MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 37

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Mera Update kab milega??????
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Originally posted by: -Anila-

Mera Update kab milega??????




give me few mins 😊
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Hi guys

Thanku so much.. the major reason to ask u question was that whether ur getting mayanks; character or not and I really love the fact that my readers are intelligent enough to get in to the skin of character..

Thank u for answering them.. have rplyed to u all

Its not short but yes comparatively it is…

This one is for u Anu… u will get ur next one early to.. I will try my best

Fiza

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there are two motivating force, love and fear.. fear makes u pull away from life and love makes u open to all that life has to offer with excitement passion and acceptance

John lennon

Chapter: 13

Sarah: sir what should I prepared for lunch…

Nupur: aray yeah behanji phir agai… yeah meray pcihy asay ghoomty hai jasay is ko shak ho mein gahr per dackka dal do gi .. haina.. tum ko yeahi masal hai…

Nupur was mischievously saying all this and mayank couldn't hold his laugh at the expression Sarah was givng her..

Mayank: nupur… he control his breath…. Saraah u can take this day as off…

Sarah: thanku sir..

Nupur: tum please is ki chute nhi ker sakty

Mayank: who will manage the house… she is a reliable person and a very good caretaker too… so donot worry..

Nupur: worry.. I don't feel comfortable around her… it seems like… all the time sumone is on me.. Hovering

She sat on the sofa.. and he dropped himself too…

Mayank: hmm so sum one has people phobia..

Nupur: err… no not like that.. but yes.. I donot know..

Mayank: wht.. common u can speak..

Nupur: aha really .. I didn't knew I have tongue that can talk

Mayank: I m not saying u cant talk… I am saying u donot speak…

Nupur: I m not use too speaking…

Mayank: can I ask u sumthing…

Nupur: Mr. Sharma is curious…

Mayank: if ur not feeling like saying such its oky…

She can feel abit hurt in his voice..

Nupur: mayank its not like that.. its just

Mayank: u donot trust me…. N u donot have any reliability or feeling of being in this all… n this oky.. so u donot have to explain anything.. mayb I m demanding to much .. and getting very very curious.. will try not to behave such…

Nupur : mayank

Mayank: forget it na… I haven't taken a day off for this.. lets go sumwhere..

Nupur: out.. are u sure. With me…

Mayank: yes I am sure.. get ready..

Nupur: wht should I wear I mean..wht kinda place we are going…

Mayank: a kinda place where dress code is not important… just be urself .. wear anything… lets go on a walk…. Its beautiful out there… you actually donot need to change even..

Ahh how can she be herself.. she doesn't know wht is herself… all these long years she has forgotten and have nevr given chance to be herself… she doesn't know wht is this being in herself…

Nupur: u want be to go out in these tracks…

Mayank: ya so wht .. btw I donot like these tracks of urs…

She was taken a back with it… oh so it does matter to him.. she is being stupid to think it doesn't…

Nupur: I am sorry I was just..

Mayank: I like princes ones more… he said with a smirk

Her jaw droped and she hide the smile

Nupur: ur being to much into those.. aren't u.. stop teasing me with them..

Mayank: I m not teasing you… I actually love u in those.. it reminds me of u.. rather than of wht u desperately try to be… so stop trying tht… and stop giving me those amuse look.. and go and get ready….

……….

It was beautiful, cold and amzing… they walk to the edge of the mountain bypassing the track between the trees… the voice of birds, the dry leaves , the synch of there feet's, all was making it serne..

He was quite and observing her, she was smiling..

Mayank: wht.. he asked smilingly..

Nupur: I always loved this… the clouds cuming down touching you… the weather…

Mayank: u haven't been here …

Nupur: all in the world only Seattle doesn't have this weather … you know when I was young.. me and adi use to run throw the woods and mom will always scold us so much.. wht if sumthing happen to u.. n all ..she chuckled in her thoughts….

He looked at her surprise… it's the first time he heard sumthing about her… herself… sumthing about her life… he wish to ask who is Adi yet he donot want to interrupt .. he wants to listen and make her believe that he is listening and here… she has such a beautiful expression her face.. as if she has went really into those times

Nupur: its similar to shimla… though it was more beautiful there

This was shocking India… she has been to India..

Mayank: u have been to india.. u .. u belong there..

Nupur: han…. Ya…. Ya .. I was there… never belong there… I am sorry I m making you bored…

Mayank: sigh… nupur.. I really wanna listen if u want to say…

Nupur: forget it …it's a gloomy subject…

Mayank: can you forget it…

Nupur: sigh ….can you forget your life.. mayank I like escaping from there.. I like it.. at least not when I am enjoying sumthing.. after.. after I donot remember how long….

He can only smile .. whenever she cums with a confession and so bluntly .. he feel amaze… he feel hopeful…

Mayank: its not that I want u to remind wht evr has happen… it just..it just

Nupur: ur curious..

Mayank: no I am not.. I just want to be part of sumthing nobody is..

She shuddered a bit, did she have sumthing in her that nobody has share…. Yes there is… she herself… actually self.. she hasn't share to anyone…

Nupur: she smiled… u know after ages I said Adi…

Mayank: a friend..

She chuckled..

Nupur: no he was my younger brother..

Mayank: he is….

Nupur: donot know .. now he must have forgotten me… he might not even remember I ever exists in his life…

Mayank: it cant be possible

Nupur: it can… it must have been the case… it must have been…

Mayank: u never want to go back…

Nupur: there is no going back….

Mayank: than lets move forward…

He forward her his hand and she looked at him in daze… and he nooded his head trying to make her believe in what he is saying….

Nupur: u want to jump off the mountain .. forward is off the mountain u see…

U pointed to the edge..

Mayank: he laughed… u escape… ur a escapist… lady I m certainly not at all taking about this.. and u so know tht… but than… lets move forward… on the track too..

Moving her hand in his hand she cant make her self not to admire how perfectly they enterwinded with each other ..it wasn't sweet.. it was dam romantic… he knew she was continuously stealing glance of there hand…

It always amaze him.. whenever she do such little girl things.. it make him laugh.. she is to innocent… and than againg it leave him in a daze… how can a s**t be innocent.. this make all of herself.. imagining her such more n more difficult…

Nupur: OMG… she said with her lips shivering with cold wind…. Its scary mayank… yet its so beautiful…

Mayank: most of the beautiful things in life are scary Nupur….

He said and slides is hand around her waist… she closed her eyes feeling the amazing warmth that he diffused within her.. it was heaven.. home.. wht ever.. it was to lost in…

Mayank: they are scary..

Nupur: wht do u mean… beautiful things cant be scary… they are beautiful… bus.. she looked side way to look at mayank… amuse with wht he is saying..just like a child

Mayank: wht we get scared of.. actually scared of…

Nupur: nightmares.. beast.. Heights..

Mayank: he laughed… and pecked her cheek… she is dam cute.. nupur… pagal… u donot get really scared of beast n heights n nightmares.. u do get when u saw but than its gone…

Nupur: mayank u know wht ur talking alien… please talk human…

Mayank: ur standing at the edge of mountain… and tht so in my arms… a slight push u can fall… but u aren't sacred..

Nupur: ur gone push me down… ur funny…

Mayank: so height is not scary… neither death is… yet wht scared u is the beautiful life…. The feel this place gave u…. it's the beauty we are sacred of… he turned her to face him… we are scared of love, it can destroy we know tht… its beautiful… we are scared of happiness.. it will be gone and all will b glomy.. we are scared of expressions… maybe that can make us embarrassed…. Yet all of those things when we are in them.. make us happy . make us feel beautiful… yet we are scared that when it will end wht will happen to us.. in all that we forget that its beautiful…

He placed her hairs behind her ears and she was quite stunt hearing all this.. she was lost.. but next wht he said was not in even her dreams that he will say.. she was thinking she has so well done this…but finding her self so naked and that so emotionally… he made her every cell horrified…

Mayank: ur scared nupur… u might think I donot know but I do… u r scared of the beauty… but one thing u don't know is im scared to .. as much as u r im too…

Her expressions changed to sumthing broken… she doesn't want to hear anything more from him.. he is hitting the wrong cord….. plus his this simple words made her move more near to him.. sealing his mouth with her lips…

He pulled her softly closed and kissed her back… yet she broked it abruptly and moved away.. god this girl is gonna make him go crazy.. now wht…

She shouldn't have taken the initiative.. wht the … she proved herself as one seductress.. freak..

Nupur: we should go back to home…

Mayank: he chukled… wao n here I was feeling that my philosophical side is making me kissable… she glared and he chukled… as u wish… come…

Without asking her permission he hold her hand and pulled her closed..encircling his arm around her shoulder side hugging her… she looked upto him in wht

Mayank: wht I m feeling to cold…

She chukled and he to join her…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
API!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
Thank u sooo much for updating sooo soon n that too for me...🤗
love u sooo much!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
n will be waiting for the next part 😳

Awesome update
loved it sooo much!!!!
though it was a lil short in length bt it had sooo much to take in this part
i mean i really loved the depth of this update
Beautiful!!!!
Beautifully written
Hats off to u Api
i just loved this part
it was sooo Beautiful
i loved the way Nupur was talking abt Sarah 😆
she was damn cute
n Gosh! This Mayank was the Super Cute Adorable n A Perfect Lover in this part
i mean i sooo loved him in this part
i loved the track part 🤣
then mostly...the way for the 1st time Nupur talked abt her beautiful memory was the Best!!!
Awww...so she had a lil brother n a lovely mother...sigh!
i wanna know her past soon
n i wish Mayank wud be able to make her open up with him n talk all abt her family n good memories n what led her here...Sigh!
bt Gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u wrote sooo Beautifully
i mean i loved what u said abt what They r Scared of i mean its not only them its almost every person at heart..
Sigh!!!!!!!! it was sooo sooo sooo Beautiful
i mean the entire atmosphere u created was sooo serene i just loved it to Bits!!!!!
This was again another awesome part
n i love u for this n for everything
lobed it sooo much
the ending was again cute n adorable
it was just...
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L... Sigh!
loved it
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all..
Thank You..
Thank you

Thank you so much.. for updating...
I just loved this part...!!!

Nupur not liking Sarah..!!! or she feels uncomfortable when she is surrounded by people..!!! Mayank is somewhere right..!!!

NOW That was a shock..!!! a eaveal to Nupur's reality that she has a little brother also.Adi..!!!
There must be a past behind the question that did he remembers her or not.!!!

Like Mayank even i also wonder...How such a innocent girl came into this business...!!
Mayank was indeed right..!!!
they are escapist they scared to feel love..
they are scared to live a life their heart want...
they scared with beautifull emotions and feelings around them..
they scared that might they could fall for each other..
and i liked it when confronts their fears infront of her it was needed damm needed...

awesome part Fiza Di

Love you so much
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update dear

Liked it
Do continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg omg

cant tell u how beautiful those part is.. loved it...

she is uncomfortable with crowd hmmm

m sure there is a past which made her go inside this shit .. m sure mayank will let her out of this ...


lovely

thanks fo rthis beautiful part 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update maria n adi is nupur younger brother n she belong to shimal in india nice yaar so why she leaving here in america yeh ff to aur bhi interested hota jaraha hai jaldi se uske past ke bare main update karna ok

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