MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 36

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

amazing update

mayank and nupur for me is fairy tales character

mayank like prince charming and nupur a princes prison in a tower with cruel step mother and sister

like ; i loved everything in this story so far

not liked ; jab hoga tab bata doon gi 😛

thanks alot dear

i so loved ur description of mayur
thanks alot

thik hai i m waiting for ur critism too

Originally posted by: shafyyy

Awesome Part Beautifully written Fiza Di

It's really so cute and pleasent part..

after so long you have updated..keenly waiting for this part...

everything thing was beautifully described..Nupur's inner feelings Myanak's towards Nupur..

from head to toe everything word was awesome..!!!

The way Mayank embraced her to protect her

I just falling in love with Mayank again and again...

i am sorry abt lateupdates its just im not being able to put words rightly

thanks for liking it ... glad u felt there emtions in it

I think it's good..if they are becoming selfish for their whole life..!! they have deprived of those feelings which they feel around each other and if getting selfish they could live their dream as their reality then let it be...

Mayank is one of the sweetest yet adorable gentle man i had ever seen...

and the way they shared a sweet and soft moment together was really very beautifull...

i am sum how very surpirsed the way u all took mayanks character.. he is grey in all manners n still u all can justify his evry deed is amzing n the make me feel sgreat tht u all lovehim tht much...

i agree with u life makes u selfish n here if he is he has his reasons.. yet its doent make him be selfsih with her

For the first time she blushed no other man had able to made her feel like this they way Mayank does...!!! Great part..

i just love them from the core of my heart..!!

I had fallen in love with Mayank...He is so cute and sweet persona... I had ever seen

Awesome.. please do continue soon

1. can u please describe mayank n Nupur briefly.. wht they are actually.. u think..as person.. as belives from her all miseries..

Well Mayank is a escapist who do not want to face the harsh realities but with Nupur he want to live a dream of which his heart desires to irrespective of her profession and everything..!!!

Nupur is a pure soul who is craving for the warmth of the person who could understand her and console her emotionally not ripping her physically..!!!

Both Mayank and Nupur need each other to tackle with their feelings...!!! Both are emotionally alone both get the warmth in each other presence..if we do not consider their profession or status than Mayank and Nupur according to are meant for each other as the way Nupur handles him in his worst situations so as Mayank consoles her lovingly in her nightmares...!!! A strange invisible thread is connected between them joining them pulling them towards each other

1. a thing u like, not liked.. u want in this ff.. apart frm nupur's past n romance' tht will cum soon ..

Well a think I do not like in this ff is that after few days Nupur will be back to her brutual reality and Mayank won't be able to feel her presence around him as soon as contract get's over..in every update where they share unspoken words may be neglecting the reality or thinking of reality but the biggest reality always be there that she is with him for only a month and only few days are left..I wish that this never to be end soon.

Rest I liked everything in this ff.. from the part one to part twelve..i loved each and every word..!!! So much emotions , feelings is buried in someone's heart all you need a person to whom you could share everything ,every secret without thinking that what he/she will be thinking about me because you have that confidence in yourself that this person won't leave you.. and this what i actually loved in your each part...

thanks u so much dear... the point that u marked abt the month ending is sumthing u rightly said they both are ignroing being escapist... and tht sumhow only u have in ur mind and tht great...cause further wht is cuming u will able to feel it

thanku so muh for answering n loving this ff

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

amazing update

thanku

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

nice..

thank alot

Originally posted by: tasnim.

very nice update API
abt ur questions- will try to ans later.

thanks alot jani
its oky ..u study tht is more imp

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

amazingly written
superb and light hearted update :)

thaks alot der
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Aww. beautiful. omg they kissed?

yes they did 😃

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

I think I did'nt read last part

Anyways...this part is amazing...I love this descriptive style and dialog and convo to aap acha likhti hi ho...no doubt!

Love all the time Mayank teases nupur..LOL I hope this fairytale comes to be true for nupur and she will get her prince charming.

jao tu dopara read kero...
thanks alot dear glad u liked it ..n the diffrent style too

hopes so mjh se kya umeed rekh sakty ho tum log

About your questions..hmmm..waise aap bahut questions puchte ho...but I'll love to answer 😆

kerna parta hai kya keray story ki beech mein sab sogay hain un ko jagao tu... tum jaso ko tu khas ker k... jo update read kerna bhool jaty hain😉😆

can u please describe mayank n Nupur briefly.. wht they are actually.. u think..as person.. as belives from her all miseries..

Well as everyone is saying that Mayank is an escapist...I agree but adding more that he is like an ordinary person who fears of being alone again...who fears of miseries and sorrows and wants all comfort...as Life is not a bed of roses...so he should accept that.He is alone and wants someone to sooth his heart...he found that in nupur but again he has to gather courage to face her reality!

Nupur is strong ,she is realistic just opposite to Mayank...but inside like any other girl she wants someone who would love her emotionally not physically...she found that in Mayank but again her realistic nature does'nt let her to accept it..I hope she would.

thanks for answering... n glad u all r geting him... as tht was my area of conern n reason i asked u all this question

a thing u like, not liked.. u want in this ff.. apart frm nupur's past n romance' tht will cum soon ..

I like the concept,CS and your writing of course...the flow of FF is very smooth and I like that there are no extra characters😉

I love your descriptive style with gripping convos...and flawless writing.

Thing I don't like is that both characters are now bound in their limits..I think you should made them free a bit and let us enjoy without worries.

thanku so much dear
im so glad u like it so much..
they will but that is wht this story is all abt though being fairtale it isnt onne
PS: mirror kab update hoga yaar... plsss😭

Originally posted by: Faria.

this time i wont talk abt update as it was brilliantly written as usual
i just wanna ans ur questions

mein nhi kehl rahi this is nt fair

can u please describe mayank n Nupur briefly.. wht they are actually.. u think..as person.. as belives from her all miseries..

according to me - Mayank is a dreamer. he lives in the world of fantasy... just like other ordinary person he wants to live his life with the person who will love him and as well as understand him frm her soul and heart..inspite of having everything he felt lonely in this world...it seems he is isolated frm the realty of this world.. he has the same desire like others. he also craing for love but he afraid to express it. whatever he is i must say he is good in heart and i loved the way he he make nupur to feel special...
abt Nupur - she is very much practical and strong, but still she is vulnerable and innocent. though her profession dint allow her to dream like a normal girl but she is also reverie like other who was craving for lil care and love...i know she dont want to accept it but its true

muaah.. thanks for saying he is dremer n fantic... he is actulay one... u know my area of conern is him as he is the complivated one here.. n his moves will decided the story.. thanks
glad u understand the characters so well...well tht has alwasy been with u ..u read me wel to weell

a thing u like, not liked.. u want in this ff.. apart frm nupur's past n romance' tht will cum soon ..

hahahahaa i loved everything of this FF but i want mayank to face the realty. main dekhna chati hu mayank kaise nupur ko support kare jab society us par angliya uthayegi... i want them to face the hardness of ppl.I want them to fight against those ppl who cant do nothing but bad look to girls like Nupur...

bass yehi main dekhna chati hu

sigh tht will cum... but when his nerves will be shocked frst... n he will face sumthing ... when he will wakup frm the dreamm.. tht will need call... a shocker

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

awesum update .. totally loving it!😊

abt d quesns u askd~

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it so much

can u please describe mayank n Nupur briefly.. wht they are actually.. u think..as person.. as belives

well 4 me ... i c nupur as an innocent... kinda nxt door gal types... stuck up in an wrng career/ or due 2 circumstances n all! n 4 mayank... i c him as a person who is rich bt deprived of true companion ship/ love/ or missd a family kinda thng.. both r incomplete in sum or d other sense.. tryin 2 find dat incomplete part in each other!



a thing u like, not liked.. u want in this ff.. apart frm nupur's past n romance.. tht will cum soon ...

as of now.. nthg.. d story is goin on d rite pace... dont wanna change any thng!😊

thanska lot for answring my questions as they give me an idea of wht u are geting frm story
thanks

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

sigh tht will cum... but when his nerves will be shocked frst... n he will face sumthing ... when he will wakup frm the dreamm.. tht will need call... a shocker

i dont want to c one thing and that is sighhh Nupur went to bed with Mr. Sharma i mean mayank's DAD.somehow i've a strange feelings that u may show such thing. hahahahahah i know i m imagining a lot but kya karu - mujhe laga tou bata diya..:D

Originally posted by: Faria.

i dont want to c one thing and that is sighhh Nupur went to bed with Mr. Sharma i mean mayank's DAD.somehow i've a strange feelings that u may show such thing. hahahahahah i know i m imagining a lot but kya karu - mujhe laga tou bata diya..:D

OMG this isnt cuming not at all...🤣 tu kya kya soch rahi hai by god
noway🤢

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

OMG this isnt cuming not at all...🤣 tu kya kya soch rahi hai by god
noway🤢

thanx a lot jani
now i can breath easily..LOL

yaar aisa ho sakta tha-it was logical..LOL

anyway now i m relaxed