Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: sweetysontakke
m also shocked like manvi...
i wish manvi can undstnd his state n
wont give chance to maya ...

thanks for reading and commenting

next update..coming soon..will keepya posted

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: madpaki
LOL loved virika
Omg Maya has the nerve
but loved manvi when she claimed
Virat as hers wow what a twist
Was an awesome update loved it
Continue soon and do pm me

Maya's character has a few things i like, I like her spirit to go after what she likes. If there was no good and bad in this world, she would rock it..Manvi is equally spirited, ofcourse she will try to beat Maya at her game..

thanks for the comments..keep reading..luv :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: twinklexx
Brilliant update
feeling bad for virmaan
contine soon pm plze wen u do 😊 😊

thank u..will send you a pm next time

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: js1234
how sad! I feel so bad for Virat as we all know he will hate himself for this for a long time to come!

Brilliantly portrayed though

yes..any honest lover would hate to put their love in such a situation;

though he didnt do it willfully, he was indirectly responsible to get his life to the point of the unspeakable act..thanks for you wonderful feedback..keep reading :):):)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: __Aarti__
wow yr !!!!

this was awesome ,left me speechless !!!!

beautifully written dear , continue soon dear want to read more .

thanks for the pm yr .

I got a lot of 'speechless' in comments..I sincerely hope thats a good thing..

thanks sweets for the wonderful comment and please keep reading..an emotional update on the way

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Suarez
Oh god...m feeling really bad for maanvi...n virat as well...he's gonna b so guilty !! nw i knw hw they gonna work it out !!
Wat a twist !! Nice update !
Waiting for the nxt one !!
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yaa..ofcourse they are going to work out..hence their marriage in the future as shown in the first few posts, they had come a long way and this is all that they had to go through..

please keep reading and giving your lovely feedback :):):) xo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Syed695
Surprise Update...! Felt bad for virat..looks like Maya;s plan to seperate virman...waiting for the nxt update...thnks for thepm!

yep..Syed..Virat and Manvi going through a very rough time..always appreciate your sincere feedback

will try to update as soon as I can..stay tuned😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Wow great update ⭐️... Totally unexpected twist.. So far I loved all the parts..But this one left me speechless..It was so unpredictable.. I think Virat cant be blamed for this incident..he was not in his senses.. But poor Maanvi.. She already had a painful past.. It was not easy for her to trust a guy.. to let someone in..but she did..She loved him.. But "her protector, the one she trusted more than her own self, turned into a predator".. Awesome lines.. You portrayed each and every emotion beautifully..👏👏.. I also loved the bonding of VV bros.. I really enjoyed the part where Viren was teasing Virat.. Im really eager to know what is going to happen next.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

ohh wow..thank you Meera, sorry could not reply to your earlier comments.

I really am glad you are back following the story and thanks for the wonderful feedback, I really appreciate it..again I hope 'speechless' is good..lol

Manvi has always been a victim in this story and she was emerging strong with Virat on her side but what will this current incident do to her and her relationship with Virat. Will she be able to silence her demons and emerge strong again or will she go in a downward spiral? Virat would go down with her if the later happens..I am just thinking of different consequences Manvi's state could result in..

thank u again..for sharing you thoughts..will try to post the next update very soon..luv :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: keertu
wow wat an update.i was smiling until virman 's party but after that i got emotional seeing manvi.😭
last line she doesn't want to see virat ever.😲continue soon and thanks for the PM.😊

thanks buddy..yep a shocker right! ..I tried to pillow the bullet with all those preceeding scenes at the airport and the coffee shop..

plzz keep following the the thread and will try to update very soon 😊