OS: The Silent tears

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Kasu4lyfe

@Kasu4lyfe

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow very good! I loved it they should def show a scene like that between them but poor khushi I feel so bad for her. Idk why arnav has suddenly become so unaware and oblivious to khushi and how he is behaving with shital around khushi. Hello dont forget she is your wife not shital!

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww...beautifully written...i want Khushi to react something similar to this in the show, not like a Dumb clown :/

Please do continue soon :)

would love to read it.

tc, love

JIA

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Good work, i think a second part will be there?

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

very nicely written... you have written something that reflect what was there in my mind!

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

beautiful...will u continue? I would like to know where this leads..

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Krish

@Krishna_Laya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Deepu...ahh...you brought tears in my eyes dear..

nijamga ra...keka raasav...i felt khushi's pain..

I can imagine every expression on her face...

I can feel whats goin on her mind...

I posted the same on the page too..

Are Cvs making her believe that arnav deserves a gal like sheetal who is smart, modern, intelligent and importantly compatible to arnav in all terms,..???

My heart sank when i saw the precap dear..

It was looking like a family which i dreamt of except khushi is missing thr...

Do continue ra...

Arnav is still unaware of her pain, her worries, her insecurities..As you said ..its more than meant nothing...I want him to realise that asap...

I dont mind if khushi ignores her... he should also feel the ignorance, i want to see his restlessness, his anger...