SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN - Page 3

Originally posted by: shah10

Wow .nice

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Whenever I read AriYa in a post, it leaves me a beautiful smile. I think we all can depend on our creativity in terms of writing/sigs and all, to show the world of AriYa.

Loved how you started it . I am curious now.. Please do continue ASAP.😃

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Shru wow kya concept hai aur kya likhne ka andaaz hai superb.loved it so much something related to poetry is just wow u know na poetry is my weakness
continue me waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: -Zana-

Lovely update. Very well written. Thankyou for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: purecure

"Maa Tujhe Salaam...ooo Maa Tujhe Salaam"🤣

haan actually yeh cadets ke liye hota hai usually but actually tere pe jaa raha hai is waqt...i jst mean hats-off dear...!!!👏

prologue itna achha hai to kahani obviously acchi hogi...!!👍🏼

haan...kitna obvious tha... wo teri hi poem thi...!!!😉

no ...bt poem was jst grt...!!!😊

great start ...!!! looking forward to read it more...

aasha hai mere comments ne aapki sahayata aur utsukta ki ho...!!!😆

(melodrama humme bhi karna aata hai🤣)

abh mai tujhe kya bolu sab kuch toh pehle hi bol chuki hu...

and yes is comment ne definitely meri bahut badi sahyaat ki hai aur utsukta badai hai

Originally posted by: Fiza28

wow my shru my anarkali kya baat hai i loved it

it was beautiful sachi yaar i love ur shayri uff so talented

update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: nivanthi2

omg i love that lines they are magical !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️ continue sooon dear!

Originally posted by: tani23

LuVed d prologue ...

Deariee pls Continue "Fast"

waiting for Story

Chapter 1

It had been a day since the cadets from the military camp discovered the book. Sadly they were badly occupied in their respective tasks. The book was left on cadet 1's table upside down.

Cadet 2 walks into his room, complaining to himself.

What is this seriously I thought kuch toh fun hoga academy mai. But no training, training and training. Voh Major kitna khadus hai yaar, he said out loud annoyed.

'Yaar Ro (Cadet 1) stop complaining' said Cadet 2 as he crashed his body on his single bed.

Shut up Abhi (Cadet 2), Ro yelled back throwing his shoes in the air, and thumped himself on chair. He banged his forehead on the table; Ro further moved his hand around on table for water.

Ye kal mili diary hai na?, inquired Ro curiously

Abhi: Haan yaar vahi diary hai, jab bhi padne dekhta hu ajeeb sa lagta hai.

Ro: Kyu? Aisa kya hua?

'Aarey it's filled with bakwas shayari's' Abhi pouted.

Ro: Mujhe shayari's pasand hai yaar, kitni romantic hoti hai.

Abhi: Tu aur shayari's chal bhag yaha se! he said mockingly

Ro: kash mai pad pata yaar lekin its light out time. Hitler ata hi hoga.

MAJOR walks steadily without missing a beat, left right left right'continuing the footsteps were approaching them.

Light out guys, major ordered.

Ro and Abhi were off their seats and firmly replied, Yes Sir.

Half an Hour later, the light being out, Ro crept out of his bed to the table.

Abhi was deep asleep, he mummed in his sleep 'I love you my pankhi''

Ro made a disgusted face as he heard Abhi in his sleep, 'Seriously guitar ko sleep mai I love you bolne ki kya zarurat hai? IDIOT''he whispered amusedly.

Ro abruptly heard footsteps approaching; he was frozen at his location in front of the table.

Shit shit shit he sweared at him, but sighed in relief as the footsteps couldn't be heard. Ro tip toed to his bed hurriedly covered his body with the blanket.

Major peeked in one-eyed through the slight opened door; he noticed a book no rather a dairy he thought. He tip toed marching into Abhi and Ro's (The Cadets) room.

Aaa meri pankhi ko chodo'.he howled.

The lights were turned on, Ro acted as his sleep was abruptly ruined. He rubbed his eyes, Sir aap yaha?

Major was shocked he composed himself speedily, 'I heard few noises, so had to come in to check up on you trouble makers.' He sternly replied.

Alright everyone go, Major ordered the group of cadets that had gathered in Abhi and Ro's room.

Abhi continued yelling in his sleep, Major was annoyed by Abhi's behaviour he held the jar of water that was placed next to Abhi's bedside table; and poured it over his head.

Ro controlled his laughter while Abhi cursed Ro. Major ordered both to sleep; he stopped on his way and asked, 'Can I take that diary with me?'

Abhi was surprised, he arched his eye-brow towards Ro and smirked.

Ro kept a stern face as Major contacted his eyes direct which send shivers down Ro's body, mainly goose bumps.

Ro searched for words, Major asked once again, CAN I? Ro instantly nodded his head in reply.

'Mai janta hu Cadet Nanda' he replied smiling involuntarily.

Rohan Nanda aka Ro, kept staring at the blank door wondering what it could be.

'Did you see him?' Ro asked Abhi

'Abe ja na UNCLE ka koi purana chakar rahi hogi' Abhi replied teasingly

'What the? Kal discuss karte hai yaar' Ro said jeeringly.

Abhi smirked as he dozed off to sleep.