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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

First of all ...OMG... This is a first for me! a post dedicated to me... woohooo!!!! Thanks dearie! makes me feel special... like I won the Olympic gold for stalking... 😛

Now for the update: Loved it. Khushi was feeling guilty because she met the guy she had a crush on when she was 10. that is beyond hilarious... and she feels that way, while her husband's ex-girlfriend is living in their house... How Naive can she get???

You got us all worked up with the Chocolate syrup, only to have it thrown out of the window!! WHAT THE!!!

But you are right... when there is such intense love, who needs Chocolate syrup! but then again,. us fans wouldn't have complained if some was introduced ...😉

I am totally confused about Sheetal. you say that she might not be all bad in this story, but all her thoughts so far do not give me a good feeling about her. She is living in her ex-boyfriend's house, and reminiscing about times she spent with him (or wished she had) , and is actually rejoicing at the possibility of him getting mad at his wife. I am surely not getting good vibes...

BTW Good luck for your exams. You know exams should always be priority. We can wait, (hard as that might be ). You need to concentrate and ace those exams. then come back with bonus updates afterwards.

Edited by mem1 - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: mem1
<font color="#9900CC" size="2">me either... hope we don't get kicked off IF!</font>🤣

<font color="#990099">WOOHOOO we are on 50... now update quickly before it goes to 51! </font>

I don't think we'll be kicked off for 4 messages!! 😆

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Res

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Sheetal's thought process bothers me somewhat. But I can sort of understand where she is coming from. Obviously she fell in love with Arnav back at Harvard but he was pretty cold back then. I like how he told her up front not to have expectations of the relationship.

I loved the Arnav & Khushi scene in the bedroom. How she hid from him and he knew just where to look. Khushi's childhood crush story was cute, she actually felt guilty for having a small crush!! She is so innocent.

Can't wait to see how you take this forward. Hope you address Aarav's issue soon. How long will Sheetal live with them??

Thanks for the dedication!! I'm glad we got you to page 50, you deserve it!

Update soon.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Res

Edit!!

Great chapter!! Oh my Arnav shows up and Khushi has already left, and he finds out that she hasn't shared her marital status..Didn't he vouch earlier never to get angry with her again 😆

It's ok! We love Arnav so he can get away with that! I loved the scene of Khushi hiding in the cupboard and was glad you used it! Loved his concern and compassion when he thought she was referring to Shyam!

The scene with her guilt about her previous crush was quite cute as well ..

Wonder what is cooking in Sheetal's mind for her next move...

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Guys the chapter has been updated on my blog but apparently IF is suddenly acting all bitchy with me and is not allowing me to post it here... some invalid word issues... and its really screwing with my head. Please go and read it on my blog if u want to read it now but do comment here as well, while I try to fix watever the problm is

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

GUYS JUST CHECK THE RESERVED SECTION IN THE NEXT 2 MINUTES, i SOLVED THE ISSUE😊

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

wicked update...loving the story...continue soon

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

I just did not get it why khushi did not want to let people know at work that she is asr' wife.. May be you do not mind sheetal but she is the one girlfriend of asr whom I hate . Why asr did not taken any action and make sheetal move out of RM...and I feel he did not take Samay seriously ...I think arnav of your story is a jerk who need to learn not to take his wife for granted and he had little shock regarding khushi but he need to have some more...waiting for next chapter

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Srija Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: ranogill
I just did not get it why khushi did not want to let people know at work that she is asr' wife..
Okay, the update was getting long, so I had to shift this one in the next part, so you'll get to know the reason in the next update.
May be you do not mind sheetal but she is the one girlfriend of asr whom I hate . Why asr did not taken any action and make sheetal move out of RM...
Okay first of all thanks a lot for giving me an honest opinion, Sheetal from the show, believe me when I say I hated her, that is why I have repeatedly pointed that this story takes off from the basket-ball match and before that Sheetal just seemed uncomfortable and a little mysterious, not really a vamp. So just have a little patience I have something in mind, but then I did warn everyone earlier that the story would now take a little unconventional turn... but please just wait and watch and once again this Sheetal is different from that of the show.
and I feel he did not take Samay seriously ...
Khushi had a crush on Samay in her 4th grade and she was feeling bad about it, so being the mature and nice, modern husband he tried making her comfortable about it. Also the chapter of Samay has just begun, a lot more is to come😉
I think arnav of your story is a jerk who need to learn not to take his wife for granted and he had little shock regarding khushi but he need to have some more...waiting for next chapter
This story is actually about that, both the protagonist commiting mistakes and then learning from them. Khushi has to learn to be more secure of herself and of her relationship with Arnav and Arnav needs to learn that he cannot take Khushi for granted, that will all happen in time

FInally, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, and sharing what you honestly thought of the update, such comments give me an insight into my own story... hope to see u on the next update as well😊.