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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story was all that you promised it'd be...Short & sweet & cute & heart-warming!😃

Mean Arnav!!😡Who does that to the girl he loves?😲

& Bauji???Now we can all deduce where Khushi gets her dramatic genes from!😆

& Khushi's declaration of love infront all was so endearing in it's honesty that it did remind me of Simran from DDLJ before you turned Shashi Gupta into Balraj Singh!!

Amazing, Z...Come back soon & keep lots more like this coming!😃
Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's over 😭 but.this one was wonderful.
Fun with twists and turns and the unthinkable happend everytime we predicted.something.
Hehrh. This one was wonderful.update.
I luv how arnav planned against everyone 😳
And ddlj style sashi uncle told yes to kushi.
Brilliant update. Thnx for the PM
Edited by mansi_47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a beautiful tale
Sweet, short with a happy fairy tale ending
Thank you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehhehe...i knew the entire family is filmly :))
Please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hehehehe I knew it that it all will be a conspiracy but it would be a Drama between Arnav and guptas was an unexpected twist and was too good. Poor khushi but she finally got her DDLJ style ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!! BUT..what I didnt know was dhruv was switching sides..lol..BUT STILL I KNEW KHUSHI WAS BEING PLAYED WITH 😆 and I thought Arnav too but now I realized it was his plan..the MASTERMIND! Lol AWEESSSOMEEE UPDATE!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wasn't that filmy...I was sad for Khushi and then I realised they were all just acting! Loved the update!
And have fun in Iran! I wish I could go there someday!
Edited by nazibah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
How cool is this?

First is, I just read chap 5 and was thinking to comment "What the hell with Shashi now" and thought may be this was all a drama planned by Anjali or Nani..

Second cool factor is the drama.. And the reason for creating this one.. Filmy reason :-o <-- I was like this smiley when I read that reason.

But the drama was so furious that I for a moment thought it was all real..! Even the small understanding between Shyam and Arnav doesnt made any sense in me at that moment!! :P

This is one big cutty cute story!

And I love you for telling this to me in your own cool way, Zehy!!

Thanks for the pm!

And Happy journey dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
10 days ///really gonna miss your updates,,,,
Thak you for completing this as you said...
and wish you a very happy journey... loved it... so much...
Poor khushiii...
IShe became the bakara of all these things...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant update . You fooled not only Khushi but us readers too... Yesterday I felt angry towards Druv and the Lavanya cane in between so its seems like some fishy but what happends now it was a drama and mastermind behind was none other than Arnav. Zehra I love you damn it. Thanks lot for such an awesome twist. Thanks for pm

Happy journey... Inshah Allah see you by 16. If will miss you.
Edited by riafna - 12 years ago

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