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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

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yipeee...me first one...

i guess dis will b first tym i'll b responding so srsly...n confusingly to any story...!!!😊

i'm srsly confused...wo major kaun hai?? n whr is ariya kab aayenge??..n omg...u wer IF national poet...bt aftr reading dis...u r suspense queen from now on!!!😆

aftr evry story i hav my own guessess...bt for dis im not able to make any...😔

is it dat major riya's or arjun's ke papa???🤔

or is dat major arjun itself ...n dat dairy belongs to her wife riya...or soemthing???🤔

i guess major ki age mil jaati to madad ho jaati...guessing mein lolxx... !!!!🤣

n yea aftr reading dis part ...i dunno wats d further story... bt evn thn wen i read dis...i start humming only one song...
"do pal ka khabo ka karwa aur hum chal diye tum kaha hum kaha..."

awesome update...it was much better than wat i thot n how i thot...!!!

plss jaldi update karna...mein wallah intezaar kar rahii hoon...

n yea hazaar taliyaan tere liye...!!!! 👏

Edited by purecure - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

intresting nd funny chaptr... update soon...

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fiza

@Fiza28

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

reserved... me off to bed ami is up *running lol* ill read n comment later paaka promise sry

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Shru did you happen to watch Student of the Year brfore you started writing this?

Rohan and Abhi, very nice, so who is the Major? And who does the diary belong to?

Okay too many questions, I will wait until your update to find out.

Thanks for the PM, really curious now.

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Shru

@funkylicious

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Shru did you happen to watch Student of the Year brfore you started writing this?

Rohan and Abhi, very nice, so who is the Major? And who does the diary belong to?

Okay too many questions, I will wait until your update to find out.

Thanks for the PM, really curious now.

ummm so many questions all at once... okay I'll take it one by one!

Shilpa actually I couldn't think of any names, so keeping their friendship in mind from SOTY I thought of adding their names not Characters😉😆

Major to be revealed tomorrow😛

Yes, I think it's better off waiting..its just tomorrow😉

Thanks for liking it😳

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

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shru you are brilliant as a poet dear,I seriously mean it 👏 👏
the update created so much suspence,wondering who the major is..didnot leave a single clue even writer madam 😉 😆
name of the cadets are cool, Rohan & Abhi the hottis of SOTY 😳 😆
whos diary was that??
OMG so many questions are roaming around my head 😲
so update soon(I know you will as you promised to finish it before 12th 😛 )
love you Shru 🤗🤗

Edited by KiSha13 - 12 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Firstly i am listening to the song
'har sawal ka jawab nahi mil sakta'
n ur update is full of sawals
>who is the girl to whom diary belongs
>who is the major
>is major arjun
>is major rathore
>where are riya n arjun
>is major young n smart or oldie
>why major wants dat diary
>is it out of curiosity or woh us diary ko pehchanta hai
boht sawal aur ek jawab aapka agla update isliye yeh aise sawal nai hain jin ka jawab nai mil sakta so if u dont want me to write foolish comments den update soon
Sami kitni chalak ho gayi hai apna nikalna ata hai

Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago