ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted* - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
I cannot find a perfect adjective to describe this OS. You actually included all the major conflict in perspectives the two had and beautifully strung them together in the form of a story.
Arnav recollects the times he has pained her and called her worthless; the feeling of helplessness eats him where he forgets all logic. His actions contradict his earlier believes in an attempt to bring her back. None of them work and the reason to this were the ending lines and the lines Khushi told him about not being present when he realises the existence of god.
God I feel like😭 seeing the vast difference between the dialogues and quality scenes we got then and now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hats off
i bow before u crazy
u r THE BEST
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited comment on pg 4😳

Love,
Gazal
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so awesome
Loved it
All those hurtful he had said to her
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think it safe to say that this is one of your best pieces.

Beautifully written, I absolutely loved the redemption.

I don't think there are enough words to justify this work!


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Posted: 12 years ago
These dialogues have pricked us to no end..and now he is biting dust realizing the enormity of those casual words he said just to safeguard his heart!! How he taunted her with his cruel words. With the dialogues came the flashback. I was amazed to know that i could capture each and every dialogue with the scene from the show..it is etched to my memory permanently(those were the good old IPKKND days)..You intertwined the dialogues and flashback and the present beautifully.. ...I always wanted a scene like this in the show..where he regrets his words and begs forgiveness before Kushi and Devi Maiyya!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
zehra, i have never read anything like this - totally different from the lots
beautiful one zehra
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazaing OS ... Really emotional one! Well written! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely specially shehre zaat dialogues
me loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Speechless zehra ...
Beautiful update ..Its awesome 😊😊

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