plzz..


kriya - no mom..see voh log kitne khush hai ..ab unki khushi chinne ka koi hak nahi hai mera..


kriya goes to sleep..


next day..


kriya woke up early ate her breakfast n took her medicines..


the gang reached the hospital..n was heading towards the kriya room...swayam was a little tensed n soo decided to meet kriya's doctor...


sway- guys u all continue..mujhe kuch kam hai so i'll complete tht n join u all..


everyone - k..


swayam was finding the doctor n atlast found him..


sway - excuse me..


doc - yes..how may i help u??


sway - u r kriya ghai doctor right..


doc - ya..


sway - great..i would like to know then how is her condition now..n when would she will be discharged..


doc - mr..


sway - swayam


doc- ya mr. swayam...how could u even think of discharge..uski condition bahut kharab hai..


sway - kharab hai..bt if i am nt wrong she as just a little weakness right..


doc - i think u r talking about someone else..the girl kriya who is my patient has cancer n infact she is only left with 8-9 days to live...


sway - wht??


doc - i hav to go for a meeting will catch u late..


swayam to himself - kriya ko cancer ..aur usne hum batana bhi nahi samja..kyu??


he broke down in tears...

he some how controlled himself n heads toward kriya's room..

he enters the room n sees everyone having fun with her...

sharon notices swayam n was shocked to see him in tears,,

sharon - swayam..y r u crying??


rey looks n swayam - swayam tu ro kyu raha hai..


kriya was really tensed - swaya...


before she could complete..


swayam - guys mujhe kriya se akele mein baat karni hai...


vishaka - par..


swayam - plzz tum log bahar jaonge..


rey - swayam par hua..


swayam lost his temper n shouted - guys plzzz..!!!!


everyone was hell shocked n tensed..they all went out...

swayam closed the door..


he can't control himself n broke down...now kriya was hell tensed...


kriya - swayam kya hua??


swayam went n huged her tight...kriya was very tensed now..


kriya - swayam??


swayam broke the hug.. - tu mujhe apne best friend nahi manti na..


kriya - yeh kya bol raha hai..offcourse tu mera bff hai..


sway - joth..bff hota toh tu mujhse har ek baat share karti..


kriya - mene kya nahi share kiya swayam...plzz bata na ...


sway - tujhe tu bas thodi si weakness thi na..


kriya - hai..


sway - joth..tujhe cancer hai na..


kriya - swayam yeh tu..


swayam - kriya plzz..aur joth mat bol..plzzz.


kriya - hai hai...


sway - n u r nt left with much tym...


kriya - hmm..


sway shouted - kriya phir kyu tumne chupaya humse??


kriya got tensed n tears started flowing her eyes...


sway cupped her face..


kriya - pehle mene tum logo ko bahut hurt kiya tha..aur ab jab tum log mujhse mil kar itne khush hoye toh i don't wanna hurt u...


sway rubbed her tears n kriya rubbed his

sway - aur bakii sab ko..?


kriya - plzz swayam...bakii sab ko kuch nahi pata chalna chaiye..


sway - kriya..i am sorry bt i hav to tell them..aur rey..i hav to tell them..i am sorry...


kriya - swayam..😭


swayam - sorry n hugs her...


he goes n opens the door...


everyone comes in tensed..


rey - swayam hua kya tha??


sharon - hai swayam..y were u crying??


everyone - yes..


swayam looks at kriya..kriya moves the head in no..swayam turns around..


swayam - voh guys..mujhe i mean kriya ko tum sab se kuch kehna hai..


kriya's eyes opened up wide..


rey goes n held kriya's hand..


rey - kriya kya kehna hai??


neha - kriya wht u saying??


swayam - kriya bol do..


kriya closes her eyes..


kriya - guys voh..voh..voh..


vishaka - voh??


kriya - guys mujhe ...voh..cancer...


rey - cancer?? kriya tum yeh kya bol rahi ho..


kriya hugged rey around hi waist...rey rubbed her hair..


kriya - rey oh mujhe cancer hai...


evryone - wht??


rey broke the hug n went on knees still holding kriya's hand...


rey - kriya tum mazak kar rahi ho na..


swayam - rey kriya mazak nahi kar rahi..


rey was in tears...- kriya u'll be fyn..tumhe kuch nahi hoga..


kriya - rey plzz jothi umeed mat do..mein ab thek nahi hone vali..i am only left with 8-9 days to live..


everyone was crying..rey just was sitting on his knees n crying badly holding kriya's hand..


sharon - par kriya..tumne hume yeh pehle..


kriya - sharon..mujhe tum logo ko hurt nahi karna tha..pehle bahut hurt kar chuki ho aur nahi..aur rey mene pehle tumhe bahut hurt kiya..i am sorry..


rey - kriya pehle toh thodi si umeed thi ki tum vapas aongi..lekin ab koi umeed bhi nahi hai i lov u..he hugged her tight..


sharon - wiped her tears..- guys aaj se we will make each n every day of kriya memorable...


swayam - yes guys...we should nt cry...we should make her n ourselves happy...


everyone nods..


rey - baatcutter..i'll make every day the best day of ur life...


next mrning was a fresh start for all of them..


song - hamesha n forever..


Hum hanse toh hansa haule se tera sara jahaan
Tu agar hai yahaan toh hai yeh aangan bhi gulistaan
Saaya tere hum sabhi, rahe dil mein ab teri har baat bhi
Hamesha & forever, jab tak saanson ka saath hai
Hamesha & forever, jab tak taaron ki raat hai
Hamesha & forever, tab tak teri hi baat hai
Hamesha & forever dil mein tu


sharon enters the room smiling with a basket of fruits in her hands...she goes n hugs kriya tightly..kriya smiles...rey standing in a corner remembring all the sweet memories with his baatcutter..everyone laughing n having fun..


Pyaar main de na paaya utna tujhe jitna tera haqq tha
Thi yeh khata par hoti gayi, mera kaha mujhpe bas tha
Aansu tere, ban jaayen mere, kaise banoo teri ab dawa


rey goes to kriya n hugs her tightly...with tears flowing down her eyes...

kriya wiped his tears...kriya held his hands n nodded her head in negation...


Hamesha & forever, jab tak saanson ka saath hai
Hamesha & forever, jab tak taaron ki raat hai
Hamesha & forever, tab tak teri hi baat hai
Hamesha & forever dil mein tu

Yaadon mein itna rakhna ke na hon phaasle, rehna lag ke tum gale
Batla doongi main raasta, jab hongi raaste mein mushkilein
Ankhiyon se keh do royen na, in aankhon mein bas khushiyan hi khilein


kriya was doing nakhre in eating medicine...swayam showed her a sign of slap indicating tht if she wouldn't eat her would slap her...kriya made a face n looked the other way ...swayam turned her face...and requested..she smiled n ate her medicine..he hugged her...


Hamesha & forever, jab tak saanson ka saath hai
Hamesha & forever, jab tak taaron ki raat hai
Hamesha & forever, tab tak teri hi baat hai
Hamesha & forever dil mein tu..


kriya - rey..i hav a wish..last wish..


rey kept a finger on her lips - ur first wish..


kriya smiled - k so the wish is..i wanna rest peacefully in ur arms when i am taking my last breath..


a tear dropped from reys eyes- teri last breath toh abhi bahut door hai...


kriya gave a smile...


after 2 days..


the gang arrived with flowers n ballons to meet kriya..


kriya's mom ran out of her room yelling - doctor..


she was in tears..


they all droped all the things..


rey - aunty kya hua.??


swayam - hain aunty?? kriya thik hai na..


k's mom - voh beta kriya...doctor ko bolao jaldi..


rey runs to call the doctor..


n swayam goes inside to see kriya with sharon...


kriya was unable to breath n was coughing badly...her face had gone pale..


evryone was in tears..


doctor came in n told evryone to go out...

doc. putted an oxygen mask n her mouth..


he closed the room...


after 45 min..


doc. came out...


k's mom - kya hua,...voh thik hai na..😭


rey - doctor..she is fyn na..


doctor - i am sorry..she is nt left with much time..if u wanna meet her u can for the last time..rey broke down..


everyone went in..

k's mom hugged her tight..


kriya's eyes were half open..

her eyes was finding someone..


kriya - guys ...bola tha zayada time nahi hai..


swayam hold kriya hand..n put his head o her stomach n cried...- kyu jaa rahi hai..mera ek bar bhi nahi socha..


rey - comes in...


kriya looks at him and smiles - oh linecutter..mujhse akhri bar milo ge nahi..


rey goes to her..hugs her..


rey - i love u baatcutter..


kriya with alot of difficulty spoke.. - i ...i...love...u ...too...line...


rey - kriya??


he broke the hug n found kriya dead...


rey screamed - KRIYA!!


yes line...was the last word spoken by her...


after tht day everything was changed..


there was no weaklings and dazzling team anymore..there was only louins...rey was lonely he din't like to talk to anyone...swayam used to stay quite...sharon had stopped fighting cause she believed kriya was the only one who had the right to compete with her...

vishaka neha..used to cry day n night..vicky , nilesh , amar, bharat...evrything has changed..




after 11 yrs..


reyaansh singhania a dancer who was know all over the world..had everything..money , bunglow , cars,..name it n he had it...bt he was a really arrogant person..was rude...n used to stay away from girls...was lonely...


swayam shekhawat married to sharon rai prakash..loved her alot..bt was a quite person..he never used to share anything with anyone..cause only his bff has a right to know his secrets...he has no world except his family...had a dance institution named by kriya name...


THE END

😭 😔


soo here it ebnds...hope u all like it..aur mein toh bhakti hu kyunki pata hai mar padne ali hai..mein toh chali...











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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
woww...!!!! I m d frst one to comment...:)it's ossooommm...:) loved it...:) this end is infinitely tyms bttr then w8evr happening in d3...:( u described evrything vry well nd this sad is expected... Jst suprb update...:) thanxxx 4 pm...
Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
amazing os
it ws really vry.emotinal.
kriya is dead😭
kriya ke marne ke baad sab change ho gaye
ending ws vry sad

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
..
it ws jst awesum re..
it ws realy v .emotinal...and dn...her last wish ..wich he crects by sayng 1st...
i toh lvd it to the core...realy...and after ...her everythng changed...
lovd it...
Edited by KUSHA14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ku dear u r not 1st :P
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Kitna emotional kar diya..
Kria ko mar diya ...
I so hate these Sad Endings šŸ¤”...
But very well written 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
yup dear...i m d frst one ...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome
it was very heart touching
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Sad but touching ending :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭nice endingšŸ‘

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