FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Omg this is shocking as well as breaking news...


Waiting for next news...

LOL... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..!!!
Absolutely Amazing!!!
There is something fishy about Dadi...does she know about it all!?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -sree13-

gorgeous girl..would make a realy supercool pair with Rathod.
good choice mannu di..Tina please update soon

Thx Dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think Dadi already knew abt Riya's lie.
R she thinks Riya & Arjun??
Mre intersting.
Bechara Arjun acha mauka gava diya usne.
Love to see reaction Riya's & other family members reaction whn thy see Shaina.
Baad mai Riya kya karegi???
plz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED THE CHAPTER!
DID NOT SEE THAT COMING FROM DADI! LOOOL!

OH NO! DONT DEGRADE RIYA, ARJUN WHATS WRONG WITH U 😕

Update soon and do pm me x
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Posted: 12 years ago
unresd my comment...
agla part kab mlega
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Posted: 12 years ago
My dear Tina,

You have not slipped up even once in this delightful serial, and I enjoyed this (semi)chapter as much as the earlier ones. There is a coherence to your plot that is especially pleasing; you are not stringing haphazard romantic sequences together at random. You know where you are headed and how to get there.

But for me, the piece de resistance in this chapter was Dadi's amazing tech savviness; she knew how to erase videos and photos. and she did it all so neatly and did not get caught! A very spry old lady who is entirely after my own heart!😉

Shyamala Aunty

here's the much awaited chapter 5, but since it's gonna be a bit long, i'm breaking this also in two parts. next part will be up by tomorrow😳.
lets not bore you people anymore and here's chapter 5A:

Chapter 5A


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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it... Please update the next part soon
I can't wait to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
whom I like the most in this chapter is none other than Dadi 😉 deleted videos & even taking side of Riya in precap..what she is upto??

Riya should tell all the truth before thing goes worst..Shaina's entry can make Riya to suffer a lot 😕

those intense moment of Ariya..Riya never felt like these even with Rathod too that was the best point 😳 could not help but blushing like a hell 😳😳

update soon na Tina coz precap would not let me live in peace 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww that's a wonderful update.. My god Arjun is all ready to throw Riya out of his house..dadi s gonna stand by Riya she evn deleted the scenes in the camera hmmm interesting..

Thanx 4 the pm and waiting 4 ur nxt update.. So update soon and do pm me..

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