OS: Fire To the Rain! Part 2 PG 13

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iamursforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Lol...thank God...ki this didn't happened in real..;)
It was great..:)

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

that was so beautiful and emotional, it made me cry:(

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.Naina.

@.Naina.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

This was such a well written OS! That song though<3 Glad to hear you're safe in NY though. Hurricane Sandy really kicked those of us in the NJ/NY area =/

But anywho - really heartwrenching but beautifully written OS! :)

Cheers!

Naina

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Sona257

@Sona257

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

The pain of khushi was heart breaking

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Sunara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

it is beautiful...sob sob...
will u write another part? plsss

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

That was beautifuly written dear..gr8 job..so r we getting a second part to it??

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

beautifully done he destroyed there love by throwing money at her but the fol will suffer but her love will prevail because of the baby the one he will never see awesome beautifully written thanks for the pm

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

so heartbreaking

Khushi still loves him even though he treated her like crap and she loves her baby

Arnav is living in misery, that's good he deserves it

He deserves to never ever see his child