Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Loved the update.Awesome.Loved Virat more.Poor guy .Waiting to find out who drugged him. May be Maya.Loved Manvi here.U have explained her pain very well. love u 🤗.Loved everything about the update.Life is not a fairy tale and everything does not go well all the times.WOw a n awesome update yaar.👏👏👏.Thanks for the pm😊

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namylovkriyansh

@namylovkriyansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

update was nyc

i hope manvi dnt leav virat

i m sure awl this drug this reason his that cheap maya...

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: madhavichowdary
hey...different update...but i liked it...this is really a big twist...i wasn't expecting it...now i want to read next part immediately...but u said after one week...if u have time then update fast na...i really liked this part...thanks for the pm and take care...

Hey Madhavi, sorry was not able to reply earlier.

thank you so much for reading my story and the lovely comments😊 they really made me smile :)

..please keep reading and commenting..i will try to update as soon as I can...lots of luv🤗

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: preetipc
Loved the update.Awesome.Loved Virat more.Poor guy .Waiting to find out who drugged him. May be Maya.Loved Manvi here.U have explained her pain very well. love u 🤗.Loved everything about the update.Life is not a fairy tale and everything does not go well all the times.WOw a n awesome update yaar.👏👏👏.Thanks for the pm😊

Hi Preeti, ya yaar.. i feel really really sorry for both manvi and virat right now..they have an uphill journey ahead :)

hopefully u will like it😊 yep..life sucks most of the time..sorry this is the grumpy me..

but no..this is story and obviously it will have a happy ending..with some (or lots ;)) of struggles

thanks for reading and I love your comments, as always..luv u loads🤗

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh
update was nyc
i hope manvi dnt leav virat
i m sure awl this drug this reason his that cheap maya...

hello there...yes..there is a little mystery behind all this

hopefully it will come out well..thanks for commenting and following the story..keep reading as it will get very emotional in the next few updates..thanks a lot again..xoxo😊😊😊

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

wow wat an update.i was smiling until virman 's party but after that i got emotional seeing manvi.😭

last line she doesn't want to see virat ever.😲continue soon and thanks for the PM.😊

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Wow great update ⭐️... Totally unexpected twist.. So far I loved all the parts..But this one left me speechless..It was so unpredictable.. I think Virat cant be blamed for this incident..he was not in his senses.. But poor Maanvi.. She already had a painful past.. It was not easy for her to trust a guy.. to let someone in..but she did..She loved him.. But "her protector, the one she trusted more than her own self, turned into a predator".. Awesome lines.. You portrayed each and every emotion beautifully..👏👏.. I also loved the bonding of VV bros.. I really enjoyed the part where Viren was teasing Virat.. Im really eager to know what is going to happen next.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Surprise Update...! Felt bad for virat..looks like Maya;s plan to seperate virman...waiting for the nxt update...thnks for thepm!

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Suarez

@Suarez

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Oh god...m feeling really bad for maanvi...n virat as well...he's gonna b so guilty !! nw i knw hw they gonna work it out !!
Wat a twist !! Nice update !
Waiting for the nxt one !!
:)