Dear Tina,
I am very pleased that you have managed to make this chapter funny while avoiding the ridiculous. It is nicely balanced now. I particularly liked Riya's cheeky retort:
"Yes, how intelligent you are that you guessed it on your own. To chale? And yep smile please," which captures the spirit of the whole exercise perfectly.
If I were Arjun and wanted to get my own back for being not just dragged into the mandir, but also forced to touch the pujari's feet, I would burn the toast, turn the scrambled eggs into a hard, indigestible mess, and water the orange juice to a Tang-like consistency. After all, Riya has said nothing about the breakfast being edible!😉
Shyamala Aunty
thanks to everyone for their wonderful ideas, will try to use most of them and please enjoy this ride...
It's only meant to be funny, and hope everyone like it😳
Sorry i know i havent been able to comment on any other friends stories, havent got much time lately, but i promise i will do it later😳
So let's not bore you people anymore, so here's Chapter 2:
