Arhi SS Chamkili. Link to thread#2 and AN on Pg-135. 01-7-14. - Page 34

Originally posted by: mem1

First of all ...OMG... This is a first for me! a post dedicated to me... woohooo!!!! Thanks dearie! makes me feel special... like I won the Olympic gold for stalking... 😛

Actually I am thankful to you for reading my stories and then taking time to like and comment as well... this dedication was actually dil se.😊

Now for the update: Loved it. Khushi was feeling guilty because she met the guy she had a crush on when she was 10. that is beyond hilarious... and she feels that way, while her husband's ex-girlfriend is living in their house... How Naive can she get???

Then again that is Khushi, right? The show started with the concept of two people from two very different worlds and having drastically opposite beliefs coming together. They showed it well until the marriage and maybe even until the remarriage(though there were some issues, but then they kind of lost track I always felt that the Shital track had a lot of potential had it been handled well, but alas! Anyway here I am trying to explore that angle. In Arnav's world even pre-marital relationship don't matter while according to Khushi's upbringing liking someone and not getting married to him is in itself a big stigma. They need to find a middle-path somewhere, he has to realize that he cannot be insensitive to Khushi's need of security and she needs to understand that what happened in the past should better remain there and its the present and future that really matter, where without any doubt he loves her.😊

You got us all worked up with the Chocolate syrup, only to have it thrown out of the window!! WHAT THE!!!

I know and I was ready for all the rotten eggs and tomatoes but you guys r just so sweet that u let me off the hook😳

But you are right... when there is such intense love, who needs Chocolate syrup! but then again,. us fans wouldn't have complained if some was introduced ...😉

I'll definitely give it a try sometime, but the thing is that I am not very comfortable writing actual sexual scenes, sensuality I can handle... sex I am not too sure, it might have seemed very immature had I attempted anything of that sort😳

I am totally confused about Sheetal. you say that she might not be all bad in this story, but all her thoughts so far do not give me a good feeling about her. She is living in her ex-boyfriend's house, and reminiscing about times she spent with him (or wished she had) , and is actually rejoicing at the possibility of him getting mad at his wife. I am surely not getting good vibes...

Well I said she won't be the classical bitchy vamp you know like in the show, she was all confused and a flustered in one episode and then I did all this just for money in the next... I found it very abrupt. Well I am just trying to make her character a bit more realistic and jealousy and desire are just humanly emotions, what matters is what u make of these emotions, ... she might try to stir some trouble up, who knows?😉

BTW Good luck for your exams. You know exams should always be priority. We can wait, (hard as that might be ). You need to concentrate and ace those exams. then come back with bonus updates afterwards.

Thanks a lot for your wishes dear and considering the kind of lazy person that I am wishes r the only thing that have been saving me until now and I hope they continue to do so. Btw, I am slightly crazy too so u never know when I feel like writing and u guys get a new chapter much before expected😉

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

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Sheetal's thought process bothers me somewhat. But I can sort of understand where she is coming from. Obviously she fell in love with Arnav back at Harvard but he was pretty cold back then. I like how he told her up front not to have expectations of the relationship.

I loved the Arnav & Khushi scene in the bedroom. How she hid from him and he knew just where to look. Khushi's childhood crush story was cute, she actually felt guilty for having a small crush!! She is so innocent.

Can't wait to see how you take this forward. Hope you address Aarav's issue soon. How long will Sheetal live with them??

Thanks for the dedication!! I'm glad we got you to page 50, you deserve it!

Update soon.

Originally posted by: Annie12

Excellent update after such a long time. Totally loved it..

Can't wait to see twists with samay and Sheetal,,

Funny how everyone with an S initial is turning out to have negative shades.,!!