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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: aru_86
okk okk now will u tell ur whole story in chat ya update bhi karogi?? i am waiting

that's my nature at all😳...isi liye mein koi suspence nehi rakh pati😒...meri friends bhi meri story padhte hue disappointed ho jate hay...kyon ki mein unhe bhi story ka next part bata deti hoon😆

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

@surprising-----geezzz 15 min ke liye forum pe ayi usmein 5 min part 4 dhoondhne me gaye. ab itni mehnat karke ayi hoon to long comment to karke hi jaungi.
1. ur titles are awsome dude!!!!!!!!!! where dya get those ideas from???😲 i loved the title of part 4. and the titles(-subtitles i think) betwn the chapter are a good idea.
2. nandini's gone completely on her pa. evil, cruel , heartless cold creature! she'd make a good vampire literally. i just feel bad for the bitter father -dad relation cgm and bindu share in ur story that i sincerely hope that in real life they nver had it bitter.
3. eagerly waiting for the cornelia part. i read urs and aru di convo on pg 18 (i guess). widowed cornelia's remarriage seems a bit odd. it can also be that when cgm renounced everything and left cornelia must've been prego that time n she nevr told coz of fear that acharya wont accept her 2nd child. well my imagination!!!!!😉
4. blood transfusion!! interesting yaar lekin blood andar dalenge kaise??? tab to plastic tubes aur baki machines nahi the na?? baki imagination acchi hai.👍🏼

5. and no yaar m not hurt by wat u said(wrote) coz thats the type of reactions i always get . reasons being-- m too serious abt my studies and i love history with my life. that sums up my co-students considering me a geek. overall i 've never learnt to get offended coz everyone has their own views and personality😛.

lastly---
REQUEST:

Plz apni story ke liye index bana na. dhoondhne me aasani hogi. + teri story ka link lagane ke liye pehle ke parts par catch up to karna padega.

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

aur ho sake to hamare ff pe bhi kabhi long comments choda kijiye!!😆

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: surprising

that's my nature at all😳...isi liye mein koi suspence nehi rakh pati😒...meri friends bhi meri story padhte hue disappointed ho jate hay...kyon ki mein unhe bhi story ka next part bata deti hoon😆

my nature is also same😆

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

nice part...but i m little confused just tell me one thing that this story is going in two parts...one is in last part n one is in present...right...
i mean ek part main past main kya hua tha,i mean that night sequence is going on n ek part main present situation right?????????...
n nandu ko toh full too vamp bana diya yaar...
update soon... :-)

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

I can't believe that I'm a quite fortunate writer to get such beautiful commentator readers.😛
Especially MONI, ARU, POLLY & GIA'S mesmerizing criticism as well as queries force me innovate new ideas...though odd or impossible😳. They almost become my PATHFINDER in the way of writing.Immeasurable thanks to them.Please Keep Criticizing.

Regards,
Rumpu.

P.S: My other readers, I like your comments too. Who'll not be happy receiving lovely appreciation??So continue commenting. Just a request...please enlighten me about my faults.

Edited by surprising - 13 years ago

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coolpavni

@coolpavni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

hmmm first of all sorry for commenting lately...was busy dez days...well, its an amazing update...beautiful convo btwn all characters...thn wat was mihika doing...?? why did our samrat slap her...?? [B][/B]

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702755

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: surprising
I can't believe that I'm a quite fortunate writer to get such beautiful commentator readers.😛
Especially MONI, ARU, POLLY & GIA'S mesmerizing criticism as well as queries force me innovate new ideas...though odd or impossible😳. They almost become my PATHFINDER in the way of writing.Immeasurable thanks to them.Please Keep Criticizing.

Regards,
Rumpu.

P.S: My other readers, I like your comments too. Who'll not be happy receiving lovely appreciation??So continue commenting. Just a request...please enlighten me about my faults.

awww 😳

you are so cute.😳

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Dostoon, I started the story as a ss- but now I think it's not going to be ended as so. That's why I'm giving a character sketch...plz share your views.

Samrat Chandragupt Mourya: Being the 1st king of Undivided India, He's such a man who is quite confident about his valour & gallantry but astonishingly hell confused about different type of human relation. In the story his last life is depicted when he'll be able to make out the meaning of
LOVE -to choose the right person whom he loved but in subconscious mind.

Acharya Chanakya: He's the eternal pathfinder of Mourya. In this story he's not the most "Rough & Tough" but a green man with hearty feelings. He has a great remorse that he can't revive at least console Mourya in his last time...but he'd nothing to do.

Nandini: She's Dhanand's daughter & bound to wed Mourya under the pressure of Acharya to fortify Samrat from people who supported Nands. She hated Mourya a lot -but in her last life she'd a complete mental change.

Durdhara: 1st queen of Mourya & the princess of simant pradesh. She'd died a painful death while giving birth to Prince Bindusaar.

Shashank:Childhood friend of Mourya & fully devoted to him.He'd soft corner for Mihika.

Mihika: The leader of Mourya's female army...a mad lover of Samrat, but almost have no feeling about Shashank.

Cornelia:Greek wife of Mourya, shy & intelligent...wants him like nothing. She'd take a drastic step to be with Mourya but unfortunately it earns Mourya's hatred.

Seleucus: In absence of Alexander, he's the greek king of eastern india & Cornelia's father. He's not agreed wholeheartedly with Mourya-Cornelia's marriage but had to bow his head in front of Mourya's vigour & Acharya's tricks. He'll be not so sad with Mourya's death.

Chitra: Childhood pal of Mourya & loved him so much but never opened her heart to him. A secret deal was performed between Acharya & her.

Bindusaar:1st child of Mourya...respects Nandini as God, disrespectful to Acharya as he believes if he wanted- he can stop Dhara & Mourya's immature death. He's normal with Cornelia - like friend.

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago