MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Ohh Di hard to imagine Mayur in these type of character yet u wrote so beautifully that it worked..congratulations for ur new FF.🤗

Chapter one is interesting...you noe its like an OS...a complete story in itself...don worry I'll read further😆

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
If I say that I was surprise to c a ff on this concept from u, so this will b wrong.
B coz I know that u r a brilliant and versatile writer.
I so wanted that someone write on this concept, prostitute.It is a very intense topic.Though It is bit hard to digest that Nupur and a prostitute.Bt I know u will make it beautiful.
Mayank and Nupur both r broken ans shatterd souls.

One more thing u said it is a fairy tale tu fairy tales main happy ending hoti hain😃
Or jb tum likh rahi ho tu fairytale jitni beautiful hi hogi.
Waiting impatiently for next update.
Inshallah agr Allah ne chaha tu main daily update k liye spamming karon gi😆


Array han yaad aya main tu tum se khaffa thi.U did not reply my Pm.😡😭
Edited by Irum. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Congratss for new FF fiza amzing Update jst lvd it
so u gave us new version of Mayur...
Thanxx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24


sorry aj kerni thi per sab stay kerny agy hain

tu kal kero gi oki
drfizaahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: -Anila-

OMG!! Maine abhi pm open kiya toh saw this...

Congo API 🤗🤗🤗 for ur new ff...
m sure bhttt hi jyada BEST hoga like all ur stories...IA!.
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

OMG!!!!!😲That was kind of shock for me lolzzz 😆
My API writing something like this that too such character on Nupur i mean srsly!!!!!!😲😆
well...pretty hard to digest bt i loved it like alwaysss
i mean it was actually Beautifully written
loved what Nupur said abt Mayank...
that was really Beautiful words abt someone n his feelings.
well...m dying to know abt wht made both of them to end like this ya..i hate Mayank's ex-gf..🤢
waiting for the next prt
n their story to unfold soon..😳
loved it to d coree
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗



COngrats Rocker... u rock as always

thanksa lot dear

hmm i know shocking as myself i nevr though i will write this.. tht so on mayank nupur... i have invited trouble for myself. yet ...
thanksa lot dear for liking it
and accepting this concept
things will moves fast in this ff... i hope so
thanku


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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: --jiya--

amazing fiza-ji.. loved it.. its said once in a lifetime life does give us a fairytale, and i'm so eagerly waiting to know mayur's... plz do continue this fairytale soon

🤗🤗

❤️❤️
~jiya~




thanks u so much
tht is so true.hope u like this as tht to
thanku


Originally posted by: gopi06

congrats for your new ff fiza
interesting & different concept and start
cont soon
thanks for the pm




thanku so much dear
glad u liked it and accepted it

Originally posted by: Humayra

Congrats on the new ff.

Interesting concept and chapter one was awesome..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm :)



thnaku
glad u liked it


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: kirti123

interesting

amazing start



thanks alot


Originally posted by: clustersofstar

wow eidi milli hai mujhe 😃 new ff ki sorat mein

i loving this story



thanks alot
yes eidi hai ff ki sorat mein 😉


Originally posted by: Maria.

congrats Fiza for new FF*hugs*

quite interesting start and concept
i was feeling like a seeing some movie like Chemali *one of my fav movie*
*lol*
Continue soon




thanks alot dear

glad u liked it

nah it isnt sumthing like Chemali.. it isnt near tht even

thanku



Originally posted by: crazymayurian

all the best for new stry
i jst luvd it <3
beautiful cncpt
lvly update




thanks alot dear

glad u liked it


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Posted: 12 years ago
#28


thanks a lot

Originally posted by: shafyyy

Awsome...

I a kinda...
liking..it...

Great...



thanks alot dear





thanks alot dear



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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Faria.

Phew ' fiza jani finally u posted this FF..

U know what I was eagerly waiting for this OS
yahhh I know u will be posted after finishing ur running ff-and at the end of parichay u finally posted this part

And job hi ho-u already knew a I loved this update

I loved NUPUR here. Apart frm her line of work 'I was amazed with her maturity, her sense of talking ,the way she made mayank to understand his value- in one word it was speechless..i found her very strong here...

MY FIZU is the best. I cant say how much talented u are Brilliant , mind-blowing update'u'll go a long way fiu.my best wishes and prayers alws with u'

Love ya

Take care

And do update next part''''..




ya finally i poted it... itny dino baad haina
i wasnt sure k mein ff likh pao gi is story per it was looking like more SS to me... still i m not sure
ya it was tht to MY finished Parichey left with a chapter so i was done with old

yes i know and u made me blive i can write this

thanks alot dear for ur words u know they mean a lot to me..
thanku so much jani

lov ya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

wohooo
wat an concept .wat a charecter sketch!! loved it!!!

its superb!!!

nupu is so pure!n d bloody society call her filthy!!! damn ...its mayanks GF who should call so!!!

it was beyond my imaginatyio!! when u said to me dat u r trying to wite something diff i realy did not expect dis!!! u r growing mature writer day by dat ...so beautifylly writen yar .




thanks alot dear
glad u liked the conpt its a big thing for me

lol tht is exactly its all about.. n i m glad u all can take her like this

lolz.. im glad i suprised u all... tht is one thing tht i want to do.. not to repeat the conpts n i m so happy u all give me ways to experiment
thanks alot

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