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Sumaya

@Sam_KaShian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

amazing update!!
love karan xD

thanks 4 d pm!

update soonish! :)

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shewolf.

@shewolf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

I actually like Karan :P

and I loved the part where Karan and Shilpa meet? Aah Shilpa was like umh strong? I hope she doesn't fall week later on and ehe can I have Karan.. I want that guy 😆 that sexy bas***d. xD

update soon :P

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harshadislove

@harshadislove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

awesome update
i am actually liking karan
though felt bad for shilpa n armaan
so, he gonna marry n everything n then tell her about armaan :O :O would be heartbreaking moment
thnx for the pm
conti soon

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Rupa Roy

@-Im-Possible-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Awesome part, luving it but feeling bad for shilpa:-)

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Damnmyass

@Waymaker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Chapter 4:

YIKESSS!

Finally the meeting, the most anticipated part rolled out...

My takes would be, a super hot clash. I loved the fight between Karan-Shilpa. OMFG, i thought they were gonna get aroused in the fight and you were gonna build up a sexual tension scene but am glad you kept it mild. I love the exchange of conversations, they were kind of heated and full of venom(mostly from Shilpa's side). Glad to see a heroine with her full battery on, fight and die, but not let the dominator think he succeeded over her. She's a tigress, she'll pull it off throughout and that what makes the whole reading so damn interesting, isnt it? Tired of seeing a weak Shilpa everywhere. Our Shilpa here is a fighter, though she lacks the skills of being destructive, she'll fight with all that she has. Your fiction takes it apart in this department indeed.

Now what do i say about The Karan Malik? F U C K yea, i just love love loveee his characterization. Oh man, his every stance is def what i expected from him. He is the HOT villain in the story that you can't help to root. I loved his every description you penned down. I could actually picture in my head, like how is he looking? His type of clothes, how his abs are bulging out of his shirt. OMG, it was me being turned on now ;) People might hate Karan, but I AM ALL FOR HIM. WOOHOO! C'mon Karan be the ultimate bas***d, i root for them the most in reel.

Another shocking revelation.DAMN ARMAAN MALLIK is alive. Now that's makes the plot more appealing. There will be brother's clash in the future i guess? Now f u c k me, shit Armaan did love Shilpa for real. Haww! I don't want to mess up my brain, i wanna see how the story will go so far. SHIT SHIT SHIT! I loved Armaan in BTLOO and i LOVE Karan in BTLOD! I Want Karan-Shilpa here, but Armaan also love Shilpa! WHAT DO I DO WITH MAH LIFE NOW? HUH! :| BUT AM A KARAN MALLIK FAN!

Now that the wedding is occuring, i cant wait to see more badassness from my hulk hero ;) KM I WOVE YOU <3 Keep Shilpa's character all throughout okay, i love how you're playing it till now. And oh, you're worth praising for the writing here. It was a marvellous read. Had to mention it, it has become a habit of mine ;))

Chapter 5, come soon!

PS: Thanks for updating quite on time ;P