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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Muah muah muah muah to me!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏
head off to me...agar main tumhe aise hi dhamki's dete rahungi...tu hayed tum kahi...time pe update krna start kardogi..hai na?? i guess still not!😛😡

You idiot?? u didn't like it...it was awesome...i loved it..😊
and thank you as for after a very long time you have given a long one...
I can't tell how much i love you,and your writes!
Mera kya hoga agr tunai likhna bandh kardia...mujhe tu 104 bukhaar char jana hai...medicine se bhi kuch nahi hoga...tu hi meri dawa,daru hai DEEPS!
Love you from bottonm of my heart...you know tunai aur nehal ne mujhe pagal kardia hai...i love both of you a lot..😊😊
I just started follow IF 2 month ago..shit i was idiot not to follow it before..agar mujhe pata hota na ke tere jese witer bhi IF pe hain...tu beta..main sirf If pe hi hoti..mujhe ab bhi meri mkom daant daant ke laptop se hata ti hain...all the time i do is to read your update again and again...i always try to read it as much as possible..it helps me evn on writing my update properly...
now again here are som eline,i lved a lot!

He climbed the bed after changing in to nightwear …. The moonlight coming from the window gave him a chance to look at his sleeping angel's face…. She was looking heavenly with the moonlight falling on her angelic face…her beautifully carved eyes…. Small but perfect nose….full lips … she was glowing ….looking unreal….her beauty was unreal….


And HE is my husband…the love of my life…that is why my heart recognized him at the first sight though my mind couldn't…..his eyes are captivating me….he is controlling my whole body…my heart..my soul….at this very moment….i can't avoid this fact….can this be the truth…..this beautiful family…it can be mine….her thoughts were having no boundaries…she was busy searching for her past in his eyes…. (this line towards me showed that after 3 long years of disappointment on finding her family...she gave it up..it shows that she was feeling blessed that MAY be this can be her family..she wanted them very badly..to regain herself...)👏


That house was filled with heartbeats...One heart was searching for its identity...one heart searching for ways to find out its lost love...one heart which connected both of them to each other...one heart searching for a solution to tie all the loose ends...together... (how to you end up writing such lines..gosh..am i ever gonna write like this..wish it!)😕😕😊


Again,you must and should know that you are beautiful at heart,and i think i don't have to say anything more on you! do i??

Zalim aurat promo tu de deti...MAAR DALA ALLAH!
(jab jab main koi line red se likhoon in my comment and font comic sans MS ho..tu samjh jana ke yeh line danger sign hai...agr yeh comment nehal parhe..tu please yeh USS ke liye bhi...aisa nahi hai ke woh bach gea)

Love

Tanya
Edited by SwaRon_Dreams - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
oooh gggoddd
loved it

from the way u expressed n everything...

Whenever u update this FFits a treat to us
tnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Deep, Fantastic update. Finally they know it's each other. Hoping for some cute scenes now, now that she will be around them trying to remember her life before the accident. I am seriously in love with this FF. Please update pretty quickly. (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Awesome update
Finally its confirmed that pari is sharon
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Lovely update !!!!

That house was filled with heartbeats...One heart was searching for its identity...one heart searching for ways to find out its lost love...one heart which connected both of them to each other...one heart searching for a solution to tie all the loose ends...together...

I loved the above lines completetly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
// Reserved // Will edit it after 4-5 days. Sorry for the delay.
Till then Happy Diwali. 😊


This was a spell binding chapter. Simply loved it and especially some of the best lines written by you till now were in this chapter. The flashback memory was cute and awesome. But it was the desciption of Swayam's state which was just unbelievable in this chapter. It was just awesomely done. Whether his condition before knowing the thruth about Sharon or after knowing about it . Both were justified with your writing. Looking forward to read the next chapter.
Edited by marauder - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

oh my god!..after seeing your pm in the inbox..and that you have updated every ss and ff of ur's I jumped to check this one out! I loved it.. it stole me after reading the first line itself! love you for this... hugs to you🤗

"That house was filled with heartbeats...One heart was searching for its identity...one heart searching for ways to find out its lost love...one heart which connected both of them to each other...one heart searching for a solution to tie all the loose ends...together..." this is my favorite part.. amzing lines me crying😭

though dislike you for no precap...😔 anyways loved it deepika... kisses to you😃

Riya❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Fantastic update. Finally they know it's each other but still 😕😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
huh update next chp soon plZ dips
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
please please next chapter please

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