MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Thank You Fiza Di..!!!

This is one one the best Birthday present i had ever got..!!!

oo..My my my...

What a update...

i just want to kiss your hands...

for writing such a deep...emotional...and beautifull part...

You had certainly made me speechless..!!!

For a while infact..i myself started dreaming about the arrangements..

Mayank had done for Nupur..!!

And i was so much mesmerized..

it was so so..so so...beautifull...

I wish i could be there in place of Nupur...

I really liked the quote...

True...

Each and every word of it...depicting their...inner..emotions...

Awesome...!!!

I am now little worried about the future...

as now a nightmare...

and for me their worst nightmare has entered...

I don't want the moment they are sharing with each other...

Should end...

Finally Mayank has entered her...penetrated inside her...

And she has finally allowed him ...

I won't be able to see...the a bad sight entering in their short-term lived dream...

update was just simply awesome...

loved..

Love you..

*Hugs*

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

wow Fiza what a mind blowing part
it was tooo good that i cant explain how much i loved it...

GOSH the date was so dreamy-while i was reading it, i just felt i lost in mayur dream land.
Hats off to mayank.the respect , the love that he showered on Npur was just fabulous..
i wanna HUG for such a beautiful update.
the effort that u put on this update was really outstanding..

i m so much happy for mayur today. finally nupur got what he deserve ... she is an angel and she deserve all the happiness o the world though the realty is very cruel and at the end u gave a hint of it..

though last line was quite sad but i know mayank gonna make everything right for Nupur
awesome part
keep it up...

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

i lobed loved loved it...
soo dreamy...
it indeed felt like a fairytale...
per us manhoos ko abhi ana tha ufff...
do write soon...

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

wow the start was amazing

loved ur description

just beautiful

but the last line was truly a nightmare

continue soon😊

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

res...plz remind me to unres

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

beautiful & dreamy updt fiza
waiting for next updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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...EhSaas...

@...EhSaas...

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

beautiful part

after living fairy tale its time to face reality for both of them let see how will they handle 😊

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deepika

@deepa0507

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

sorry for late comment fiza di its superb update i loving it

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: drmaha
res

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it was wowww
i mean mayank did all this for nupur hayei maar jao... its so heaven,y beautiful

lovely fiza..

thanks for ths update but now m eagerly waiting for the nxt chap as i can imagine would be more awsome one 😉

🤗

thanks alot jani
this update was the one i was so worried about...
but glad u liked it so much...
awsome one i cant promise next to be.. but this will wht will make things perfect for them