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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Congo on the new thread di!!🥳

You finished one whole thread of your lovely FF thanks to your hardwork...and some people's spamming skills!😆

This FF is so awesome I expect 2-3 more threads to be made!!

Waiting for the next update!!

Lovely edit for your FF!!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread!! I love this ff and you too!! So I am really really really happy! You are one of my favourite writers here! Looking forward to the next update very eagerly!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When WIll we get to read the update
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Update ;]
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I cant wait for the update ;]😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Hey Friends ...thanx a lot for liking my work... i love reading your lovely comments..please continue commenting as they are my sole inspiration for writing ...will be waiting for ur comments and feedback(positive and negative all are welcomed)


Thank u all for liking this FF...😊


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Hey guys...This is the 11th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ...sorry for being late...i am not keeping well from past 10 days.. thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊



Recap:

Swayam took unconscious pari to their farm house….Tanya asked both Swayam and Pari…if they knew each other….


Chapter-11


Angel…do you know my daddy…Tanya asked…

I know THOSE EYES…she responded….

I can see love in those EYES..LOVE FOR ME….she said….. barely audible to anyone…

But he heard it……he could hear her heart beats…it was impossible to miss her words……her voice….

Her voice was like sweet honey for him….his ears ..his heart …craved for that voice…

She is my sharon…I can feel it...my heart can't be wrong in recognizing her….but why is she having that expression on her face….as if she don't know me…as if she couldn't recognize me……how is it possible…my Sharon will recognize me …even blindfolded….


This is not the way my Sharon will react after meeting ….after a gap of three long years….she should be in my arms by now….she didn't even tried to come close to me….that's not the Sharon I know….

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He entered their room …it was dark….he checked the time….11.30 PM….

Its late …she must be tired…I better change and sleep quietly….the day was so long and tiring…..he thought….

He kept his bag on the side table…loosened his tie…removed shoes…and went to washroom ….

He climbed the bed after changing in to nightwear …. The moonlight coming from the window gave him a chance to look at his sleeping angel's face…. She was looking heavenly with the moonlight falling on her angelic face…her beautifully carved eyes…. Small but perfect nose….full lips … she was glowing ….looking unreal….her beauty was unreal….

How can somebody look so beautiful .. while sleeping…he said to himself….

He went close to her ..bent on her and planted a kiss on her perfectly carved lips…

Sorry princess…m late today…had lots of work in office…good night….he said to his sleeping angel….

He caressed her hair …kissed her again…and tried to sleep…it was a long tiring day for him….

He closed his eyes… .trying hard to sleep….felt something soft…touching his cheek…

He opened his eyes…and saw her ..she was wide awake…looking at him…

Hey princess…..i thought u slept…he said…in a sleepy tone…

I tried to sleep…but couldn't sleep…tumhare bina nind nehi aati mujhe…she said cutely and kept her head on his chest….it was the most comfortable pillow for her…his chest…she loved sleeping while listening to his heartbeats….they were like melody to her…

She looked at him...he was tired…she sighed….she was not sleepy….suddenly she remember the next day is Sunday….he will sleep till late…

She smiled…now she can keep him awake….without feeling guilty….

She ran her fingers on his nightwear…in notime…she unbuttoned his shirt and her fingers kept on playing on his chest….

He was trying to sleep…he felt her head on his chest…he cuddled her …and tried to sleep…not aware of her naughty plans…

When she played her fingers on her chest…making it difficult for him to sleep…he opened his eyes….kept his palm on hers…stopping her naughty fingers….

Ahhh...Sharon...kya kar rahi ho...sone do na...Mujhe bahut nind aa rahi he...


Par mujhe nind nehi aa rahi... she gave him a naughty smile...


Are you trying to kill me with that smile of yours...he asked her…..she was looking so beautiful with the naughty expression on her face…it was irreristable for him…

He pressed his lips on hers…and kissed her gently….her soft touch removed all the pain from his body….which happened due to a long tiring day…

She responded to his kiss….their lips molded into one…the kiss went on to be a passionate one…finally they broke apart due to lack of breath…but stayed in each others embrace ..

In his arms she always gets her heaven….the warmth of his love ….it always seemed the safest place for her….in the whole world…his arms…

After sometime…he was still moving his hand on her hair…caressing her….

I feel alive in your arms…she said …softly….

He smiled at her and cuddled her…lovingly….

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This is not the way my sharon will behave...there is something wrong with her...he said to himself...he was staring at her…without even blinking his eyes….

Daddy…

He heard tanya's voice….and came out of his thoughts…

Yes princess…

Angel is mom's look alike….right?she said….cutely…

He looked at her…she was confused…


I look like tanya's mom….is it the reason behind my dreams about HIS eyes….that's why Tanya seemed so familiar ..to my heart…my soul…is it really possible that…tanya…my little angel is my daughter…


And HE is my husband…the love of my life…that is why my heart recognized him at the first sight though my mind couldn't…..his eyes are captivating me….he is controlling my whole body…my heart..my soul….at this very moment….i can't avoid this fact….can this be the truth…..this beautiful family…it can be mine….her thoughts were having no boundaries…she was busy searching for her past in his eyes….

Swayam beta…he heard ramu kaka's voice…

Aloknath ji aaye he…aap ne bulaya than na…he said…

Haan kaka…abhi aata hu..unhe bithaiye….he answered….


Finally a person…who can answer his queries…his doubt…who is this pari?if she is just HER look alike why his heart is refusing to accept it….he walked towards the living room with countless questions in his mind…

He reached the living room…Aloknath came running towards him….

Swayam beta…ramu ne kaha ki pari behosh ho gayi…kahan he wo….aloknath asked him…he looked tensed…

Wo thik he chacha….sayad kamjori ki wahah se chakkar aa gaya ho…mene doctor ko bulaya he…aate hi honge..…wo andar Tanya ke sath khel rahi he….

OH…acha…me pareshan ho gaya tha…waise bhi uski tabiyat….

He interrupted…tabiyat…kya hua uski tabiyat ko….he asked…he was restless…to know if she is fine…though he was not sure if she is his Sharon…


Wo swayam beta….pari…pari ko apne pichle zindagi ke bare me kuch yaad nehi….usne ek hadse me apna yadast kho diya …teen saal pehle….he said…a lone tear escaped from his eye….he was concerned for her….like a real father…

Mene apne taraf se koshish ki…police me report likhwaya….par koi fyda nhi hua…bechari bachi…akeli he…teen saal se…he continued….

He went numb….tears started flowing from his eyes….he didn't need any proof that she is his Sharon..he knew its her…he could feel her presence…his heart recognized her at the first sight….he knew the reason behind her unusual behaviour….she lost her memory…because oh which she couldn't recognize him….


He didn't know…if he should celebrate the fact that he found her…or he should be sad…as she forgot him….he was an unknown person for her now…


His heart ached …accepting the fact that he is a stranger for her…was difficult for him….

His tears were not ready to stop….his body…his heart…his soul…nothing was in his control….


All he could see was…a pair of angelic greenish eyes…full of questions….which were putting his past,present,future everything into a question mark...his life was surrounded by questions...

Aloknath was astonished to see his condition…he was staring at him and trying to find loose ends of a story….

Swayam baba…ramu kaka called him…

Haan kaka…he said…trying to stop his tears…

Doctor sahab aa gaye he….

Unhe andar le ke chaliye…swayam said...


Doctor…usne apni yadast kho di he…teen saal pehle…ek hadse me..aloknath informed the doctor…


Ohh..let me check…doctor said..


Doctor ..did the check up…she was stealing glances at him…during the check up…he knew him…very dearly…..her heart said…

After check up …they went out of the room..leaving Tanya and pari..in the room..


Doctor…is she alright…swayam asked…he was curious….worried…his heart was going through countless emotions at that very moment….


She is fine…I think she got some kind of shock…she saw something related to her past …so she lost her senses…


How she will get back her memory doctor….he couldn't stop himself from asking this question..

At this condition…she needs love and affection of her loved ones…if she will be surrounded by the persons and things related to her past….she will improve..soon..doctor said…


One person was looking at the whole incident…astonished…surprised…he somewhere knew the time came for which they waited for three years…


That house was filled with heartbeats...One heart was searching for its identity...one heart searching for ways to find out its lost love...one heart which connected both of them to each other...one heart searching for a solution to tie all the loose ends...together...


Precap:

No precap for now...😆



So how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment... i will wait for your comments and feedback


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres


Here you go with one the Fab updates again 👏


Deeps awesome work...i love the way the story is going further...

Now coming to the update...

Finally swayam came to know she is his sharon... well his mind came to know his heart toh knew na...

The way sharon was behaving on seeing swayam i am sure she will remember him soon ...

Tanya and Sharon alone in the room...i hope to see a mother daughter convo...her love as a mother...

waiting to read how the family will react when they see sharon...

moreover i am dam eager to see the lovey dovey scenes of swaron now...

IN the end UPDATE SOON LIKE REAL SOON :)) PLZZZ

and this is for you deeps

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update di...😃
swayam's pain when got to know that sharon has lost her memory was very well described...his fear of losing the love of his life,HIS SHARON was very well penned down👍🏼
As always the alteration between past and present was amazing ...it was realy smooth..
..sharon's state of mind was beautifully described
..Tanya was super adorable as always..even though she only had one dialogue...😆
I go awww over her adorable talks and gestures😳
eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Update soon di ..pls😳
Thanks for the pm

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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res for himi
update


DI...🤗

I m in love wid this ff of urs...
Although i dont show how eagerly i wait for updates...
and way lazzy to give comment...but thanks to you for every time giving me chance to read it before everyone could read it...

now coming to the update as always its perfect...
swayum try to find what made sahron to react like a stranger wid him...

cute nd naughty flashback...
i like sharon that way...expressing her love for him...

the major part comes...sharon came to know about her and her cute angels relation...the relation between her and those eyes...the eyes full of love for her...

aur kya likhu...everything is so perfect...ki i dont have words to express what m feeling after reading the update...thanks for giving such an awesome ff di...

love you...
update soon...



Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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