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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey guys...This is the 12th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ... thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊





Recap:

Swayam was tries to understand the strange behaviour from sharon...he gets to know about her memory loss from aloknath...doctor advices to treat her with love and affection to get back to her normal state...



Chapter-12



Inside the room:

Pari was sitting on the bed'.with Tanya sitting on her lap'..Tanya being close to her was giving her the feeling of completeness'.she was lost in a new world'a world of hope'a worl of love' a world of togetherness'.

A world of togetherness and love'her,Tanya and HIS'with his thought her heart started running in faster pace'.somehow her heart didn't wait for any proof and

Few moments later'.


Chacha ji'me usse baat karna chahta hu'


Haan beta'kyu nehi'tum jao baat kar lo'tanya ko bahar bhej do'me uska khayal rakh lunga'


He smiled at him'.and went inside'


He found an adorable Tanya sitting on the lap of pari and playing with her long locks'..pari on the other hand was lost in her cuteness and smiling at their cute princess'.


Hey ..kya kar rahi he meri princess'..he asked'

She ran towards him and he cuddled her'.

Daddyy'm playing with my angel'she said cutely'.

And you know what daddy'

Ummm'

Tanya's heart says angel is not her mom's look alike'she is her mom'.she said in one breath'.

And u know'angel also feels the same'

Listening to tanya's cute talks he looked at her'.she lowered her gaze'avoiding eye contact with him'.she was turning a deep shade of red'this was a new feeling for her'she was astonished to see his effect on her...still she was enjoying this feeling...




Next update will be on pg- 35 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey guys...This is the 13th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ... thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊







Recap:

Pari-Tanya coversation...both were feeling a beautiful bond between them...Aloknath and Swayam Conversationa about how sharon reached shimla...Swayam goes and talks to sharon...she tells him..she remembers his eyes...



Chapter' 13


I have seen these eyes in my dreams'every night'.since last three years'I know they are related to me'.she said'.tears started forming in her big beautiful greenish eyes'.

He looked at her'his heart was beating in fast pace'as if it was jumping in joy'.he felt as if his heart will jump out of his chest any moment'.

Finally his heart was going to meet the heart'for which it beats'.after three long years''

Two hearts were beating in unison'.their conversation was incomplete'.their hearts ..their eyes'.were conveying their feelings'.there were so many things to say...so many things to listen to...time stood still witnessing this moment...

He broke the silence'after three years of silence 'it was high time to speak and convey the in-depth feelings of his heart'

I


You will feel the beautiful feeling of LOVE again'

I will make you fall in love with me'Again'I promise'..

I will hold your hand and we will walk back to the past..hand in hand'..

U & ME will be "US"'again'.



Precap:

Beta meri Bachchi ka khayal rakhna...

Daro mat...wahan bhi sab tumhe utna hi pyar karte he...jitna ki yahan...after all meri sharon he hi itni pyari

w was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment... i will wait for your comments and feedback



Plzz let me know where I can improve...😊


Next update will be on pg- 55 😊


Finally a chapter full of SWARON..hope you all will like it...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
di. ..aaj to apko update karna hi hoga...bas!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
when will you update yaar!!! look at the page number its 61
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome!! Nd sorry for d late comment!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 9
oh!!woooww di this update was also nice...
right from how swayam was enjoying to the fullest when tanya was sharing her experience with HER ANGEL!!😉
the start was too too too cute di 😳
then the flashback...ehehehe nice nice not much to comment on that... 😆 let it be as it is!😆awww confession anniversary too!!😳 lovely!!😳
following swayam's tension ...awww poor him!!
so,here goes the best line of this update!!!😉which made me go awww 😳 ❤️❤️❤️❤️


IF SHARON IS HIS HEART…TANYA IS HIS HEART BEAT….

oh!and finally the re-union!!!!!!!!finally THEY met...ok swayam and pari met not THEY coz u've not declared na... 😛😆 i think i have predicted the story...ummm not sure...about it!😛
you've beautifully written this part di ❤️
it was so awsum...how they felt about each other at just one gaze...how he thought he has been given HIS LIFE and how she remembered those eyes!!!and started crying too...awww
nice nice


chap 10
oh!woooww a perfect end to the 1st thread...woooww lovely di 😊
now,we get a longer version of their 1st meet after 3 years 😉
at the same time,the questions arising in both of their minds...
the concept's really beautiful di 😳
one,is searching for HIS life...and the other for HER IDENTITY in those deep dark
chocolate brownorbs(i am using ur words,since it's better 2 use them in ur FF 😊 )
nice update di,too too good...you've beautifully penned this one too 😊😳
glad i reached till here soon will come to thread 2!!wooohooo

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Friends ...thanx a lot for liking my work... i love reading your lovely comments..please continue commenting as they are my sole inspiration for writing ...will be waiting for ur comments and feedback(positive and negative all are welcomed)


Thank u all for liking this FF...😊





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Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys...This is the 14th chapter of this FF...hope you all will like it ... thank you so much for these lovely comments ...they are really very encouraging...they inspire me to continue writing...didn't get time for proof reading...please bear me with mistakes...😊



I would like to dedicate this chapter to my cutie pie..Nisha...I know you missed Tanya in last chapter...so i have included Tanya in this one...

I was not ready to update today...I wrote this...just because I promised Nehal,Himani and Tanya...Girls...I know its not good...still I hope you will like some parts of it...



Thanx a lot to all my readers who spammed this thread and reached the demand...love u all...😳

@Tanya...swthrt...tumhare deadline ke andar update nehi de payi...sorry for that...i hope you like this part...




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Recap:

Pari tells Swayam that she remembers his eyes…. she trusts those eyes & him….her heart is accepting him as her husband….he hugs her out of happiness and in his embrace she hears faint voices and could see blurred images…related to her past life…he promises her …that he will make her fall in love…Again….

Chapter-14

You will feel the beautiful feeling of LOVE again…


I will make you fall in love with me…Again…I promise…..


I will hold your hand and we will walk back to the past..hand in hand…..


U & ME will be "US"….again….


He promised her….


Her eyes were moist….those were tears of happiness….she almost forgot the feeling of happiness in past three years…How it feels to be alive…...his touch…his presence…his existence in her life was making her feel alive….


He kept his forehead on hers….and both of them smiled through their tears…..those were tears of happiness….two souls…meant to be together were finally getting their way back to their heaven…each others hearts….


They could hear each others heart beats….they were beating in sync…..creating a heavenly melody….the melody which indicated towards a beautiful future….


She looked at him…..his face was mere inches away from her face….those beautiful deep brown eyes were in front of her….those eyes which were her only ray of hope in past three years….they were so breath takingly beautiful & captivating….that they seemed unreal to her….she was in his trance…she raised her hand till his eyes and touched them….No…they were real….they were the new reality of her life….she saw tears in those eyes….she wiped his tears….


He felt her soft touch on his eyes….her touch was blissful….she was feeling his eyes….he smiled…through his tears….he was glad that even though she lost her memory…few things were safe in her heart…..his eyes were included in those things….his eyes….in which he held immense love for her…..


Her touch made him loose control…he bent a little…..his lips were inches apart from her trembling lips…her lips were trembling due to nervousness and anticipation….


He was about place his lips on hers…when truth dawned on him….that he is still a stranger for her….he saw her….her eyes were closed ….he saw little drops of sweat on her forehead….signifying her nervousness…her perfect lips were trembling…which seemed very inviting for him….a deep shade of red…was painted on her soft cheeks….the blush didn't leave her face from the moment he came inside the room….she was breathing heavily….he could hear her heart beats…which was moaning his name….faintly…..she was indeed the most beautiful creation of the creator….he tried to control his heart….and stopped moving towards her….


She was feeling his warm breath on her face….her eyes were closed …in anticipation ….she wanted to feel him…to be close to him…close to his heart…suddenly she felt him retreating back….she opened her eyes….

He saw those beautiful green orbs full of questions & confusion…..He understood her questions…her confusions…..


These eyes used to be full of love…love for me….


I will come close to you….the day I will see the same love for me…in your eyes…..


He caressed her cheeks…with utmost care and affection...


He was reading her like an open book…her confusions…her questions….no doubt…he was the answer to every question in her life….


I will wait for the day…you will make me yours….she said…lowering her gaze….she was blushing…mere thought of being close to him again was like a dream to her…..a dream which was going to be true...


You are already mine….you are mine….my Sharon…..he replied….and placed his soft lips on her forehead…..


She felt his lips on her forehead…his touch was making her complete….he was caressing her hair…..as if promising her….he will be there by her side…forever…he will never leave her alone….Again…


She adjusted herself in his arms….they stood in each other's embrace ….they were silent….only their heart beats were talking to each other…conveying their love for each other….


Two hearts were conversing with each other….one heart was determined to get back its love….through love….The other one…ready to surrender itself…to the heart were it belonged….


Time stood still…witnessing the moment …the moment of love….PURE LOVE...


Daddy…

Angel…


They came out of their dream world…where nothing else existed except the two of them….


They broke the hug and looked around….they saw their little princess standing next to them….her tiny finger was on her rosy lips….she was thinking hard….and trying to figure out something...


He picked her up….and asked…


Yes my princess….what happened…..he asked with a sweet and adorable smile …on his perfectly carved lips...


Daddy…as I told u earlier..…my heart says….angel is my mom….even she feels the same…what does your heart say….she asked…her angelic eyes were full with expectations…


He looked at HER ….she lowered her gaze…he could see the deep shade of red on her cheeks….the blush enhanced her already perfect heavenly beauty …if that was possible …

Her innocence... her simplicity…her nervousness..her shyness…her cuteness was making him loose control…again…he slapped his inner self….to control himself….


Umm…my heart….he started replying…to her cute and adorable question…


Not like this daddy….she interrupted


Than??he inquired…with a cute smile still pasted on his lips…


Close your eyes…she made him close his eyes…with her tiny hands…


He slowly opened one of his eyes…to witness the cuteness of his little princess…


Hmmm…Daddyy….No cheating…he heard a sweet but firm voice…


He smiled naughtily…and close his eyes…tightly…


Now keep one hand your heart….she picked his hand and kept on his chest…


Tell me Now…what does your heart says….


Ummm….


His pause was making two tender hearts nervous…


Tell na..daddyy…she asked …again…


My heart says…that…


What….


That…


What daddy…tell me na…


That your angel is your mom…he said with a sweet smile …


Next moment …he felt his little princess…jumping in his lap…with joy and excitement…


She was looking at the father daughter duo…they were looking so adorable and lovable…she was enjoying their sweet conversation and cute antics..…she thanked her destiny for giving her life back….the two individuals…standing in front of her were undoubtedly her life…her world…


So angel will come to Mumbai with us…right Daddy?…


Right my princess.. your angel is coming to Mumbai with us….he replied…caressing her little angel's hair…lovingly…


SHE felt a his hand around her …next moment…she found herself…in embrace of those two persons…who taught her the new meaning of LIFE & LOVE….


He cuddled his LOVE and his SIGN OF THEIR LOVE….in his arms…lovingly…he promised himself to protect them from the entire world...they were the sole reason behind his existence ...…the only ambition of his life was to keep THEM happy and smiling…forever…


Two hearts were beating in unison...along with the third one which was the beautiful melody of their HEART BEATS...




Precap:

Beta meri Bachchi ka khayal rakhna...

Daro mat...wahan bhi sab tumhe utna hi pyar karte he...jitna ki yahan...after all meri sharon he hi itni pyari...


I gave this precap in last part...actually I decided to include this sequence ...while writing this part..I know ...Its boring & not up to the mark...I will try to give a better update next time...


So how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment... i will wait for your comments and feedback



Next update will be on pg- 85 😊



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Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago

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