ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted*

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

This truly is an Arhi masterpiece!

Wow for just the way you have moulded the dialogues from the past into the story!

Brought tears 😭

You left the ending to our imaginations..

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

This is probably your best os...the intensity of pain was really strong and it should have been like this in show but it wasn't. .just brilliant Zee 👏

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Gut wrenching story!!!!... Amazing job!!!

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

It was jst soo heart breaking! Reminded me of our beautiful show.

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

have read this OS many tyms.. And due to u i watched beautiful serial Shehr E Zaat.. And that mud shot is breath taking.. I can't control my tears while watching that shot evry tym.. This OS is stress releaser for me.. Thakyou for this wonderful piece

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

This...

This was...

This is...

Okay. I'm going to go curl up in a corner and cry. This was unbelievably heart-rending. Each dialogue was like the silence before a storm, each mention of the past a wave of cold, cold water, each word of the present like a stabbing knife. This was beautiful, this was terrible, this was absolutely the best I have ever seen you write.

Bellissima.