ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted*

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

This is the best and most earnest piece of writing I ever read in India Forums. I was not a follower of IPKKND. Watched it on n off and as such I am definitely not a regular in the forum too and I have not read FFs on them except for the one written by my friend in the initial days of the show.

I am speechless and I really don't have words! Its different n unique, unlike anything I have ever read here. Its definitely a masterpiece!

The story is simple but weaving magic into a simplistic story like this takes a lot and u have done it with finesse 👏

P.S - I found this link in a thread in FF forum.

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

I had read it the first time but I would still comment! :)

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

this is one of the awesome work i come across... not one of the this is just bestest...
you penned evey emotion perfectly with the dialogues... the whole karma thing you added here that everything comes back to you .. you never change it anyhow ...
thank you for good reads..

this is first time .. m reading you and i just loved it

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Awesome... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Rida

@love-hurts

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

The mud scene u copied frm Sher-e-zaat was at a point whn tht lady was atlast, after losing her most priced relation (her husband), looks out for the Almighty.

To use it for lovers is in my point of view quite unacceptable.

Had u nt mentioned it. It might nt have actually looked so bad.

Otherwise ur OS was very impressie. U writ amazingly well.

Plz dnt take it to ur heart.

Jst wanted to share my thoughts. No hard feelings.

Ridwan...

Edited by love-hurts - 10 years ago