U know how I feel about this SS..its lovely ...innocent yet realistic...here the harsh reality strikes her that he dont love her...she is important for him...only as a friend...the beauty of this SS is beyond any words of appreciation...the love..the pain...longing...the confusion on her part...is beautifully described...
And his perfection only adds to her misery...
"Angry?" he giggled. "For what? Because you love me? Sharon, loving is a natural phenomenon. You don't choose to love. It just happens. It happened to you too. You started loving me. Why should I get angry? It all depends on your heart. It's totally out of your control. And if at all it was in your control, you wouldn't have fallen in love with me"
False.
"See, love makes people blind. I never fell for anyone. I won't say that loving is a crime. But sometimes, it is just not the right time to ask. Look at Rey and Kriya, they are so happy. I know you wanted the feelings to be mutual, and it is perfectly alright. It happens to everyone. But that doesn't give me any reason to be angry with a dear friend."
I loved these lines...so swayamish...not romantic but about love...her excitement ..her hope is beyond perfect...
"As I said before Sharon, I didn't fall in love with anyone during my college years. And I can't help it. Neither can you. So it's best if both of us live with the present and not think about the past so much. You are a very good friend Sharon and I can't lose you. I value your friendship a lot but I like you only as a friend. I don't lo..."
He wanted to say "love you" but he didn't. It would have sounded rude.
"You don't love me." I sighed.
He hung his head, as if he was ashamed about something.
"Swayam, don't be ashamed. It's fine." My heart ached as I said those words.
I wanted something else to happened there...still i loved the end...it was beautifully executed...i love the maturity in ur writing dear...lovely ...keep writing swthrt...đł