ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted*

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

everyone seems to be lamenting the sad demise of IPKKND! I agree it is gradually going down the drain with no logical storylines... supposedly the PH is through with its storytelling and needs inspiration from others!

a bautifully moving os! loved how you juxtaposed asr's earlier arrogance with arnav's present vulnerabilty, especially begging the Lord to return khushi to him! deeply touched by the symbolism of arnav smearing his whole body with mud... the open-ended conclusion is apt as it's up to the readers to decide on a positive or a negative outcome! well-done!

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

That I surely must say was one of your best writes Ze !

The way you combined the past with the present, and Khushi current condition !
It was heartachingly beautiful !

Im at a loss of words, but ya, Ive been crying !
This one is beautiful ! And a perfect tribute to the IPKKND that was !

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

OMG!!! This OS was awesomeness personified! I sooo loved it!! You've watched Shehr-e-Zaat?? 😲 I didn't when it was airing but thinking of going to do now 😳

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

wonderful work...

really touching...missing the old IPKKND

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Oh God Lazy this was completely superb! My eyes are brimmed with tears by the end of this! This is so heart wrenching!

But for some reason, some part of me felt content. Maybe becuase Arnav regretted all he ever did to Khushi! Maybe cuz he realised her importance FINALLY!

BUT, i felt really bad for ArHi too! Loved the whole idea! The mud on his face, reducing him to what he was and is! Beautiful!

But i'm very bad with deciphering the end of sad os's until its spelled out to me! Cuz i get s emtoional that i cant think straight!

Did Khushi...*gulp*... die?

Cuz i reeally think she did and even the thought makes me want to bawl out aloud! 😭

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

zehra killer OS !!!! u had me in tears...the words are written to perfection !!!!!

arshi rocksss !!!!

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Amazing dear.this was brilliant.i had tears in my eyes throughout reading it.heart wrenching os.i love this kind of os.plz do write more like this one plzzz

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

m crying like hell..!!!

no no i don't know why but it pains me.!

aahh..!! crying cuz of our old IPK has left us and also

'cuz currently the cvs are hell bent in destroying whatever they

created in the past one and half year.! numb now.! it was beyond beautiful.!

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Dam your a great writer this os was awesome and i think this should actually happen in the show after khushi finds out about sheetal hehehe i know im evil making ASR go through alot but he deserves it for neglecting khushi. I love the way you wrote all the hurtful words arnav said to khushi and and now he want to take it back but cant and is losing khushi anyways love it and thanks for the pm

Edited by please6 - 12 years ago