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Posted: 12 years ago
haii sreelu its too small...but its too nice😳...love at first sight ehh😉...woww...waiting for the nxt update dear
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Please update soon yar!!! Can't wait! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
vry nyc sreelu di...plz update soon...so xcitd to see their romance 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sree i'm glad dat I didnt read ur FF sooner! f u would hav made me wait so much toh ain pagal ho jaati...Now read it all together! Its such a unique concept, first meeting mein hi kiss lol...Loved the kiss n how Rey felt drawn towards Taani! And the fire escape part is do beautiful n touching :( I hope Rey can manaofy Taani soon...Now plz dnt take time to update, otherwise we all will go crazy!
P.S I loved ur comments in between the parts lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
sreelu plzzz update naaa yaaar plzzz...

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Pls. pls. update next part
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No it wsn't boring at all...and thanks for updating...😊
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Perfect is the word.. But I guess bade dhamake small packages me aatae hai.. so chillofy.. n it was NOT boring.. Update soon.. wanna see how Rey manaofys Taani!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot for all ur comments guys.all ur cmnts really made me happy.and sorry for the last short update .i know u guys are angry at me for such a short update.so a big sorry 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
so guys finally i'm here with my update😃.ya u heard it right 😆me back with the update😆sorry my bandariyas for the late update(kan pakad ke maafi).ab aadat dal lo meri late updates ki😆kyu ki nxt update will be only after 11th jan😳(uske liye bhi maafi😆)
well this update is dedicated to sara(sikky) (who constantly reminds me about my ff😆),rhea-who accompanies sara in the same work😆,pikky(my enemy banderiya😆)-who is so busy eating my brain (almost finished eating my brain) and disturbing me saying update update,finally dedicated to ritzy(i mean my boring ritzy😆)-jo lapata hai😆(vanished somewhere after reading my 1 update😆 ...and dedicated to all other banderiyas who read my ff so patiently 😆.aaj tho kuch jyada hi bak bak kiya naa😆.so nw moving on to update...

part 4

rey had tears in his eyes.he left fire escape and called sharon and said taani is in fire escape...
rey to himself "u brought tears in her eyes rey,now it's ur duty to bring a bright smile on her face.i know it's hard,but i'll bring back that smile on her face

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night at rey's apartment

it was almost 12 nw and yet he was not sleeping.he was in deep thoughts...(ofcourse thinking about taani).he was hugging his pillow tight and dreaming taani...rey to himself
"wat hpnd to u rey.y r u dreaming taani?wat's so special about her?😲.waise bhi wat am i saying.everything is special about her...her hair,hand,legs,those staring eyes which made me fell for her😲fell for her 😕?really rey?r u out of ur senses?no may be not😃.wow rey finally u fell for someone(😆i know i know kuch jyada hua, hai naa😆)waise it wasn't just those eyes which made me fell for her...her innocent face ,those feathery lips...her lips😲are beta tu to gaya🤢tera love story tho shuru hone se pehle exit ki tarah bad raha hai...(😆i'm in a good mood u see so wanna disturb u guys in btw😆)
tu ne to use pehle hi kiss kiya...acha hua usne mujhe tappad nahi mara(😆)...waise bhi me aur kya karta i wasn't able to control myself from going towards her and kissing her aur usne to muje roka hi nahi...but her tears fell like stones in my heart...i know she was hurt and still she is.pata nahi wat she thinks about me.but as i have found my princess i'll heal all her wounds and make her mine forever...yaay i've found my princess ...so mission taani ...gud nit rey.hope to have a bright day 2mrw and gud nit my princess❤️...

nit at taani's room

taani to herself:
"hey krishnaji ye aapne mere saat kya kiya😭.me tho aap se baat hi nahi karoongi ab.waise ab mein colg kaise jaoongi😕?everyone will stare at me🤢.haan tho dekkne do me bhi ab chup baitne nahi wali😡.waise he doesn't seems to be a bad guy.ab muje todi pata hai uske bare mein.he did bid me sorry but i can't forgive him as such.par waise bhi mujhe kya hogaya da?why din't i stop him when he was about to kiss me😕?kaise karti me?me tho uspe aise kho gaya tha ki i even forgot the world(😆)waise he was looking handsome and hot...uff taani u r impossible.ab usse gali dene ki bagair u r praising him?wah kya baat hai...stop it taani,stop thinking about him...(after taking a deep breath) whom ever u r mr.handsome (😆) i so hate u...hope to have a btr day 2mrw!"


in the mng.
rey was ready already.well he always used to be late😆.par aaj tho kuch jaldi hi taiyar hua,princess ko jo milna hai naa...
rey:chal beta hogayana tera.hope she will forgive me soon.(he was wearing white shirt and black jeans)so 2day's mission-flirting with my princess😆
...
here taani too was ready to leave to the colg.she din't used any modern dress 2day.she was wearing a white dress( one which taani used in rasiya scene😳)when she was about to leave she received a call from sharon
taani:hello sharon bolo
sh:taani u r cmng to colg 2day naa?😕
ta:haa sharon
sh:great😊.so lets meet there in the colg😊.bye yaar
ta:tik hai,bye😊
she then left to colg in her car


guys i haven't completed this part.came here to update with a gud mood and nw really in a very bad mood.so will come back to update the rest on or b4 christmas.i'm not sending any pm's since i haven't finished this part.so btr u guys don't cmnt till i complete


Edited by sreelu094 - 12 years ago

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