ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

First and foremost the opening page is very medieval and looks stunning.Finally our dearest Innkeeper gets a chance to introduce himself to many who do not know him.He is a very kindhearted man..I have to tell u that.Hooded lady made her presence known too.
Now coming to the update.Finally babes...his heart is thawing.He let her know something about him which he never shared with anyone I believe.She is gonna hold on to it and will one day drain out all the bitterness in him and replace it with love...one day...may not be in the near future..but someday...The transformation in her attitude ,the determination in her eyes..oh boy...mighty lord is in for the ride of his life.He is asking her to go away...not because he is angry..but because he is scared..scared of a little village girl..capturing and imprisoning his heart...chills and thrills again my friend.

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Congo on the nee thread... Have a blast!!!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Congratulations, Lin!!

Khushi is leaving now??!

What is going to happen next?! VERY EAGER TO KNOW!!

And you're leaving now? :(

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Okay, did I miss something in my speed reading? What is the event that is happening in a few days that he wants her gone from? I'm embarrassed to ask, but oh well. What can I do?😳

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Another amazing chappie by u lin..

I love the way u slowly build this story, it is like watching the serial itself.. and the beauty of it is that the tale walks on the paths of the show taking better routes each time. You bring the chemistry alive and more importantly your characters are very consistent and very well described. The scenes are perfect and the unspoken words, feelings and love is so perfectly described..

I guess Anjali's special day is her anniversary..nice ... will be waiting for you to get back lin..

Another thing i must mention, i love your language.. the way u have stuck to the medieval setting and the words used never fail to amaze me

you are a fab writer hun

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vrinda-95

@vrinda-95

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Congrats for the third thread,dear!

Kushi gets to see a glimpse of his bruised heart again;and the pure soul of hers is crying for him inspite of the hurt he gave her .What an unique girl!

Have a good vacation dear Aquiline!!

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

congrats on yr new thread...awesome updates... loved it...

njoy yr holidays 👍🏼

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Congrats on new thread..nice updates..

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

C0ng0 f0r the new thread, see y0u 0n 25th and Arnav needs s0me seri0us spanking!!

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medharees

@medharees

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

I woke up to a new thread
What a pathway is being tread
A mere coffee it might be to you and me
But In his own way he is saying sorry
In voluntarily he lets her see
A part of him which is blurry
The hurt, the pain was only felt by his Di
Now part of it is Khushi ...😉

Edited by medharees - 12 years ago

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