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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lola123

Res!
Have to catch up with a few parts and then I'll unres!😳

Edited*
Woaaahhh
Arjun is reaching closer to the truth by every moment...
Every hint,every clue...Well he IS a mastermind!Let's see when he is able to join all the dots😕
I loved that little hurt Arjun had in his heart when Priya got hit😳😳
Can definitely understand why Priya is so freaked out of anaesthesia😔
Arjun held her hand☺️
Hayyee!! Your story definitely has some magic😲
Even if he catches her heart,my heart goes dhak-dhak-dhak🤪☺️
And the seat belt part too
Now coming to Sam and Swati☺️☺️
Haye re☺️
Whatte romance☺️
Swati and her seduction in the hot and very happening Sari🤪
And Sam's reaction to that🤪
Finally...

EDited😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love


wonderful upts👏 read it twice or may be thrice that to from d beginingmessages-desi-glitters-10
really superbb⭐️⭐️⭐️

⭐️
this weekend no arjun😔 so i expect double updts to cheer us up 😛
plzzz😃😃😃

continue soon plzzz
will be waiting for ur updt
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Bwahaha.. I made it in time!!

Thankuuu.. 🤗

My Pleasure😃


Okay then.. Me is here..
I've re-read the update twice today..

Awe..so sweet.


And Shilpa, I can't thank you enough for this light-hearted treat before we get down to serious business and shockers.. 👏

Yes I needed this also.

Coming to my darlings, they were both so adorable there.. Their deep and profound friendship was clearly reflected in that little banter.. And well, MG alert..Antennae up..
She actually listened to him and took her pills..

Yep, She did and theirs was a special friendship that was fool of fun and laughter but some people couldn't tolerate that special bond.😕

Oh and yes.. Shilpaa... Shilpa Anand is our Priya?!!! 😭
These were tears of joy, my behna.. I soo love you for doing this.. 🤗

I've said it before and still maintain my stand, she would've been the perfect choice for Arjun on the show!

I completely agree with you, she wold look good with him. And once you mentioned her I knew she wold fit right in as I picture our Priya. So credit goes all to you for this one.😉


Anyway, why fear when Priya is here.. 😳
And Arjun Ji, Priya toh only 'likes' you when you switch on that angry mode.. But we pankhas, drool and salivate when you do that!! ☺️

Oh yeah, couldn't agree more here.😉

Okay.. And if I didn't know this before, I would've still guessed it that the Sameer-Swati hotwa part was Tina ki jawani's demand!! How? Well, you know better.. 😉

Yep that one was definitely inspired by our Tina.😆

But my sister, what have you done?
I literally had a wicked grin plastered on my face from the moment you described Swati prettying up to steal Sameer's breath away..
And I'm sure you have more in store for us.. 😉😳

Aham..Aham...now the ACP can't let his girl escape so easily right, he has to get her back one way or another na.😉

And the desert? Ab aisa desert mile toh khaane ko kaun dekhe yaar?!! 😉😛

Exactly, as I told Tina, there are more interesting things to nibble on then food right?😳

And the best bit was the proposal.. I'm soo happy for the two.. They soo totally deserve all the happiness in the world.. Please.. please.. Don't ever separate them again.. I'd be heartbroken if that happens.. 😭

Nope they are not going anywhere now, just to the temple, court or wedding venue of their choice of course.😆

And and.. The little bit of convo about Arjun-Priya.. That just goes on to show how much entwined their lives are..

Exactly, as if that is how it is meant to be, their lives are so entertwined that if one couple is not happy then the other won't be completely happy either. A very strong bonds of Friendship.

I wish Arjun-Priya realise their true feelings pretty soon.. But then again, that Prem kahani is bhery bhery mushkil!!

It is for now but they too will have their happiness after all the mushkils. I promise.😃

All in all, you made me smile, smirk and blush with this one.. So, I have to say, 👏 👏..

Thanks for the late Valentine's treat! 😉

You are welcome meri behna.

Awaiting for the story to unfold.. And Arjun's private investigations to begin..
Shoot! I forgot about the diaries..
Please behna, ek yahan parcel kar do.. Please please.. *Puppy eyes*

Phew.. Nahi? Khair chodo.. Jaldi update karo phir!

You got it, but you know to keep the kleenex box handy from here on out right?

Samjhi, ya Samjhaun?! 😉🤪


Ji ji Samajh gayi, joh nahi samjhee thi woh tiger ne samjha diya.😳

I am a great student.
😆




Thank you so much meri behna and a very big jaddu ki Jhappi for you.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

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aww...i am blushing hard...that was just mind blowing'
i liked Swati's sweet revenge...
his favorite desert, huh?? loved that scene...hot, romantic

and the final proposal was too good...romantic!

Coming to out lead couple...long way to go...i know it will take time...
i loved that small friendly, loving fight...so cute!

cont soon!



Thanks Vidya,

Yep I can just imagine you turning red as a tomatoes but now worries, we will soon get you not blush so much.😉

Yeah this is how I envision Sameer and Swati, sweet and romantic and so forgiving too.

It makes for the lead couple since they do have long way to go.

Thanks so much my shiest behna of all my BBs, I am glad you liked this update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

res Wokay !!

Finally finished with all the updates ..and needless to say amazing story
So lets begin with the mystery that u have created for Sikander ...i Love it ..ab ke Suoer cop ke verses ek super villian toh hona hi chaiye na
Arjun - Now the Arjun of you story is betrayed by love ??? I mean he liked Priya but circumstances were not in his favour and then he moved to Roshini ...She got killed and now priya is back with a secret .
Now Roshini & Priya Relationship isnt also clear but di i loved Roshini so much in Arjun ,yahan par she is gry and mujhe thoda late digest hoga yeh fact.
Priya - Her past is horrid but she still is strong enough to stand for her with help of Swati ofcourse ..hats Off To such a strong charcter u created ...I love her realationship with Swati
Sam- Swati - Sam was really a fool & gadha ...but u do gave him hell as we suggested ...
Now please faster updates ..warna main toh past & present main hi kho jaungi



Thank you so much Sia.

Yes I think only someone who is very ruthless and just as smart is the kind of person who would get away with doing something so vile to the great ACP, but now Arjun is well prepared to face the devil.

Emm...this is where the my story is different from the show, I gave it a huge twist because I see how romantic Arjun is and I fear that he will never be over Roshi unless there is a flaw in her so hence the twist. I too love Arni pairing but I wanted to get past that and see him get another chance at love. Hope this helps.

Yes..Yes...everyone should have a friend like Swati, I too have one in my life and even thought we live far apart we never drift away from each other.

And Priya has been thru so much that the experience has molded her into a very strong young lady yes she retained her good heart and so she is still vulnerable to certain things. I hope to give her the happy ending that she deserves.

Forgot to mention, you may relate more to Priya than Roshni after the next update, or I should say that you may relate more to Arjun and his pain. Let's see.

Yeah he sure was but the man has learned his lesson, but don't write him off yet, he may have to take revenge on his lady love soon.😉😆

Soon my darling I will update. Thanks so much Sia.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23

=OMG amazing chapter Shilpa di


Arjun n priya were amazing as always

i liked d frend like conversation dey shared ..wen he offered her to take medicines

n den swati ...her ready-to-seduce sameer avatar
was terrific ...OMG dat saree was enough to melt him down

n den her activities

liked dere talks abt arjun n priya's relationship

n den d kitchen romance

now dat was super hot ...shilpa di

i think i shud start visiting drooler's club more😉

superb chapter



Thank you so much Tani.

Awe..yes they are amazing as always even I get amazed by what they do to me at times.

😆 The credit for Sam and Swati seduction and romantic scene goes to Tina, it was her request.😉

This is what I love about Sam and Swati they are both good hearted people who can's see their friends in pain and perhaps this is the reason Swati forgave Sameer so easily also.

You got it Tani, drop by the AT more often we always have something new cooking there.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: haruhi26

sorry for late comment😳( maafi de do, doing ups' and downs while holding my ears😳)

Chal maaf kiya iss baar.😆 now stop the up and down or there will be nothing left for your SM.😉

i'm doing that a lot lately, asking sorry😆😳 No problem.
but it was awesome Shilpa, just the right touch of romance, sensuality and kisses😳

Awe...all credits to you sweet, would have never gotten that far if I hadn't owed you one.



First it was a pleasure seeing Arjun's concern for Priya, and when they actually ended up fighting like in their pasts, there were so many unanswered questions between them, but gradually Arjun is moving close to the truth😳

Yes he is moving very close to the truth but it will also turn his world upside down I am afraid.😕

and now moving to your hot update😳😆
I really loved it a lot🤗
the way Swati just blew Sam's mind with her teasing😆
the way Sam was confused and wanted to ravish her😆
and finally when Sam understood Swati's teasing and decided to oblige her😳
and what a kiss that was, he even lifted her on the counter😳☺️
but i loved when Swati was prepared for anything to keep Sam's back, while Sam knew that he was going beyond his limits and that too early, and he stopped😳
and finally the proposal and the ring
Lovely😳
Now pleaes update soon😉

Like I said credit for all this is all yours. I had decided to do this little later but your idea of V-day romantic dinner set the things in motion early. And oh yeah Swati is willing to do anything for her man, she is way too in love with the idiot.😆

Sam is a good match for her, he made a mistake the first time but now he has learned from his mistake and wants set things right again.😉



Thanks again Tina, and yeah next update will be soon.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alee001

superbbb!!!


finallyy sameer babu ki love stry track par aagayi!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳!!!!

update soon!!



Yep, thanks so much, working on the next update, it should be up by tomorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

That was fantastic !!
Loved the way Arjun and Priya's relationship have progressed ... Arjun is so sweet :D

Hayeee ... Sameer and Swati were hot !!!
She teased him too much :P

Love the way he proposed her :)
It was so cute ...

Thanks for the pm :-)



Thank you so much.

Yep he is sweet, but then Priya is also so he wouldn't be able to resist I guess.

Glad you enjoyed Sameer/Swati moments. This is exactly the type of person I see him as even in the show.😆

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