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Eggon_Snow

@Eggon_Snow

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Very nice way of handling the current track...pls do continue and PM...thanks

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sumond

@sumond

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hey that was a good start i would like to know what happens further pls do continue...

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Shweta

@Sunset90

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Are you kidding me? How can you be so cruel to stop an awesome story like that in the middle..??

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

It's awesome!! Another MU on the part of Khushi..Please continue!! I would like to read what happens next! :)

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Great start!!!⭐️ Now if dont want me to say u r worst than CVs give it another part to make things right!!!😆

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

hey Alia it was amazing

but please do continue

don'y stop there

please

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Very well written..👏

Khushi's pain was evident!😭

Why dont you write a second part for this...!!

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Ni1234

@Ni1234

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awesome Alia...

Please do continue...

Waiting foe the next chapter...

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trina2010

@trina2010

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

It's very good Infact. I would love to watch something like this in IPK.
Nice one. Thanks

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

reversed roles... Please continue soon :)

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