FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

The story is going at a great pace Tina.
Loving that!

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Yes.

for that we need Arjun to really hurt Riya a lot dear, and thats what he's gonna do in next chapter

but dont worry he'll later regret a lot😉

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

u dont think so?? 😆 😆 i think he should have kissed... angir mokka bar bar miltha hai kya? 😆 that too if dadi fix riya for rathore!!!😲

😆

mokka milta nahin hein, dundna parta hein😉

and then Arjun is a supercop, dont worry, he'll know how to steal such kisses very easily😳

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: fatima15
Great update :)

thanks dear😳

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: lola123
Wow..!!!
Absolutely Amazing!!!
There is something fishy about Dadi...does she know about it all!?

thanks dear😳

well Dadi is completely fishy😆, dont worry dear

how much she knows or not, you'll know in my next update dear😉

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
I think Dadi already knew abt Riya's lie.

R she thinks Riya & Arjun??

Mre intersting.

Bechara Arjun acha mauka gava diya usne.

Love to see reaction Riya's & other family members reaction whn thy see Shaina.

Baad mai Riya kya karegi???

plz update soon..

hmmm cant let out the suspense dear

😉

next update you'll get the answers to all your questions😉

dont worry about Arjun, he'll get such mauka a lot, and then he may also steal such mauka nah😆

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: simple_dimple93
LOVED THE CHAPTER!

DID NOT SEE THAT COMING FROM DADI! LOOOL!

OH NO! DONT DEGRADE RIYA, ARJUN WHATS WRONG WITH U 😕

Update soon and do pm me x

thanks dear

well dadi is a bit hadke😆

its not degrading dear, anyone would have done the same thing, he's only protecting his family, though he could have done it better

and then Riya also lied😭

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: priya00147
unresd my comment...
agla part kab mlega

by tonight i'll post next part dear😉

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: sashashyam
My dear Tina,

You have not slipped up even once in this delightful serial, and I enjoyed this (semi)chapter as much as the earlier ones. There is a coherence to your plot that is especially pleasing; you are not stringing haphazard romantic sequences together at random. You know where you are headed and how to get there.

But for me, the piece de resistance in this chapter was Dadi's amazing tech savviness; she knew how to erase videos and photos. and she did it all so neatly and did not get caught! A very spry old lady who is entirely after my own heart!😉

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thanks Shyamala Aunty
it's a pleasure to read your comments and appreciation😳
well nowadays almost everyone knows how to use mobile and camera, no matter the age, hence a modern Dadi😆
well she'll of course get caught later, when Arjun would try to show everyone his proofs😆
but even then she'd get out beautifully out of it😉