SS:The Challenge Final PartA/B pg79/82 18/03

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nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

wow wonderful sooo funny!!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Amazing update dear :)

loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow...omg...i love riya...can't wait for next part...super awesome!!

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scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

haha! poor arjun... he has to keep his smile on at all times and now he has to breakfast for riya! pity arjun but a challenge is a challenge... can't wait to read more abt what else riya is going to make arjun do! please update soon!

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shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

wow yaar it is wounderful
continue soon
arjun cooking for riya so sweet
sry for late
thanks for pm

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little.princess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

It was wonderful... Wonder wat all she'll ash him to do within this 24 hrs..

Hope he'll understand her properly..

Thanx 4 the pm and update the nxt part soon..

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sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

hehe...to smile and be calm and polite for 24 hrs is the toughest job for arjun 😃

riya is too clever...knows how to handle arjun 😉

both offering prayers and touching feet of priest..lovely!!!

interesting precap 😉

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Afifa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

OMG! You finally continued! I was thinking when you're gonna continue.
Thanks for the PM <3

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sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dear Tina,

I am very pleased that you have managed to make this chapter funny while avoiding the ridiculous. It is nicely balanced now. I particularly liked Riya's cheeky retort: "Yes, how intelligent you are that you guessed it on your own. To chale? And yep smile please," which captures the spirit of the whole exercise perfectly.

If I were Arjun and wanted to get my own back for being not just dragged into the mandir, but also forced to touch the pujari's feet, I would burn the toast, turn the scrambled eggs into a hard, indigestible mess, and water the orange juice to a Tang-like consistency. After all, Riya has said nothing about the breakfast being edible!😉

Shyamala Aunty

thanks to everyone for their wonderful ideas, will try to use most of them and please enjoy this ride...

It's only meant to be funny, and hope everyone like it😳

Sorry i know i havent been able to comment on any other friends stories, havent got much time lately, but i promise i will do it later😳

So let's not bore you people anymore, so here's Chapter 2:

Chapter 2