SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 11.. Khushi touched the scar looking at herself in the mirror. She smiled. Not every scar gave bad memories...hmm yeas not every scar gave bad memories..love their Rabba-ve..I like Payal and Kushi conversation..she is adorably sweet & crazy..Aww Akash caught him for googling the lemony fragrances..haha..but I just love the moment when he said sorry to her..hayee arnav in black and khushi in red saree..yeh mastana mausam and their almost kiss or may I say their complete kiss.LOL..he was mesmerized seeing her in red saree like in the show..Lovely part..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1052

Part 12..

The atmosphere you've created with your words..Its mind-blowing..his possessiveness for her and jealousy seeing, talking khushi with someone else makes him angry..Firstly he hurt her in his rage and then he realized that he hurt her..his feathery kisses and touches..very very romantic and heartwarming...marvelous chapter...

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1053

Now moving to the next thread..damn the phone call😡..A biggest enemy, hurdle or may I say an Interruption in arshi Rabba-Ve's..😳...👏beautiful story..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1054

Oopss ..the next are closed so I'm commenting here for next parts.. :)))

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1055

Part 10..Awesome chapter..After their literally kissed ..the awkwardness and the uneasiness they are feeling is understandable..and I love it the way you write their feelings and thoughts for what just happened in between them..but where you 've ended..Arnav's cell is left in khushi bag and La call is coming..I hope La doesn't come between them because hardly they are coming closer to each other..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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14.. Superb chapter... Seeing concerns for Khushi in his eyes... I'm relieved that something they shared was just not allurement.. It was pure love... A love which lover feel when his/her love in pain.."dil ki zuban hoti hain ankhein..ranj aur khushi ki tarjuman hoti hain ankhein...jab ankhein parhne lagain dil k haal...samjh lo, aghaz e muhabbat ki pehchan hoti hain ankhein.."
Love the scene when Khush just pushed him under her bed because Buaji was coming at any moment... I'm thoroughly enjoying OL&L...awesome update..

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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15.. Fabulous chapter..love the way you've penned it..whenever khushi's thoughts were wandering over their moments..her shyness, her blushing hard...shows that how she cherished those moments with arnavji..she already fallen in love with him..which khushi didn't encourage till now..Aww how sweet ..arnav gifted her jhola..that's really adorable gesture by him...and this scene reminds me the time in IPKKND where he gifted her designer bag and she doesn't like it at all..LOL...and la just ruined her unbloomed dreams..telling her that she and ASR seeing each other..poor khushi her hear broken...beautifully written especially last half..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 16.. wow yep there is no doubt in that lavanya is an intelligent and smart lady..She figure out that there is something between ASR & khushi..I am relieved that la has a positive character and she didn't come between them..Actually she tells him that if he wants any help ..she was there for him..that's really commendable.. but I don't know I feel bad for LA...Khushi her best friend D.M..when LA tell him that she told the truth about their seeing each other.arnav was hell worried about her..because he thought that maybe he lost her...that's shows how he deeply loves her..and khushi too reciprocate his feelings..superb part..

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Gul Mallik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1059

guyyys misss me okkk

I WILL MISS U GUYS TOOO

i m not going to be there for the nxt two months

strictly NO IF and FB

exams coming ahead, have to study.

xoxo

Gul

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aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1060

Here I completed another thread of this beautiful story of Arnav and Khushi and I must say I loved it. Sometimes it was fun and hilarious with Arnav confused especially when Khushi said she was ready.. God he traveled from love to marriage in few seconds and then he thinks he isn't ready. Is he kidding me!!! 😆 Also I loved how he took her for breakfast date and did she really ask him "Kaun Arnav" ?? 😲 I so wanted to answer her "Khushi jis Arnavji ke baare mein tum din raat sochti rehti ho, jalebiyaan banati rehti ho, jisko soch ke tum roz taiyaar hoti ho wahi same to same Arnav 😉😆"

And did they just kiss or interruption ruined it?
Running to next thread now... 😛