ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted*

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

have un res my comment on page 6..
Masha-Allah!

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Loved the mud scene - surely showed Arnav repenting
did Khushi die in the end?

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

ver y well written

could feel the pain and intensity which is missing nowadays :(

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

⭐️ Brilliant. This is your master piece👏

Thank You. i feel honoured😛

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sunshinegal1224

@sunshinegal1224

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

OMG Zehra!!!! How in the world can you come up with such awesome ideas???
I've stopped watching IPK from the last two weeks, but I come on to the forum just to read your stories.
Each keeps getting better and better!!
God Bless you! 😊

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sree1993

@sree1993

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

It is always a pleasure reading your works dear and i think this is the one which actually connects with the soul of ipkknd which sadly is missing from the show now...The way you mixed and weaved the dialogues from the show with your imagination was just magical...His repentance,his regret and the pain of loss brought tears in my eyes...well done zehra...love you for writing this😃

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sayli

@sayli_sarun

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Awww...
I m on verge of crying man!!!
Seriously!!
How i wish i can feel the same intensity is the ipk these days!!!
**sigh**

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

i have seen a lot of long comments on your this post...

BUT I CANT WRITE ANYTHING BECAUSE I JUST FELL SHORT OF WORDS...

its just so lovely and pure plus yes this redemption we want o see in his character as when he was arrogant he has no limit

when he cares for anybody .there no limit

and when he does business no limit in hard work...

so according to this character...

when they have to show his redemption...

there again should be no limit

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Humayra

@Humayra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

I don't know how to write my feelings after reading this os. I'm speechless. I'm loss of words. It was a masterpiece. I don't want to insult these beautiful creation by my simple words. It was amazing.

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Mahrin17478

@Mahrin17478

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Well done. Yes the twist and Arnav's repentance could have been better if the Cv thought the way you thought...as they could have relate some of the strong dialogs they had before to build up the current track then the charm could have been restored...any way still hanging on to the show,as fans never reject/quit...