Beyond The Limits Of Darkness| ArSh/KS |NextChapterppromopg41 - Page 22

Continue soon.

Thanx for the pm.

am quite happy that Shilpa managed the escape and now Karan will take her seriously..or so I hope

You deserve it you piece of shit...

i think iv read the 1st Chapter before, YES I DID! But iv reread it to get an idea of where i left the FF. Precisely, i love reading a chunk of chapters all together, never having to wait for your updates which takes atleast a YEAR :P DUH!

Wasn't it truly a roller coaster? I mean f**k, the whole chapter had so many effing scene, reminiscence of the past and the present, i do hope your readers got a gist of what was happening here you know? 🤣 I pity them if they didnt quite understood it. Luckily, i managed to get through the reading coz i know the storyline and concept...Wait no, am still a tad bit confused of where you will be heading...i wanna be shocked and surprised...so i will let the whole suspense overwhelm me in the upcoming chapters. I know you've told me so many times of what is happening...well there it lies, YOU'VE TOLD ME SO MANY TIMES AND IN SO MANY DIFFERENT VERSIONS, that i no longer know what is your actual outcome of the characters :|

The Armaan Malik & Karan Malik mystery is making me edgy at times...hell i love the villainous Karan, and after reading the 1st chap again,iv remembered why i was so rooting for him bad when you narrated and started BTLOD. Feels like reading more about him...

The first chapter, is just opening of all mysteries what will happen...and I LOVE You for writing it so beautifully, i love dark Karan Mallik, so f**king mysterious and the whole atmosphere gives you a chill while reading it and comes through your words penned down...they just keep you hooked. Your descriptions have always been terrific, you're just too versatile at it now.

I won't praise you so much just here itself, iv to read chapter 2 and 3 now (;

UMM

LET ME THINK

I D K Now

DAMN f**k

If i thought the first chapter was a roller coaster, WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS ONE? After reading it i think my head has gone thick with emotions and frustrations. Can you see me literally pulling my hair? That was definitely not the chapter i read on skype? I don't ever remember Naina making an appearance, i just remember Shilpa meeting Karan in that room. I thought i was going through some work i already read but WOOT! Iv been banged,hanged and i dunno-what-else while reading this chapter. Am so so happy you changed it though. I do not think it would have been appropriate to make Karan-Shilpa meet so suddenly. Now am waiting for magnimous entry of Karan Malik- the antagonist Hero. HA! Now how to describe this whole chapter? There have been shocking revelations in this whole chapter and now when i go back at your rant before you posted about how shock we would be? You were so f**king right...

When i read Armaan was already married am like WHAAA! *Mouth open, my eyes hovering for some great seconds on the word...WHOOSH! And it was just the beginning, i knew Armaan was supposedly doing this under his Mother's command, hell i was even suspecting Atul-Rahul to be part of this whole game, but nevertheless reading it was a lot new to whatever the hell was going on. I've loved reading this, i think am loving the whole suspense. This doesn't look like any typical romantic read...it's beyond anything. And when i tell you am hooked...am so f**king damn HOOKED. I was in a trance, in awe with all the manipulations and deceits going on. Yet, i know whatever we are being told now, i know there is a larger picture above it we have yet to know. I think we will be shocked again? Wont we? I do not think its all here, theres much more to shock our insides...damn damn damn. You're a mindblowing writer and iv no doubt you will bring twists on twists (which is actually your forte (; ) and i know you will keep us reeling with questions.

Oh btw all of this is happening in a flashback right? Coz first chapter started off with Karan-Armaan/Shilpa confrontation, i guess everything goes to the flashback now?

I had to add also, after reading 1st Chapter and then 2nd, iv seen a huge improvement of writing (ok am not finding the good words, dont get me wrong when i use 'improve' because you're already one of my most fav writers that fascinates me so much). What i mean is when i read the first couple of paragraphs of 2nd Chapter, there this deep writing of yours that makes go WOAH! I Had to read cautiously and carefully to get them filtered my brain coz this was a genius piece of work there. Your descriptions were AH-MAZING! Esp the first paragraph was def brilliant, i love the way you write man, just like a novelist. KUDOS on that!

OH OH OH! I had mention something, i love a great story, and i like great plot with great characterization. i love my hero to be totally Alpha in however shade they are painted. I enjoy reading a completely out of the box female character that makes me love her. And along all of this i enjoy reading also a great mastermind vamp/villain in any story or movie. I wonder if anyone likes Naina. Actually not like Naina...but the character appears to be very conniving and fascinating. I love vamps. Haha! i think i love their wicked thoughts, they have smart way of talking, and delivering dialogues and am hoping to see more of Naina in the story...coz i loved her presence here throughout. The way she was portrayed got me grinning at times. Hopefully i'll see a revengeful Shilpa and not the girl who'll go crying in the corner. I think i was torn when Naina was throwing her the reality bytes on her face all throughout...DEF A GREAT BETRAYAL! What a ploy! I hope she comes as an opposing opponent and meeting Naina face to face in all this game.

Now off the chapter 3 and i can't wait to see the story unfold.

GOD Like Naina said, she cant wait for Shilpa to meet Karan, i think way too excited too!

Eeekz! bring it on babe...

Karan is bad person

Poor Shilpa

Armaan can't cheat her 🥺

My ArSh i don't know but i feel really sad for ArSh bcoz now i m in love with them bcoz of ur story 😭

Rida pls write some stories on ArSh also 🤢

I miss ArSh alots

Ur a great writer 👍🏼 i read many stories of ur all r just superb 🥳

Thanks for pm dear

Waiting for next part

O.M.F.G

Everything was just superbly written and everything superbly executed. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT.

And yup just like i was imagining, Karan's appearance was totally just like his personality. DANGEROUS! I don't think the word dangerous even justifies the way his every poise, mannerism, or body language were powerfully impacting my brain. And while i was reading all of this, you know what thought struck my mind? This piece of work my dear girl, would someday turn into a movie. I was visualising it all in my brain. Like f**king shit, KSG & SA would the main characters without doubt and i could see this work of yours being reworked in a more professional way in the future. Damn Karan's character is so f**king interesting, am sure he would swoon the large mass ;) i will buy the copyrights if you don't make it, kay? ;P

Next would Shilpa's escape. OMFG I Love that bit. I really enjoy a smart thinking brain getting active to escape from a trap, this thought directed me to How My Michael Scofield was a darn smart ass of a hero in Prison Break. GOD I LOVE THAT MAN and Neal's unrivalled tricks in White Collar. I was literally hoping for Shilpa to get through her plan. I like the ideas of the batteries. Wow i didnt think of that one now. When she landed, i was triumphing with her too xD she giggled,i giggled, she laughed and so did i. Of course literally xD Okay but i thought perhaps she will bump into Karan when she landed down, but she didnt. And i was in awe with the direction of your thoughts.

Now it seems that in every chapter, theres always something bugging me? Karan & Armaan's relationship? I think they hated each other right? Am confused, has it been Karan most of the time with Shilpa in BTLOO? Armaan did love Shilpa right? I think in the description that Karan gave about Armaan having a soft spot for her made me think he really did love her. Okay i think am frustrating my brain now, am wondering when am i getting to read chapter 4 *sigh*

Perhaps after you update the 3 next chapters all at time, i shall read...till then...lemme keep wondering where is this going? what will happen?

it was superb how shilpa managed to escape from there👏

i want to c shilpa more strong

karan is dangerously dark devil

eagerly waiting to read moreee😃

n m sure armaan was in love with shilpa he wasn't acting 🤪

And Thanks For The Pm Dear 🤗

YES HE AND SHILPA NEED TO MEET SOONISH AND ASKHDFKK

I'm too sleepy to leave a proper comment but I will leave one soon and update this soon :p

and waiting for next part

plzzz update soon

RUGOO YOU GAVE ME A HEARTATTACK WITH ALL THAT PYAAARSS🤣

I should be updating within two days. You guys said I updated so quickly last time so I was bidding my time. Next update should be up by tomorrow or day after. I am actually babysitting my brothers who are not babies and drive me wild, since mom dad are not here. So ain't getting time to sit down and type. 🤣

Tomorrow, or tonight, or day after tomorrow I promise.😳

THAAANKYOUUU <333333333 ILOVERSYOUALL.

I'll update soon Sivi.😳