ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted*

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

wow... the word brilliant wont even start to describe this OS Zehra... the dialogues of the past and the happenings of the present... how so perfectly u've blended it... each words of them making me wish to get THAT IPK back... and the present tragedy, his helplessness bringing tears in my eyes... amazing piece of work Zehra... i am in short of words to tell how much i am feeling... loved it to core...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Irony of life...when Arnav realized Khushi's importance in his life, she was not there to be the recipient of his love.

Loved the intermixing of IPK dialogues and Arnav's thoughts. Also the scene from the show which inspired this OS😊

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

very well written zehra.u're sad os's are always intence and it never fails to make me cry...i cried after readin ur os hide.now this...

what ll happen if i read destroyed and unconditional.i hav heard they r d best sad stories...i ll tell my heart to not cry. at least i ll try...if it hears...😊

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Loved this! Brilliant ⭐️

Each and every word he said to insult her/show that she means nothing to him/prove her wrong came back to him haunting.

Amazing piece of work Zehra 👏

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

" mujhy meri auqat pta chal gai ... mujhy meri augat pta chal gai mummi .. "

" ab jab mujhy zaat ki chah hai tou mujhy zaat kyu nahi milti ?"

..
tu wajood ki chah lyu krti hai ? zaat ki chah kr zaat ki ..!

...

mujhy kul chahye ..mujhy zaat chahye ! mujhy zaat chahye ..
..

this is all what comes to mind reading this os ... ..

shehr e zaat :)

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

How you always manage to make me speechless?

It is something words cannot justify the depth...

I am overwhelmed with too many emotions after reading this one...

You made him bite dust literally... he couldn't be proved wrong in much better or worse way...

Girl Kudos to you.

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: AALUSLOLWA
" mujhy meri auqat pta chal gai ... mujhy meri augat pta chal gai mummi .. "

" ab jab mujhy zaat ki chah hai tou mujhy zaat kyu nahi milti ?"

..
tu wajood ki chah lyu krti hai ? zaat ki chah kr zaat ki ..!

...

mujhy kul chahye ..mujhy zaat chahye ! mujhy zaat chahye ..
..

this is all what comes to mind reading this os ... ..

shehr e zaat :)

And this is greek-latin to me 😕 I didn't understand what you said 😆

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

these are the dialogies from the novel / serial called sher e zaat .

the biting dust scene was inspired from that serial .. as lazy had mentioned too :)

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_Adina_

@_Adina_

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Hello😊

It's very nice very cool sher-e-zaat my fav serial I love both actor and actress they awsome they rock and I also love Arshi so much I m die heart fan of Arshi I really loved each n every dialogue I love novels its very good loved it 👏

Edited by _Adina_ - 11 years ago

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

U made me re-live those words which were written in bold. What an awesome writer you are? I love your work so much. I am speechless. Bravo, my friend. Here is a big hug. You deserve it. Fabulous work.

🤗

Edited by lara3110 - 11 years ago