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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
awww.. such a sweet start...
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Baby by now u wud have known that i am so eager for further updates from you !! 😳😳

Loved the start ..Please continue soon .. 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona3

Baby by now u wud have known that i am so eager for further updates from you !! 😳😳

Loved the start ..Please continue soon .. 😊😊


Wish update soonish! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
awsm start...👏👏..plz continue and plz PM me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds very interesting Shilpa cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
The prologue is too interestin :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for the late update,everyone.
I had posted it here but there was power failure 'coz of some ^&%&^ people.
Can you guys believe it? I read all the unread PM's..!! <Obviously, they were 215!>
So, there will be quicker updates...
'coz No unread PM's = No more time on IF for reading PM's = More time for updates. 😃
Also, I'll be updating my FF: You're mine, Forever! & new SS for UL, SS: Delhi-Mumbai-Delhi Soon!!
Here you go with part One:

Happy reading :)





Part One: Keeping Promises




"Arnav, di, lets go there.. See how cool is there"

"You mean, in the sea?? And that too without our parents" Anjali said scared.

"Yes, just for few minuets"

"No, I won't. You both go. I am fine here"

"OK, chalo Khushi."

He walked smilingly to the sea when she slipped her hands in his.

"Chhotey, Khushi beta, don't go there.. There will be dark soon. We have to go in our rooms na! See, how di is coming with us!" Asha, mother of Arnav told them.

"Bus 2 minute aunty"

"No Khushi.. Arnav beta, come here.. Take her with you" Garima said.

"Lets go Khushi"

"Arnav, tu mera friend hai ki mummy ka?? Mera hai to chal"

"Aunty, maa we will be there in few minutes. You go. Khushi wants to play for some time." He informed Garima.

"Ye bachche bhi naa! Never leave each other alone... They are so cute together, aren't they?"

"Yeah!"




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"Khushi, now lets go. See, its very dark here."
"Okay."

They started walking.

"Arnav, I am so scared. I am scared of dark"

"I know Khush! See, m here with you. No one can harm you when I am with you."
"We are just 10 years old Arnav! Anybody can kidnap us easily. And that too we are in a new city"

"Ssshhh!! Keep calm and walk with me. Our hotel is just near!"

"Raksha karna devi mayya!" She held his hand tightly.

"Here we go! See, we are here. I told you na! No one will harm you when you're with me! I have promised you! and I never break my promises"

"Thank you Arnav!! Thank you so muchh!!"

She kissed him on his chick and left.





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"Yeh kya ho gaya Bhagwaan! Why you did this to my chhotey? What is his fault in this?? And Khushi? Why??" Anjali was shedding tears seeing her brother with fracture on one hand but still sleeping peacefully.




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note: ADD WhatsMyName for the PMs... But please don't send a request if you wish to remain silent. It may seem rude, but PMing people is a lot of problem, especially so, when you do not comment. Please don't expect a PM from me of the updates.





Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
this update cheered me up
and definitely brought a smile to my face
thanx for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
choo cute..a promise that is not meant to be broken..a gr8 start shilpa..really nice👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
how he got factured
update soon but bit long
thanks for pm n add in ur buddy
i can coz my mail is not working
i tried to add but it rejecting showing some error
hope u add me
but its a nice n cheaful update he keeps his promis for protect her
lovely...
thanks again for pm

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