SwaRon SS- It all starts with a cup of coffee - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Mihika...🤗

U know how I feel about this SS..its lovely ...innocent yet realistic...here the harsh reality strikes her that he dont love her...she is important for him...only as a friend...the beauty of this SS is beyond any words of appreciation...the love..the pain...longing...the confusion on her part...is beautifully described...


And his perfection only adds to her misery...

"Angry?" he giggled. "For what? Because you love me? Sharon, loving is a natural phenomenon. You don't choose to love. It just happens. It happened to you too. You started loving me. Why should I get angry? It all depends on your heart. It's totally out of your control. And if at all it was in your control, you wouldn't have fallen in love with me"

False.

"See, love makes people blind. I never fell for anyone. I won't say that loving is a crime. But sometimes, it is just not the right time to ask. Look at Rey and Kriya, they are so happy. I know you wanted the feelings to be mutual, and it is perfectly alright. It happens to everyone. But that doesn't give me any reason to be angry with a dear friend."


I loved these lines...so swayamish...not romantic but about love...her excitement ..her hope is beyond perfect...



"As I said before Sharon, I didn't fall in love with anyone during my college years. And I can't help it. Neither can you. So it's best if both of us live with the present and not think about the past so much. You are a very good friend Sharon and I can't lose you. I value your friendship a lot but I like you only as a friend. I don't lo..."

He wanted to say "love you" but he didn't. It would have sounded rude.

"You don't love me." I sighed.

He hung his head, as if he was ashamed about something.

"Swayam, don't be ashamed. It's fine." My heart ached as I said those words.


I wanted something else to happened there...still i loved the end...it was beautifully executed...i love the maturity in ur writing dear...lovely ...keep writing swthrt...😳




Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really didnt expect a sad ending when they wont be together!
its indeed hurtful when someone doesnt reciprocate your feelings..and you still keep on clinging to hopes!!
I wished you continued this story!!
nice update..!!
Edited by --Rumeli-- - 12 years ago
shaani2209 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...HOPE is something u need to hold...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the fact that you chose to end it as such !! Very realistic and I guess Swayam is just scared of losing Sharon as a friend which is why he doesn't want to give their relationship a chance !! That is very much understandable and I also loved the way that Sharon continues believing that Swayam will eventually confess to her one day !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
A wonderful end. Though i wanted a happy ending, it does have one in its own way.

Swayam came as a little insecure person to me here, who would not want to lose a friend lyk Sharon at any cost.

I really admired him wen he came to help her wid algebra.
Yes, lyk u rightly said, any1 other than him would hav been very uncomfortable, and awkward wid d situation.

But swayam handled it beautifully.

Wen he came to hug her in the end, i was really hoping dat he would say he loves her..he does, as a frnd 😳

And unknowingly a few tears came to my eyes as I read the last part.

Hope...its a vry strange emotion, just lyk in real d3, its swayam who has been living wid dat hope.

Thanku for the PM. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Although this is not the end which I have wanted for this SS but I can't stop marvelling at how beautifully you have composed this SS. It was indeed a pleasure reading this. Some amusing moments, some moments where I literally face palmed myself, some serious, some cute this SS had everything. Hopefully we will get a sequel to this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear...
Hope Swayam realizes his feelings soon...
Loved The update...
Thnkx for the PM...
Update next chapter soon and please do PM me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum awsum👏i loved d way u explained sharon's love n feelings for swayam... superb ff..i really loved d concept n d whole idea of it...it is so different n amazing concept...loved d way u r showin sharon's unconditional love for swayam...n yes i m waitin for d part wen he actually reciprocates her feelongs...😊😊😊plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for d pm..
loved d way u potrayed Sharon's unconditional love for swayam n on other hand swayam does nt want to lose his friendship with sharon
.. 👏
i Hope Swayam realizes his feelings soon...


Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome prt...
It ws emotional...
Luvd it...

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