SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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Divya

@Divya1503

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Farah di!!!🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

i'm very late!! Sorry!!

N the update is awesome!!! devi mayya ne bhi what the kaha?? 🤣 🤣 Loved the update!!!👏 👏 👏

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Whoa!

Let me tell you guys .. I am overwhelmed by your responses! I have got a terrible cold and was mostly away from the forum .. when I am back, your lovely comments made my day. 😊

I was rather unconfident with this update since I wrote after long and asked a dear friend to review it. Thanks to Dips (bs_deeps) for giving me the push to post it! 😊

I will try to reply to some of the comments, as much as I can .. the next update will be by this week, hopefully.

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Reread it n lov it all the more

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

wonderful !!! liked the planning by the DEVI Maiyaa mainly WHAT THE of DEVI MAIYAA... even DM run of ideas for ARNAV & KHUSHI... wow great... thanks of pm dear but do update it regularly... 😊

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

really missed your updates!

loved the update!the whole Aloo puri part was sooo cute!

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zooni

@zooni.blue

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

super update ! after a real long time!

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samster03

@samster03

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

that was one rocking update buddy..! Khushi was very adorable and crazy..! Loved devi maiyya's dialogues..!

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

OMG!!gud things doo cum 2 n end bt i hope Arnav ki roz ki lift wont stop..oh d chptr was tooo hilarious..jahan d frequency of rabbba-ve was increasin..wahin dey wer gettin more close-er..loli wndr Khushi itti baaatein kahan se laati h..lold mice part..d 1 morsel part..d punjaabi hdaaba part..too much..:Dn Arnav enjoys dt nw..dey bth wer happy in d car..lyk unki chotti c duniya..😆😆😆oh..well..nw Simran z back..n Arnav ne toh Khushi ko palat k b nai dekha..i hope she wont take it juz-professional..i mean she wud think Arnav does ol d same wid ol d ppl..nuthin big..wndr hw wud d stry progress..dts totally ur part..:Dbt sochna..n soch k hasna z our part..lol

i loved it..:)
thnxx..:)

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783730

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

I just read this ENTIRE SS..

Was generally scanning through the Fan Fiction sections..

Stories with more than 1 thread usually makes me stay away from them

but this SS's name was pretty fascinating

So decided to give it a try

and I must say

You write brilliant!!!👏

I'm in love with this story!!!

Please do update ASAP

I love how you've put in Devi Maiyyan's thoughts in this too..

The line "DM rolled her eyes" cracked me up..🤣

Its 2AM.. And I started laughing really bad.. My dog was sleeping right next to my bed and she got up all startled and looked at me with the HAVE-U -LOST-IT look. (She can be pretty demeaning at times.. sigh)😒

Anyway, coming back to the story..

You've kept the essence of the characters intact and used it in a different way..

Kudos for that!!!😃

Arnav and Khushi are too cute in this SS..

Khushi feeding Arnav was EPIC!!!😳

LOVED IT😃

I repeat,

DO UPDATE ASAP!!!!

I've sent you a friend request...

Do PM me

Off to read your other stories😊

~Wini