MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent update
loved mayur a lot
tasnim. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
one of the best updates of this ff
API it was fabulous
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cascade- OMG itna beautiful pdate wo bhi itnaaa jaldi
By GOD manaa parega tujhsi best ho jani
GOSH mayur were in date.
and finally nupur ne apnitaraf se , apni he marji se , apni he khushi k liye - maaynk k liye saza. she went for shaooping just to make herself special to mayank.
iloved the way she was sooo much excited abt their date.
loved the way she was preparing herself for maaynk ..
hahahaha both of them were damn nervous as if they r teenager who used to go on date by without any knowledge fof their parents...LOL LOL

vaise tere plan kya hai??
mayank ne kaisa date ki arange ki yaar
uff tu bhi naa- alwz ended update at crucial point.
ab tou main yehi sochti reh janugi kya ho sakta hai, kya hone wale hai etc
errr i wanna kill u- jaldi update kar- kamini
anyway i also loved gnjan-mayu- nupur scene
very niceupdate jani
awesomeee

do update next part soon
take care
MAY ALLAH BLESS u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update di..love the date..LOL Enjoyed reading this part...
MN scenes are cute..and the way Nupur teases Mayank is really funny and I can imagine Mayank's expressions after that..LOL

Do cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

MY Rply to u all

@ jaya.. u shocked me with the length of ur comment.. I think this change has cum with the wirter born in u'lol'( jis k pm ab se mjhy milna chaiy) ab pata chala kasa lagta hai tu read those cimments n each n evry word mean whole word ' and im so gald to see ur in depth analysis of the ff and so much of apprecitiaion ' I m sum how now a bit relax abt the fact that u all have understood them so well thanku so much dear


hehehe meri laziness bahut famous hain comment ko lekar 😆

na change is not becoz of i start writing and i know how as a writer u want response from ur reader but whenever i comment i want to comment meaningfully not randomly 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm update Fiza
Loved the bond between maynak and Gunjan
thanks to u for writing wonderful FF's itzz because of ur and other's Amazing FF's due to which we are steal living MJHT
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing updts fiza
loved gunur interaction...waiting for mayur date
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

😲😲😲

leee...yeha kyun End kiya!!!! kyun!! kyunnn!!!!!!!!
ab main ageka kese parhungi
ase crucial point par kyun rok liya mujhe!!!!
ab main hostel ja kar kese parhungi??? sare mujhe lab mein dekh kar hasenge jab main next update waha parhungi woh bhi with a huge grin while blushing! sab kahenge pagal ho gayi hain yeh ladki
chalo koi nhi...waise bhi yeh toh normal hain akhir ghar par bhi sab yehi toh kehte hain 😆

when u asked me of double update i was telling faru that she will regert that.. cause jaha mein end kero gi ... i wish i could upate but kafi kam time tha... yaar tum agar lappy hai tu us per save ker lay ana.. repo ko khatary mein na dalo.. ghar tak tu thik hai... hostel mein if u start to blush n smile reading sumthing sab ko yaqeen hojay ga😆

ek pal ke liye toh laga ke sab garbar ho jayega!
i mean jab Gunjan ayi i was like!!! Areyyy Gunjannn ufff
kya timing hain...😛😆🤣
bt then Thank God! ke yeh gunji bhi Parichey ki Gunji ki tarha nikli pehle toh galat waqt par tapak parti hain then sahi se chali bhi jati hain 😆

kyun gunjan has always been suportive to mayank.. she suprted last time too...

Awesome part API
i sooo love u for Everything
i mean meri wajah se apko itni jaldi update karna para n apne kiya bhi so Thank u sooo much
love u to d coreee
it was sooo Beautiful
i m speechless!!! accha hasna mat ke itna sab bol kar keh rahi hain speechless 😆

its oky dear anything for u...
😆 nhi mein nhi has rahi ... mjhy tumhara asay wala spechles hona acha lagta hai

bt srsly!!!!!!!!! i sooo damn loved it
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...
the way Nupur agreed was really cute n then the way she putted effort was so awesome
i loved it!!!
n m sure she must hv looked sooo pretty
waise even i was shock for a sec ke apki Nupur n date par red 😲 jyada tar toh White hi hota hain na 😉😆😳
bt awww...she was behaving like a teenage girl n it was so nice to see her behaving like that.
nhi na mein thori date per ja rahi thi.. per han red tu bulkil nhi hoga... u just donot like red..kya kero... cant imagine sumthing on it...


loved it...
n loved Mayank alwaysss
n OMG!!!!!!!!
that locket wala part was sooo damnnn Romantic han...
Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was awesomsttt
n i loved every single thing abt this part n this ff
loved it to BITS!!!
loved it to d coreee
will wait eagerly for that Date...😉
n han Blush thora kam karana mujhe bt han it had to be Damnnn Romantic😉 😆 ☺️
loved it sooo much..😳
will miss commenting like this n taking the 1st place whc is mine!!!!!!!! 😳 always!!!!
bt will try to cmnt on every part for sureee
loved it to Bits
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Take care...May ALLAH bless u forever...Ameen.




i will miss ur comments like this.. full of expressions n so much details...
i have made it a bit romantic its more at wht she is feeling than anything else...

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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks alot dear


Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

ab kya tha yeh bhi likh deti.. agle 2-3 dinon tak sar pakadkar baiththi toh nahin ...


Waise I loved the way, Gunjan showered warmth on Nupur.. and MN scenes are always a pleasure to read...

Beautifully written.. 😊

P.S... itni khushi dikhao mat.. Only God knows, when I'll disappear again 😊





dekh mein tujhy poray 8 din tak laka diya
thanks alot for liking her... she will be a mere support for mayank in all this...
glad ur enjoyingit
thnku

PS: thori dair k liyan hi sahi khush tu hony do

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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks alot



thanku


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