Swaron OS - It is only YOU! - Page 3

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Thanks to your writing index..i found your first creation!

Well done tanya!!
It was soo cutee...sharon and swayam :-*
The converasation was funny and cute..especially that part wen she shouts swayamm and he shouts..sharon..sharon where are you? LOL :-D :-D

When she sits like a kid on the bed..it was adorablee!
Then swayam ka gesture was laajawaab!
Banda bada jaldi aa gaya..!
It was very cute.
And then their first kiss!
Awww...choo chweet.

Ending was beautiful too!
Didn't seem to me that it was your first creation.
Fabulous work.

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

@ Surbhi : I am glad you like it as i thing it is quiet a rubbish! 😆
It was my first ever attempt on One Shot but now i write a little better! 😊
As i said i'll keep bugging, so when are you updating Hopes and Desires?😛[/B]</font>